Lecture 1 1.Introduction to NMET Writing 2.Sample Study

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1 Lecture 1 1.Introduction to NMET Writing 2.Sample Study
3.Introduction to our 5 Lectures 4.Cracking Essay I 赵鹄 GZNOS

2 Viewpoint 任何作文都不是考场上写的，而是考前已写好的。 Begins with ends in mind. 2008-3-7
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3 广东省高考作文 作文 论述文写作 应用文写作 IMPRESSIVE INFORMATIVE 25 POINTS 15 POINTS.
Composition 论述文写作 IMPRESSIVE 25 POINTS 应用文写作 INFORMATIVE 15 POINTS. 赵鹄 GZNOS

4 应用文写作 INFORMATIVE 15 POINTS.
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5 工欲善其事,必先利其器 [评分标准] 句子结构准确，　　 信息内容完整，　　 篇章结构连贯。　 HOW?　 赵鹄 GZNOS

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7 潜规则 有少量语法错误，单词用法不高级 但分数仍然不低 [评分标准] 句子结构准确， 信息内容完整， 篇章结构连贯。 2008-3-7
句子结构准确，　　 信息内容完整，　　 篇章结构连贯。 赵鹄 GZNOS

8 三大基本简单句 1. I do. 2. I love you. 3. You are pretty. 赵鹄 GZNOS

9 Parallel sentence structure
Compound sentence Parallel sentence structure Simple sentence 复合句 从句 并列句 简单句 赵鹄 GZNOS

10 连接两个句子的方法 1.顺接 2.转折 3.状语从句 4.用分词连接 赵鹄 GZNOS

11 1.并列句之顺接 1.最简单的连接两句子的方法是and(Dickens) 3.and又可升级成not only……but……as well
Not only…but also…的倒装公式： Not only +助动词(does/do/did)+主语+谓语，but 主语+谓语．． 或者是:Not only+be+主语．．，but 主语+谓语．． 赵鹄 GZNOS

12 not only … but(also) …as well
练习翻译：互联网给我们提供了很多信息，也加快了人与人之间的交流 这个年轻人不但聪明而且勤奋。 This young man is not only smart but also hardworking(as well). 连接两个分句，并且 not only 位于句首时，第一个分句中的主语和谓语要倒装,变成谓＋主。(部分倒装) Not only is this young man smart ,but also he is hardworking(as well). 太阳给了我们光和热。 The sun gives us not only light but heat as well. Not only does the sun give us light but also it gives us heat. 他的英语说得正确而流利。 He speaks English not only correctly but fluently as well. Not only does he speak English correctly， but he speaks it fluently as well. 赵鹄 GZNOS

13 Eg,Internet not only gives us plenty of information but it speeds up the communication among people as well. Eg,Not only does Internet give us plenty of information ,but it speeds up the communication among people as well. 赵鹄 GZNOS

14 2.并列句之 转折 最简单的，用but/yet Internet speeds up the communication among people,　but it prevents people from developing an insightful thought. But/yet可以升级成It is true that……but…… It is true that Internet speeds up the communication,　but it stops people from developing an insightful thought. It is true that there are a number of advantages of doing sth, but it also has some disadvantages. 赵鹄 GZNOS

15 造句练习 美则美矣,没有灵魂. It is true that you are beautiful,but you are empty.
书本可以帮助人们增加知识，但却让人们不开口说话。 It is true that books can help people to inquire knowledge,but it prevents them from communicating with each other. 旅游花费更高，但却可以减轻压力。 真题练习 赵鹄 GZNOS

16 假若你是李明，你周围的同学正在谈论娱乐节目“超级女生”。请根据下表提供的信息，介绍周围同学及你自己对此节目的看法
80%的观点 20%的观点 1.此节目有创意，而且很特别 2.为年轻人提供一个展示自我的舞台 3.让年轻人找到更多的自信 1.虽然节目很有创意，但会在某种程度上误导年轻人 2.让人觉得不能过努力就可以成功 赵鹄 GZNOS

17 3.两个动作的连接 1. 看是否有先后之分 before/after After SB did sth, SB did sth.
才饮长江水，又食武昌鱼 After I drank the water of Changsha,I have come to eat the fish of Wuchang. 真题1 Before you get off the bus,you had better shut the window and take your valuable things(belongings) with you. 赵鹄 GZNOS

18 前后主语一致时，可以考虑用分词 After I drank the water of Changsha,I have come to eat the fish of Wuchang. After drinking the water of Changsha,I have come to eat the fish of Wuchang. Before getting off the bus,you had better shut the window and take your valuable things(belongings) with you. After Joe left home, Rose checked her . 作用：更加言简意赅 赵鹄 GZNOS

19 4.用状语从句连接两个句子 1.状语从句的本质：用不同的连词将几个分句连接起来，表达分句间的逻辑关系。 2. 已掌握的连接词
A.表时间：When/while/after B.表原因：Because/since/as C.表目的：so that,in order that,Although D.表条件：if,unless, as long as E.让步：though, although 赵鹄 GZNOS

20 2.看两个句子间到底是什么逻辑关系,选择相应的连接词. (善于在原文中建立这种关系)
Those who come first will get the tickets since there are no more than 100 tickets. 审题的含义－－中文中隐含的逻辑关系 赵鹄 GZNOS

21 海报 深受全世界青少年欢迎的，且多年经久不衰的当代世界著名童话话剧《狮子王》在我市隆重上演。我校只分得一百张票券，先到者先得，莫失良机。有兴趣观看的同学请到各年级办公室登记，选择自己喜欢的票价的票券。 地点：广州大剧院 时间：2月1-7日晚上7：00 价格：15元，20元 赵鹄 GZNOS

22 在原文中寻找这种联系 练习1 70 percent of the students have decided to sign up to the universities in GZ because they believe that these universities are close to their homes and it is convenient for them to go home and hunt for jobs when they graduate in the future. 赵鹄 GZNOS

23 15% students would like to stay in GD province since they believe that any university in GD is not far from GZ, and they will get more choices. 赵鹄 GZNOS

24 状语从句用熟以后…………. 如果前后主语一致……. 赵鹄 GZNOS

25 简化句子：使用分词做状语,表示相应的逻辑关系(相当于一个状语从句)，或表补充说明(相当于一个并列句)
简化步骤(1)把前后连接词和主语去掉 (2)看主语和动词是什么关系，若是主动关系，就把动词改为V-ing,如果是被动关系，就改为V-ed (3)一般被简化的从句放在句首 15% students would like to stay in GD province ,because they believe (believing) that any university in GD is not far from GZ, and they will get more choices. 非谓语动词：现在分词／过去分词 赵鹄 GZNOS

26 练习1:把状语从句改为分词作状语 1. Many children drop out of school because they lack money. 2.If we take into account all the factors,we may arrive at the conclusion that mandatory retirement is unacceptable. 3.Some animals can enjoy better living conditions if they are kept in zoos. 4.When I was asked if I agreed with you,I said yes. 赵鹄 GZNOS

27 Founded by ZZD, a viceroy of GD and GX,GY,which is famous,has a history of 118 years.
GY,which is famous and was founded by ZZD,who was a viceroy of GD and GX,has a history of 118 years. Popular among teenagers all over the world,the play Lion King,which is still hot after so many years (and which is popular amony teenagers..),will be put on in our city at 7：00 from Feb 1st to Feb 2nd. 赵鹄 GZNOS

28 练习2,表伴随 是你多么温馨的目光，教我坚毅望着前路，盯瞩我跌倒不应放弃
You teach me to be strong-minded, telling me that I should never give up when falling down. 千呼万唤始出来，犹抱琵琶半遮面 After coming out, she covered her half face with her lute. Eventually she came out, covering her half face with her lute. 儿童相见不相识，笑问客从何处来 The children can not recognize me, asking me where I come from. 赵鹄 GZNOS

29 总结：连接句子的Ｎ种方法 提醒： 千万注意前后主语要相同 1.用and not only……but(also)……as well
2.用but /yet 或者是 It is true that……but…. 3.用after/ before 连接两个动词(简化形式) 4.用各类状语从句——从题目中寻找这暗含的关系 6.分词作状语,表相应的逻辑关系，或者起补充说明作用 赵鹄 GZNOS

30 你是李华，申请到一家外资企业工作．对方要求用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的基本情况．短文应包括下表所列全部内容．
姓名 李华 出生年月 １９８８年２月 学历 光明小学 出生地 中国广州 广州市第六中学 主要课程 语文，数学，英语，物理，化学，电脑 特长 英语，电脑（去年在全校电脑竞赛中获第一名） 业余爱好 游泳，滑冰，集邮，流行音乐 赵鹄 GZNOS