6 2011年 & 2013年Dear Sir/Madam,_________________________________________________________Look forward to your reply.Yours，Li HuaDear Peter,How are you doing?___________________________________________________________________________Look forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua
13 A. 补全前因后果例如：上周，我在网上买了一本字典。Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your online bookstore to help me learn English better/because my teacher suggested that a dictionary should be of great use in English learning.B. 适当具体化内容字典有印刷错误、缺页等。When I received the dictionary, I found that there were some misprints and pages from were missing.
14 C. 写出个人感受、评价（或后果） D. 补充功能性（交际性）语言 例如： 上周，我在网上买了一本字典。 Last week, I bought an English dictionary from your bookstore, which I thought would greatly benefit my study.字典有缺页。There are quite a few missing pages, making it impossible to use.D. 补充功能性（交际性）语言上述题目写信的目的是要求店家换货（字典）或退款，信件结尾增加一句：希望尽快得到你们的回复，以起到结束信件表达要求的作用。I would greatly appreciate it if you can give me a reply at your earliest convenience.
15 3. 重视过程性写作，一方面提高学生写作能力，一方面帮助学生进行短文改错的备考。 过程性写作教学模式最早是由Graves提出的，他认为教师应该帮助学生理解和内化写作的全部过程，强调写作过程而不是写作结果，注重在写作过程中学习写作方法，培养学生的认知能力与写作策略的运用。过程性写作模式主要包括以下几个环节：getting ideas together---planning and outlining---making notes---making a first draft---revising, redrafting---editing ---final version
17 例如：高考在即，学习日益紧张，你校准备以此为由，取消高三体育课，这引起了同学们的不满。假如你是高三（5）班班长陈辉，代表全班同学给校长写一封信，反对取消体育课，并说明具体理由、要求和建议。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Principal,I am Chen Hui, monitor of Class 5, Senior 3. I am writing to report us sutdents' opinions on our PE classes being cancelled....Looking forward to your early reply!Yours sincerely,Chen Hui环节一：审题环节二：学生写环节三：教师批改部分习作并挑选有代表性的作文给全班修改
18 It’s said that we’ll not have PE class because the college exam will be coming. We think that it’s not really good. First, the exam is coming, so we need exercise. Playing sports is beneficial to our health and we’ll be more active. Second, if we don’t have PE class, most of us will be upset and annoyed, which is harmful to our test. We suggest that we would have PE class only once a week not twice. We know you want to let we study better, but having PE class is really useful.环节一：审题环节二：学生写环节三：教师批改部分习作并挑选有代表性的作文给全班修改环节四：学生修改作文，然后同桌互改
19 it are 改为 it is want to told 改为want to tell; may easy to改为may be easy towhen cancelled PE classes改为when cancelling ...将主语do exercise改为doing exerciseit are 改为it is把用来做状语的help改为helping