Section B (3a—3c) Donghu Middle School William

drinking orange juice sitting by the pool climbing the mountains skating listening to music making a snowman

Dear Xiao Lu, It’s winter in Harbin. The weather is _____ and ______. People are wearing hats and sweaters, but they’re having fun. Friends are _______ Russian bread to take home. In a park, some boys are _______ in the snow. One girl is ______ on a river and a man is ______ a photo of a snowman. I miss you. Kate. snowy windy buying playing skating taking skating, buying, playing, taking, snowy, windy

Where is Kate? What ’ s the weather like? What are people wearing? What are your friends doing? What are other people doing? In Harbin. The weather is snowy and windy. People are wearing hats and sweaters. Friends are buying Russian bread to take home. Some boys are playing in the snow. One girl is skating on a river and a man is taking a photo of a snowman.

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Shanghai Toronto How’s the weather in …?It’s... Boston rainy/raining snowy/snowing windy cloudy Moscow /cool /cold

reading a bookswimmingrunning taking a walk playing in the snow taking photos

How’s the weather? It’s sunny. Zootopia Judy /warm

What is Judy doing in Zootopia? She is driving.

What are Judy’s friends doing in Zootopia? singing taking a photo playing computer gameseating ice cream Are they having a good time? Flash Gazelle Piggy boys

body head tail I am driving. Gazelle is singing. Piggy is taking a photo. Flash is playing computer games. Some boys are eating ice cream. We are happy. My friends and I are in Zootopia. It’s sunny today. Is it a complete( 完整的 ) article? name( title) Vacation in Zootopia

My friends and I are on vacation in Zootopia. It’s sunny and warm today. Look! I am driving a car. Gazelle is singing. And she is good at it. Piggy is taking a photo. What is Flash doing? He is playing computer games. Some boys are eating ice cream. We are happy. having a good time.

Dear Nick, I miss you./See you soon. Judy Vacation in Zootopia My friends and I are on vacation in Zootopia. It’s sunny and warm today. Look! I am driving a car. Gazelle is singing. And she is good at it. Piggy is taking a photo. What is Flash doing? He is playing computer games. Some boys are eating ice cream. We are having a good time.

go boatingfly kitesmake tuanzi pick tea leavesgo outingclean the tomb Where are you? What’s the weather like? What are you doing right now? What are your friends or family doing? Are you having a good time? Dear XXX, It is spring in Shaoxing/... The weather is… and … My family/friends and I are on vacation. Look! I’m… XXX is… XXX is… We are having a good time/having fun. See you soon./I miss you. XXX

a. 自评自改 学生习作自评标准 习作 自评 （√）（√） A级A级 B级B级 C级C级 D级D级 E级E级 结构 段落合理 主题句鲜明 衔接自然 内容拓展合理 卷面书写工整、干净 语言 大错 时态错误 主谓一致错误 短语搭配错误 语言 小错 单词拼写错误 名词单复数错误 大小写错误 冠词、标点错误 总评 （ ）级 √

Dear Nick, I miss you. Judy Vacation in Zootopia My friends and I are on vacation in Zootopia. It’s sunny and warm today. Look! I am driving a car. Gazelle is singing. And she is good at it. Piggy is taking a photo. What is Flash doing? He is playing computer games. Some boys are eating ice cream. We are having a good time. ________________

b. 互评互改 学生 “ 互评互改 ” 统计表 √ 习作 互评 （√）（√） A级A级 B级B级 C级C级 D级D级 E级E级 结构 段落合理 主题句鲜明 衔接自然 内容拓展合理 卷面书写工整、干净 语言 大错 时态错误 主谓一致错误 短语搭配错误 语言 小错 单词拼写错误 名词单复数错误 大小写错误 冠词、标点错误 总评 （ ）级

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Homework Write another postcard to your friend. Tell your friend about your vacation and what you are doing. Dear,. To... 。