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Writing Descriptions of a place
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根据所学课文写一段落简单介绍加 拿大的情况。 1 、位置：美国北部 2 、面积： 997 万平方公里 ，东西 5 ， 500 公 里 3 、人口： 3 千 2 百万 4 、自然资源：淡水和森林 5 、气候：各地气候差异 6 、其他：世界上第二大国, 多文化的国家， 吸引世界各地的旅客, 首都 --- 渥太华
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写地点说明文，时态要用现在时，建议按如下 顺序写：地面气城著（地方） 1 地点状语 + 主句 Located in…, …is one of …, 2 面积 + 人口（历史） It covers a total area of…with a population / history of… 3 气候 There is a variety of climate. The climate is different from place to place 4 城市 …, in which… 5 著名 Because it is famous for…, visitors…
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Located in the north of North America, Australia, whose capital city is Ottawa, is the second largest country in the world. It covers a total area of 9.97 million square kilometres and 5 ， 500 kilometres from coast to coast. It is a multicultural country with a population of about 32 million. Australia is so large a country that the weather is different from area to area and that it is rich in fresh water and forests. The tourists from all over the world come to enjoy its scenery.
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1. 澳大利亚位于太平洋的南端，是大洋洲 (Oceania) 最大的国家，面积 760 万平方 公里； 2. 人口稀少，只有 1 ， 000 多万，多数集 中在东部沿海地区； 3. 首都堪培拉 (Canberra) 风景秀丽； 4. 悉尼是澳大利亚最大城市。有许多名胜， 其中悉尼歌剧院 (the Sydney Opera House) 闻名于世。 《同步诠案》 P
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地点写作句型： discuss in groups: write down as many expressions as you can 地理位置 面积 人口
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地点写作句型 地理位置 1. Australia is in the south of…. 2. Australia lies in the south of…. 3. Located in the south of …, Australia… 4. Australia is located in the south of … 面积 1. Australia is about …square kilometers. 2. Australia covers/occupies…square kilometers. 3. Australia has an area of …square kilometers. 4. Australia covers a total area of …square kilometers. and covers…square kilometers. covers/occupies…square kilometers.
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地点写作句型 人口 1. Australia has a population of …. 2. The population is … 3. There are about…people in Australia 4. Australia is a large country with … people. 5. Australia covers…square kilometers with a population of…
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地点写作句型 国家组成（省份）： 1. Australia is a large country with … provinces 2. Australia is made up of … provinces 气候 1. The weather is different from area to area. 2. Winters are cold and summers are quite hot. The seasons are pleasant. Australia is rich in…
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Located in the south of the Pacific, Australia, the largest country in Oceania, covers/occupies an area of 7.6 million square kilometres. It has a small population of over 10 million and most of its people live on the east coast of the country. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Sydney Opera House is well known all over the world.
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Australia, the largest country in Oceania, lies in the south of the Pacific, covering an area of 7.6 million square kilometres. It has a small population of over 10 million and most of its people live in the east of the country by the sea. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Sydney Opera House is well known all over the world.
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Australia, the largest country in Oceania, is located in the south of the Pacific, covering an area of 7.6 million square kilometres. It has a small population of over 10 million and most of its people live on the east coast of the country. Canberra, the capital of Australia, is a beautiful city. Sydney is the biggest city in Australia, which has many places of interest. The Sydney Opera House is well known all over the world.
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Complete and well- organized information How many ATV mistakes of the verbs? correct all of them in your partner’s writing How many good sentences? write them down here. Yes ATV ( agreement, tense, voice) No Language （语言） 10 points ( 语 法，词汇，句 型 ) structure （内容） 8 points （包含信息 量的完整性 Coherence ( 连贯 ) 2 points ( 定从，连 词等 Total ( 总分 ) 20(+5) points Advice and encouragement ： writing assessment
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写作评价 writing assessment Give your marks and some assessments ( 评价 ) to your fellow students’ article in English. 评价要求 (fill the items in the table) 1.All the information is included and well- organized. 2.something you appreciate( 欣赏 ) 找出值得肯定的 地方，找出优秀词组和句子。 3.Find out the mistakes 找出动词中 ATV ( agreement, tense, voice) 的错误 4.advice 给出建议 5. encouragement 鼓励 6.Mark the article 10 （语言） + 8 （内容） + 2 （连贯） =20(+5)
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Homework 1.Remember the sample 2. 名词性从句练习卷
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