雅思大作文的结构 Presented by: 总统秘书王富贵.

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1 雅思大作文的结构 Presented by: 总统秘书王富贵

2 今天要解决掉的问题 雅思大作文的要求/与国考的比较 1 250字的作文长什么样？ 2 怎么写？写几段？写什么？ 3 模板VS非模板 4

3 雅思大作文的要求 WRITING TASK 2(类型一)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: In many places, foreign visitors are charged more than locals when they visit cultural tourist attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this? Give Reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

4 雅思大作文的要求 1. 字数=at least 250 words 2. 时间= 40 minutes
3. Agree or Disagree 4. Problem & Solution

5 雅思大作文的要求 WRITING TASK 2(类型一)
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task Write about the following topic: In many places, foreign visitors are charged more than locals when they visit cultural tourist attractions. Do you agree or disagree with this view point? Give Reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples form your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words

6 雅思作文PK 大学英语四/六级 雅思大作文 四六级作文 写作级别 动词性写作 名词性写作 学术级别 严格 不严格 字数要求
之间（一般） 120或160以上 用词要求 Reasonable Correct 行文思路 西式 中式

7 250的作文到底长什么样？ In many cases nowadays regarding to tourism, foreign ones are more likely to be charged more than locals and this phenomenon has been placed a tag of ‘reasonable’ by its advocates. Yet others argued violently that visitors have to be treated fairly. Discussion over that issue (topic) kept controversial recently. (49/49 words) Prior to all other reasons, the one particularly drawing my attention is that the service cost would be relatively much higher while serving majorly foreigners. For instance, Forbidden City and surrounding attractions have to provide interpreting and translation as well as route & direction services while facing foreign tourists, whereas certainly Beijing Citizens would never ever have such demand. Further, according to microeconomics principles, higher demand results in a higher price, which perfectly demonstrates why local people have to be charged lower. The opponents have to understand that local visitors do have less interest in attractions located at their hometown. (100/149 words) Nonetheless the argument becomes more complex when an opposite voice starts to pronounce their ideas. In terms of sustainable development, pricing strategy is required to involve a satisfaction survey for those who are charged higher. It is considered to be a significant reason and it has been accepted by a large number of discussants. Another concern is the fairness of tourism business. Without fairness, local administration of the attractions may experience dilemmas when ethical criticism starting to influence their revenue. (79/228words) In conclusion, although both aspects do have their unavoidable limitations, all concerns reflect considerations from different hierarchy of people. My position here is clearly (relatively) with the former (later) viewpoints as they sounds representing the major opinion of public. (38/266words)

8 250的作文到底长什么样？ In many cases nowadays regarding to tourism, foreign ones are more likely to be charged more than locals and this phenomenon has been placed a tag of ‘reasonable’ by its advocates. Yet others argued violently that visitors have to be treated fairly. Discussion over that issue (topic) kept controversial recently. (49/49 words)

9 250的作文到底长什么样？ Prior to all other reasons, the one particularly drawing my attention is that the service cost would be relatively much higher while serving majorly foreigners. For instance, Forbidden City and surrounding attractions have to provide interpreting and translation as well as route & direction services while facing foreign tourists, whereas certainly Beijing Citizens would never ever have such demand. Further, according to microeconomics principles, higher demand results in a higher price, which perfectly demonstrates why local people have to be charged lower. The opponents have to understand that local visitors do have less interest in attractions located at their hometown. (100/149 words)   

10 250的作文到底长什么样？ Nonetheless the argument becomes more complex when an opposite voice starts to pronounce their ideas. In terms of sustainable development, pricing strategy is required to involve a satisfaction survey for those who are charged higher. It is considered to be a significant reason and it has been accepted by a large number of discussants. Another concern is the fairness of tourism business. Without fairness, local administration of the attractions may experience dilemmas when ethical criticism starting to influence their revenue. (79/228words)

11 250的作文到底长什么样？ In conclusion, although both aspects do have their unavoidable limitations, all concerns reflect considerations from different hierarchy of people. My position here is clearly (relatively) with the former (later) viewpoints as they sounds representing the major opinion of public. (38/266words)

12 三个困扰烤鸭一生的问题 雅思大作文怎么写？ 雅思大作文写几段？ 雅思大作文写什么？

13 三个困扰烤鸭一生的问题 雅思大作文怎么写？ 想怎么写就怎么写 雅思大作文写几段？ 想写几段就写几段 雅思大作文写什么？ 让写什么就写什么

14 雅思四段式模板 四段式 pk 五段式 考试的时间限制决定考生掌握的结构应该是一两个而不是一大堆。
明确结构之后，考生对于自己结构中的每句话起到的逻辑作用应该很清楚。 文章的结构应该很清晰，不能朦胧。

15 典型四段式结构（Argument） 第一段： Introduction 第一句：交代问题背景 第二句：提出主线矛盾
第三句：引出下文论证/表明自己观点

16 典型四段式结构（Argument） 第二段： Argumentation （观点1） 第一句：概括本段的观点
第二句：这种观点的第一个分论点（Main Sentence） 第三句：写一句话来解释，支持第一个分论点（Supporting） 第四句以后： 重复2，3句

17 典型四段式结构（Argument） 第三段： Argumentation （观点2） 第一句：概括本段的观点
第二句：这种观点的第一个分论点（Main Sentence） 第三句：写一句话来解释，支持第一个分论点（Supporting） 第四句以后： 重复2，3句

18 典型四段式结构（Argument） 第四段： Conclusion 第一句：概括自己不太倾向的观点 第二句：重申自己更倾向的观点
第三句：提出我们，政府，家长，媒体等等等等可行性建议。

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