北方工业大学 公共英语教研室 石雷鹏
大学英语基础写作
Teaching Objects（说明） 课程名称：大学英语写作基础 教学目标：现象段写作 写作技巧：仿写 教学重点：现象段结构 教学难点：拟人/双重否定
四级写作概况：评卷实例 a.零分作文 b.低分作文 c.高分作文
英文题目：Bicycles——An Important Means of Transport in China 评卷实例:请思考高分作文特征 实例一 ：14分范文 英文题目：Bicycles——An Important Means of Transport in China
汉语提纲： (1)为什么自行车在中国这样普及 (2)和汽车的比较 (3)自行车在中国的前途
Bicycles are very popular in China Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- men and women, the old and the young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”.
2006-12 题目：On Spring Festival Gala 1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春晚 2.但是有人提出应取消春晚 3.我的看法
Bicycles are very popular in China Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people -- men and women, the old and the young -- ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the kingdom of bicycles”. Write by imitating
popular--> popularity 首句升级： In China, bicycles have gained great / wide popularity among the public.
In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. 简单句长难句 我爱记歌词 In my eyes, you are the most beautiful. In my eyes, no one is more beautiful than you.
Double Negation(双重否定) 结构：No ___ is/are more ____ than ___.
原句： Bicycles are very popular in China.
升级： In China, no means of transport is more popular and common than bicycles.
我能想到最浪漫的事就是和你一起慢慢变老。
Key: nothing is more attractive to me than reading 巩固练习： 2006年12月：翻译 89. Since my childhood, I have found that ___________(没有什么比读书对于我而言更有吸引力）。 Key: nothing is more attractive to me than reading
Skills: Personification Double negation Review Focus: Phenomenon Skills: Personification Double negation
Homework 2006-12 题目：On Spring Festival Gala 1.许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春晚 2.但是有人提出应取消春晚 3.我的看法