One day my parents went to work in the fields and my little sister and Ar Fu followed. While my parents were working, my sister walked to the river and Ar Fu followed her. She saw a beautiful flower on the bank of the river, she wanted to pick it. She fell into the river. When Ar Fu saw that, it barked and jumped into the river quickly.
One day, followed by my little sister and Ar Fu, my parents went to work in the fields. While my parents were working, my sister , with nothing to do, walked to the riverside nearby with Ar Fu. At the sight of a beautiful flower on the river bank, she wanted to pick it. However, she fell into the river. Seeing that Ar Fu barked and jumped into the water as soon as possible.
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to improve your passage using -ing -ed -with to improve your passage
I. -ing, -ed The cat crept slowly through the grass. The cat was watching the mouse the whole time. The gold was hidden under the ground. It was safe for many years.
Rewrite following sentences There is a girl. She is sitting between us. 2. This is a book. The book was bought yesterday. There is a girl who is sitting between us. This is a book which was bought yesterday.
从天空中看， While he was walking in the street, he met an old friend. 3. 走在大街上，他遇见了一个老朋友. While he was walking in the street, he met an old friend. Walking in the street 4. _________________, the city looks beautiful. 从天空中看， When it is seen from the sky, the city looks beautiful. Seen from the sky
由于不知道他的电话，他无法与Tom取得联系。 Not knowing his telephone number, he can’t get in touch with Tom.
参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) 要点： 1老人穿着拖鞋读报, 狗在边上睡觉。 2 老人想出门，叫狗拿鞋。 3 狗闭着眼睛，一动 不动，汪汪直叫， 老人很纳闷。 4 猫嘴里叼着鞋走进 来，老人目瞪口呆。 shoes reading sleeping dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆） 参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) barking cat
An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog, sleeping soundly. reading sleeping
he was totally dumbfounded. Seeing the cat, he was totally dumbfounded. dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆） cat
II. with The fire is burning, so I feel warm. With the fire burning, I feel warm. I lost my bike, so I had to walk home. With my bike lost, I had to walk home.
My mother sat in a chair with a newspaper in her hand. She left without saying goodbye. He died with his life’s work still unfinished.
Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room is waiting for you Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room is waiting for you. Inside, there is a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture.
Welcome to my home. A well-prepared room with a separate bathroom and all necessary furniture is waiting for you.
参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) 要点： 1老人穿着拖鞋读报, 狗在边上睡觉。 2 老人想出门，叫狗拿鞋。 3 狗闭着眼睛，一动 不动，汪汪直叫， 老人很纳闷。 4 猫嘴里叼着鞋走进 来，老人目瞪口呆。 shoes reading sleeping dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆） 参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) barking cat
dog
shoes with his slippers on slippers (拖鞋)
with two eyes closed dog bark eyes closed
with the pair of shoes in its mouth dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆） with the pair of shoes in its mouth shoes cat
writing
参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) 要点： 1老人穿着拖鞋读报, 狗在边上睡觉。 2 老人想出门，叫狗拿鞋。 3 狗闭着眼睛，一动 不动，汪汪直叫， 老人很纳闷。 4 猫嘴里叼着鞋走进 来，老人目瞪口呆。 shoes reading sleeping dumbfounded（adj.目瞪口呆） 参考词语: slippers (拖鞋) barking cat
An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper An old man was sitting in an armchair at home, reading his newspaper. Beside him lay a dog, sleeping soundly. Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while, but he couldn’t go out with his slippers on. So he woke up the dog to get the shoes for him. Out of his expectation, the dog just barked with two eyes closed again. The old man was completely puzzled. As he was wondering what was happening, he saw the cat coming towards him with the pair of shoes in its mouth. Seeing this, he was totally dumbfounded.