大学英语四六级写作指导 张汉彬 QYF2011.

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1 大学英语四六级写作指导 张汉彬 QYF2011

2 十二句作文法 得分优势句式 作文经典替换词 2013四六级热点话题

3 十二句作文法 四六级作文试题分类： 四六级作文从试题角度可以分为现象解释型、对比选择型、问题解决型、观点论证型与应用文五种类型。

4 现象解释型 此类作文在四六级考试作文中最为常见。命题主要要求考生对某一社会现象进行解释并加以评论，其基本结构是：首先说明现状；其次阐述这种现状产生或存在的原因；最后做出分析，提出建议或总结观点。 The Celebration of Western Festivals 1、现在国内不少人喜欢过西方的一些节日 2、产生这种现象的原因 3、这种现象可能带来的影响

5 对比选择型 此类作文同样是四六级考试中常见的类型，它的标志十分明显。作文题目要求较明确，富有针对性，即直接要求考试比较两种观点或做法，进而表明自己对问题或事务的态度或观点，也就是做出选择。 Should One Expect a Reward When Doing a Good Deed? 1.有的人认为应该有回报 2.另外的人认为应该象雷锋一样不要回报 3.我的看法

6 问题解决型 此类作文要求考生从提示性文字或图表、图画入手，解释提示性文字、图表、图画反映出的问题，提出问题的危害性或解决这一问题的紧迫性；然后对问题展开分析，提出解决问题的方案或应对措施；最后一段要求考生表明自己的态度、做法等。 Reduce Waste on Campus 1．目前有些校园内浪费现象严重： 2．浪费的危害： 3．从我做起，杜绝浪费。

7 观点论证型 此类作文往往要求考生根据题目给出论点，按照提纲的结构要求对其下论证，然后表明自己的立场和看法。通过摆事实、讲道理的方式剖析事物，论述事理，发表意见，确立或否认某一主张。 Haste Makes Waste 1．为什么说 “欲速则不达” ？ 2．试举例说明。

8 应用文 应用文中的信函，也是四六级作文设计的试题之一。在这类题型中，考生会读到一个特定的场景，试题要求考生按照这个场景给相关人士写一封短信，并在信中明确表达自己写信的原因、动机、目的和愿望等。文章所设及的内容多种多样，但大部分都与日常生活比较贴近。书信的类型可能变化万千，如邀请信、申请信、感谢信、道歉信等，但是万变不离其宗，只要掌握了英语书信的格式，并应用恰当的句式和语句，就一定能够写出好的文章来。

9 解决方案 建议考生分解作文观点，扩充内容。 建议考生在写作时只选择自己能够驾奴的句式和词语。
建议考生在文章中长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。 建议考生选用作文模板，限定文章逻辑结构。 建议考生采用固定的句式，限定文章的字数。

10 写作技巧 根据文章大意判断作文题型。 各种题型的写作方法：
现象解释型：基本方法为：描述现象→分析原因→对现象做出预测或如何促进（限制）这种现象的进一步发展。 对比选择型：基本方法为：阐述一种观点或态度并表明这种观点或态度正确的理由；阐述第二种（相对或相反的）观点或态度并说明这种观点或态度正确的理由；表明个人支持或反对以上观点或态度，并说明原因。 问题解决型：基本方法为：提出问题→分析问题→解决问题。 观点论证型：基本方法为：分析主题→得出结论→举例论证→得出结论（证明观点的正确性）。 应用文基本方法为：分析所给情景→选择写作方法。

11 三段式作文的结构安排 题型 第一段 第二段 第三段 现象解释型 描述现象 说明现象产生的原因 表明个人态度或阐述个人做法 对比选择型
表明一方或双方由的观点及理由 表明另一方的观点及理由，指出双方观点不足之处及理由 问题解决型 提出问题 分析问题，给出解决方案 观点论证型 提出论点 例证论点 得出结论或表明个人看法或做法 应用文 描述事实 阐述原因 表明观点或提出建议

12 现象解释型模板一 ①——has become a common part of people’s life.
②And——has always aroused the greatest concern. ③what impresses us most is ——. ④The reasons——are varied. 1．空格内用概括性的词语填出最近出现的总体现象。2.空格内填题目要去讨论的具体现象。3.现象的具体表现4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。 5. Among the various reasons,——plays an important role. 6.That is to say,—— 7.What is more,—— 8.For example,—— 5．原因之一。 6.具体说明原因一。 7 .原因二。 8 .举例说明原因二 9．When talking about—，—， 10．On the one hand—— 11．On the other hand,—— 12．In brief,—— 9.空格一填作者要讨论的现象，空格二填作者的看法。10.支持看法的理由一或说明看法的第一个方面。11.理由二或第二个方面。12.总结。

13 四六级真题 Directions: 图表作文，关于一个美国大学图书馆的图书流动量(pop fiction, general nonfiction, science,art等)，给出他们的流动比例对比，说明原因，并说明你自己喜欢阅读什么样的书。

14 Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life
Reading regularly has long become a common part of people’s life. And reading preference has always aroused the greatest concern. What impresses us most is according to the table, the percentage of book circulation in an American university library, which shows that the circulation of popular fictions, general nonfictions, science/technology/education books and art/ literature/poetry books accounts for 65.9%,18.2%,10.8%and 5.1% respectively. The reasons for the phenomenon are varied. Among the various reasons, the appealing content of the popular fictions plays an important part. That is to say, thanks to its appealing plot, popular fictions attract more people than other types of books do. What is more, science and art books which require readers’ knowledge on relevant fields are highly demanding. For example, it’s hard for students majoring in chemistry to understand Browning’s poems, and vice versa. When talking about my reading preference, I think I prefer to science books. On the one hand, in order to deepen what I’m specializing in, I need read more books relevant to my major. On the other hand, these books can also broaden our horizons. In brief, college students should choose books according to their interests and needs.

15 现象解释型模板二 1.We have witnessed —— 2.According to ——，—— 3.And ——
4.Many reasons contribute to—— 1．空格内填最近出现的总体现象。2.空格一根据题目填the chart, thereport等，空格二内填现象的具体表现一。3.现象的具体表现二4.过度句，填现象或现象带来的后果，为下文分析产生的原因做铺垫。 5. To begin with ,——. 6.More over,—— 7.In addition ,—— 8.As a result ,—— 5．原因之一。 6. 原因二。 7原因三。 8 原因导致的结果。 9.As to me,——， 10.First of all,—— 11.Besides,—— 12.To conclude,—— 9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。10.支持看法的理由一。11.理由二。12.总结。

16 现象解释型模板三 1. ——has been brought into focus. 2.Nowdays,——.
3.In addition, ——. 4.Many reasons contribute to—— 1．空格内填最近出现的总体现象。 2.空格内填现象的具体表现一。 3.现象的具体表现二。 4.过度句到分析原因。 5. Generally speaking ,——. 6.First of all,—— 7.More over,—— 8.Therefore ,—— 5．承上启下开始列举原因 6. 原因之一。 7 原因二。 8 对原因一二进行总结。 9.As far as I am concerned,——， 10.As we known ,—— 11.Furthermore,—— 12.In a word,—— 9.空格内填作者对现象的看法。 10.支持看法的理由一。11.理由二。 12.总结。

17 对比选择型作文模板一 1.Different people have different views on——
2. Some people perfer,——. 3. Others tend to, ——. 4.As to me, I agree with /to — 1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2．表明一部分人的看法。 3．另一部分的看法。 4．作者的看法。 5. Of course,——. 6.For example,—— 7.But,—— 8.The following reasons can account for my preference— 5．承认自己不赞同的看法有一定的合理性。6. 举例说明支持第五句。 7 转折指出这种观点的不足。 8 启下句过渡到下段具体阐述自己所支持的观点的理由。 9.The main reason is ——. 10.A good example to illustrate is — 11.Fur another,—— 12.From the foregoing,—— 9.支持观点的理由一。 10.举例说明理由一。 11.理由二。 12.总结全文，从长远看来。

18 四六级真题 英语口试必要吗?(Is a test of spoken English necessary?) 1. 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试，理由是…… 2. 也有人持不同的意见，…… 3. 我的看法和打算

19 A test of spoken English will be included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). Different people have different views on it. Some prefer to have such a test. Others tend to decline any kind of test of spoken English. As to me, I agree with the first statement. Of course, a test of spoken English is very difficult to handle and the test time is not long enough to fully display participants’ ability to spoken in English. For example, if a candidate draws a topic which he of she is not familiar with, it’s hard to show his or her command of spoken English. But without such a test, some people may not have motivation to practise spoken English. The following reasons can account for my preference. The main reason is that such a test enhances college students’ awareness of the importance of spoken English. A good example to illustrate is that several years ago, college students only stressed reading and writing skills, ignoring to building up listening and speaking ability. For another, a certificate of such a test will make job-hunting easier. From the foregoing, I think a test of spoken English is of necessity.

20 对比选择型作文模板二 1.There is no complete agreement among people as to ——
2. Some people consider,——. 3. However, others think, ——. 1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2．表明一部分人的看法。 3．另一部分的看法。 4.Some people may say —— 5. They hold this opinion because——. 6. However, others believe,—— 7.They argue that,—— 4．观点一的理由。 5．深入阐述观点一的理由。 6. 观点二的理由。 7. 深入阐述观点二的理由。 8.Personally,I am in favor of the—— 9. Firstly, ——. 10.Secondly,—— 11.Most important of all —— 12.Taking above-mentioned factors into consideration, we/I may reasonably conclude that —— 8. 我的看法。 9. 个人看法依据一。 10. 个人看法依据二。 11. 个人看法依据三。 12. 总结全文。

21 对比选择型作文模板三 1. When asked about ——,different people will offer different opinions. 2. Some people take it for granted that——. 3. In their opinion, ——. 4. Besides —— 1．开门见山直入主体，表明对某事人们的不同看法。 2．提出观点一。 3．观点一的理由一。 4．观点一的理由二 5. However, others hold——. 6.They maitain—— 7.And—— 5．提出观点二。 6. 观点二的理由一。 7观点二的理由二。 8.Weighing up these arguments, I am for—— 9. For one thing——. 10.For anther,—— 11.For instance,—— 12.Therefore, as stated above—— 8 我的观点。 9.个人观点理由一。 10. 个人观点理由二。 11. 举例说明。 12.综上所述再次强调自己的观点。

22 问题解决型作文模板一 1. With the development / improvement of ——,——.
2. It is necessary that——. 3. On the one hand, ——. 4. On the other hand, —— 1．空格一处铺垫，空格二处填写某一问题。 2．关注解决现象引出的问题很必要。 3．解决问题很必要的理由一。 4．解决问题很必要的理由二。 5. Therefore, how to —— is worth paying attention. 6.Firstly—— 7.Secondly—— 8.For example,—— 9. Thirdly, ——. 10.In other words,—— 5．承上启下，填要解决的问题。 6. 解决办法一。 7 解决办法二。 8. 举例解释解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。 10. 阐明解决办法三。 11.In fact, ways to —— are countless. 12.It’s time that —— 11. 指出解决问题的办法多种多样。 12. 强调解决问题时不可待。

23 四六级真题 Reduce Waste on Campus 1．目前有些校园内浪费现象严重： 2．浪费的危害： 3．从我做起，杜绝浪费。

24 With the improvement of living standard, waste on campus is increasingly serious. It is necessary that something should be done to reduce waste on campus. On the one hand, our waste has already caused a great loss of precious resources, such as water and electricity. On the other hand, our waste adds our parents as well as our society a burden. Therefore, how to eliminate waste on campus is worth paying attention. Firstly, we should turn off the light when we leave our dorms or classrooms so as to save electricity as much as possible. Secondly, we should stop wasting water when we bath, or wash clothes and dishes. For example, we should use a basin when we clean faces. Thirdly, we should be economical. In other words, when go shopping, we should buy only what we really need. In fact, the ways to reduce waste on campus are countless. It’s time that we cultivate the habit of thrift in every possible way.

25 问题解决型作文模板二 1. There has been a discussion recently abouot——.
2. It is obvious that——. 3. Additionally, ——. 4. So it is high time, —— 1．提出现存的问题。 2．解决问题很必要的理由一 3．解决问题很必要的理由二。 4．承上启下，说明解决问题的必要性。 5. First of all, —— 6.The reason is—— 7.Secondly—— 8.That is to say,—— 9. Thirdly, —— 5．解决办法一 6．解决办法一的理由.。 7．解决办法二。 8. 阐明解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。 10.In fact, more than three ways can be adopted,—— 11.As for me, —— 12.All in all, —— 10. 指出解决问题的办法多种多样。 11. 小结解决问题的根本途径。 12. 总结全文。

26 问题解决型作文模板三 1. I t is certain that——. 2. For one reason,——.
3. For another, ——. 4. However, some still puzzle on how to —— 1．提出问题及解决的必要性。 2．解决问题很必要的理由一 3．解决问题很必要的理由二。 4．转折到如何解决问题。 5. Here come some suggestions. 6.To begin with,—— 7.Secondly—— 8.For instance,—— 9. Thirdly, ——. 10.That is because—— 5．呈上指出解决问题的方法很多。 6．解决办法一.。 7．解决办法二。 8. 阐明解决办法二。 9. 解决办法三。 10. 其理由。 11.The solutionvary according to different situations. 12.Therefore, —— 11.解决问题的办法随具体情况不同而变化根本途径。 12. 总结全文，要灵活地依据具体情况处理问题。

27 观点论证型作文模板一 1. It is true that——. 2. However,——. 3.I think——.
4.—— can be listed as follow. 1．提出普遍存在的观点。 2．谈不同的观点。 3．自己的观点，即文章的论点 4．过渡句，转折到观点的论证，由题目选择具体的词。 5. First of all, —— 6. Secondly —— 7.For example—— 8.Thirdly,—— 9. A case in point is ——. 5．论证理由一 6．论证理由二。 7．举例具体说明理由二。 8. 论证理由三。 9. 举例说明理由三。 10.It goes without saying that—— 11.There is no doubt that —— 12.In conclusion —— 10. 提出执行该观点时应注意的事项。 11. 得出结论。 12. 总结全文。

28 四六级真题 　It Pays to Be Honest 1．当前社会上存在许多不诚实现象 2．诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实

29 It is true that most of us value honesty highly
It is true that most of us value honesty highly. However, nowadays we often confront confidence crisis such as cheating, overcharging, fake commodities, etc. I think that we should be honest because being honest is not only the whole society. The reasons can be listed as follows. Firstly, only honest people can be truly respected by the others and can make more friends over a long period of time. Secondly, honesty, which is the traditional virtue of the Chinese people, can make our life easier and more harmonious. For example, consumers will not be afraid of being overcharged if dealers are honest, and on the contrary dealers can win more customers. Thirdly, honesty can make our society. A case in point is that Singapore which is a society of trustworthiness and integrity has a comparatively low criminal rate. It goes without saying that being honesty is of benefit to both the same and the individual. There is no doubt that we should foster the spirit of honesty. In conclusion, laying stress on honesty will become the public morals in our society.

30 观点论证型作文模板二 1. Some people believe that——.
2. The truth is deep and profound. 3. As we know,——. 4. In addition,—— 1．直接提出本文的观点。 2．进一步强度观点的正确性。 3．论证理由一 4．论证理由二 5. There are numerous examples —— 6. A case in point is—— 7.There is close to suggest—— 8.For another example—— 9.Moreover,—— 5．承上启下。 6．举例一具体论证。 7．总结例一。 8. 举例二具体论证。 9. 举例三具体论证。 10.All mentioned above tell us—— 11.But one thing we have to notice is that —— 12.In a word, —— 10. 总结上下，重申论点。 11. 指出该论点应注意什么。 12. 总结全文。

31 应用文作文模板——建议信模板 Date Dear—— 1. I am delighted to learn that——.
2. It—— In my opinion,——. 4. On the one hand,——. 5. On the other hand, —— 1．写信的原因。 2．引出作者的建议。 3．表达建议内容。 4．提出建议的理由一。 5．建议的理由二。 6. As to the——, I suggest——. 7.If —— 8.It is unnecessary for you to—— 9. In addition,——. 10.I am sure—— 6．具体到某一方面的建议内容。 7．供被建议人选择的条件。 8．建议内容的另一方面。 9．其它的建议。 10．对建议内容的评价。 11.Please inform me —— 12.I am looking forward to —— Sincerely yours, Signature: 11. 对建议内容所做出的承诺。 12. 表达个人的愿望。

32 四六级真题 Directions: In this part, you are to write a letter of about 200 words within 40 minutes. Your letter must meet the requirements given below.  A Letter to a Schoolmate 1.表示欢迎 2. 提出对假期安排的建议 3. 提醒应注意的事项

33 A Letter to a Schoolmate
Dear Wang, I am delighted to learn that you will visit me for a week during this national days. It has been several years since we departed last time, and I am looking forward to your visit. In my opinion, Nanjing is your best choice for this holiday. On the one hand, there are many places of interest and historical sites in Najing. On the other hand, Nanjing is a cultural center with various artistic and musical performances. As to the famous sites, I suggest that you should visit the Confucius Temple and Dr. Sun Yetsens Mausoleum. If you are interested in parks, the XXX park will be your best choice. It is not necessary for you to bring anything except your sweaters since it is a little chill in the evening. In addition, as there will be many people at the railway station, you should not leave your belongings unattended! I am sure you will enjoy your visit in Nanjing. Please inform me once you have made your decision. I am looking forward to seeing you soon. Sincerely Yours, Zhang Ying

34 应用文作文模板——批评、抱怨、投诉信模板
Date Dear—— 1. My name is——. 2. I am——. 3. I venture to write you a letter about—— 1．写信人的姓名。 2．写信人的身份。 3．表达抱怨的内容。 4. The focus of the complaint is——. 5. For one thing, —— 6. For another,—— 7. Honestly speaking,—— 8.But—— 9. Besides,—— 4．提出抱怨内容的核心点。5．抱怨内容的一方面。6．抱怨内容的另一方面。7．客观的评论。8．抱怨产生的原因一。9．抱怨产生的原因二。 10. All in all, there is still much room for improvement. 11.I do hope—— 12.Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours, Signature: 10．总结说明所抱怨现象或事物还有很大改进空间。 11. 表达本人的愿望。 12. 信件结尾的常用语。

35 四六级真题 A letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus 　　假设你是李明，请你就本校食堂的状况给校长写一封信，内容应设计食堂的饭菜质量、价格、环境、服务等，可以是表扬，可以是批评建议，也可以兼而有之。

36 A Letter to the University President about the Canteen Service on Campus
Dear Mr. President, My name is Li Ming. I am a junior student of the civil engineering school in this university. I I venture to write you a letter about the canteen service on campus, which has given rise to many complaints among students. The focus of the complaint is the poor quality of the food. For one thing, the rice is very hard, the steamed breads are usually sold cold and vegetables are often overcooked. For another, the prices of the foods are surprisingly high. Honestly speaking, the dining environment has been improved since last year. But there are still not enough space and seats for us to have our meals there. Besides, the attitude of the canteen staffs is not hospitable at all. All in all, there is still much room for improvement. I do hope we will not suffer another year. Thank you for your time and kind consideration. Sincerely yours， Li

37 应用文作文模板——求职申请信模板 Date Dear——
1. I am applying for the position of ——advertised in—. 2. I major in ——. 3. My training in ——definitely meet your qualifications. 4. My complete resume is attached——. 1．申请何职位。 2．介绍自己特长而引起注意。 3．强调自己符合要求，加强印象。 4．告知随信附上信息简历。 5. I will graduate on ——from— 6. In additionto the required courses of this program, I have—. 7. I also have some experience in —— 8. I believe that my training and experience——. 9. You will find me to be——. 5．详细介绍教育背景一。 6．详细介绍教育背景二。 7．介绍相关经历。 8．表明自信心。 9．加强对方对自己的自信。 10. I hope that you will consider me for your position. 11.May I have a personal interview at your convenience? 12.I can be reach by telephone between——and——. Sincerely yours, Signature: 10．希望被考虑 11. 争取面谈机会。 12. 告知联系方式。

38 得分优势句式 1. 肯定不如双否好 —— All the people will notice the fact that health has its priority. —— No one will fail to notice the fact that health has its priority. （双否） 几乎每个人对生活的态度都不同程度受到地震的影响。 —— There was hardly a man or a woman whose attitude towards life had not affected by the earthquake. （双否）

39 得分优势句式 2. 陈述不如倒装妙 —— Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。 其他的否定词，如：
—— I will never marry you. 不如变成倒装，用否定词开头 —— Never will I marry you. 就算作使用了高级语法。 其他的否定词，如： —— The youth unemployment is the most serious problem. —— Nothing is more serious than the problem of the youth unemployment.

40 得分优势句式 3. 主动不如被动巧 —— We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.这句话如果写成： —— At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days，分数会更高。 —— This preference can be accounted for by a couple of factors, both individual and social.

41 得分优势句式 4. 分词结构不能少　　 ----- If such is the case, you should apologize to her. Such being the case, you should apologize to her. —— A mobile phone which is small in size, light in weight and easy to carry offers fast and convenient service for the world’s communication. —— A mobile phone, being small in size, light in weight and easy to carry, offers fast and convenient service for the world’s communication.

42 得分优势句式 5. 并列不如复合爽 —— There are six students in the room and two of them are from the United Kingdom. —— There are six students in the room, of whom two are from the United Kingdom. —— We don’t need more cars but cars with more people. —— What we need is not more cars but cars with more people.

43 得分优势句式 6. 介宾结构不能忘 —— The government injects funds into the job market and creates lots of job opportunities. —— The government creates lots of job opportunities by injecting funds into the job market. —— With the advent of the Internet, online shopping has now become available to consumers. —— By this, people can have easy access to a variety of goods they want.

44 得分优势三部曲 总之，在写作考试中我们要做到： 1. drafting （理清思路，构建框架，列出观点） 2. writing（不犯语法错误，注意逻辑和修辞，发展充分） 3. revising（一看语法，二看连词，三看修辞）

45 作文经典替换词 1 individuals, characters, folks (people, persons)
2 charming, decent, fascinating, desirable, prosperous, positive, favorable, rosy, promising, perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding (good) 3 wrong, plain, negative, useless, evil, dark side, nasty, dreadful, unfavorable, poor, adverse (bad)

46 作文经典替换词 4 an army of, an ocean of, a sea of, a multitude of, many（if not most） (many) 5 a slice of, quite a few, several (some) 6 harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that (think) 注意书面语that一般不省略

47 作文经典替换词 7 affair, business, matter (thing) 8 shared (common) 注意只是某些情况
9 reap huge fruits (get much benefit) 10 for my part, from my own perspective (in my opinion) 11 increasing(ly), growing (more and more) 注意没有growingly，当修饰名词用increasing/growing。修饰副词用increasingly。

48 作文经典替换词 12 little if anything, little or nothing (hardly)
13 beneficial，rewarding (helpful) 14 shopper, client, consumer, purchaser (customer) 15 exceedingly, extremely, rather, fairly, greatly, considerably, exceedingly (very) 16 hardly unnecessary, inevitable (necessary) 17 sth appeals to sb, sth exerts a tremendous fascination on sb (sb take interest in)

49 作文经典替换词 18 capture one’s attention (attract one’s attention)
19 facet, dimension, sphere (aspect) 注意sphere用时要谨慎，facet更好用 20 be indicative of, be suggestive of, be fearful of (分别代替indicate, suggest, fear) 21 give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger (cause) 注意trigger引发一连串不好的事情 22 there are several reasons behind sth (reasons for sth)

50 作文经典替换词 23 desire (want) 24 pour attention into (pay attention to)
25 bear in mind that (remember) 26 enjoy, possess (have) 注意possess是一个过程的感觉 27 interaction (communication) 28 frown on sth (be against, disagree with sth) 29 to name only a few, as an example, for instance (for example)        

51 作文经典替换词 30 next to/virtually impossible (nearly impossible)
31 be interested, be fond of, crazy about, fanatical about, favorite (like) 32 fascinating, lovely, pure, handsome, promising, appealing (beautiful) 33 modernization, globalization, industrialization, update, upgrade (development) 34 significant, essential, substantial, play a vital part (important)

52 作文经典替换词 35 argue, declare, admit, guess, reckon, conclude, I hold the opinion that, as far as I am concerned (think) 36 discuss, talk about (say) 37 means, measure, remedy, approach (method) 38 notice, observe, be confronted with, witness (see) 39 achieve, accomplish, implement, fulfill (finish, complete) 40 reject, object, decline, the last thing, anything but (refuse)

53 作文经典替换词 41 seek, chase, pursue, explore, trace (follow) 查清搭配
42 alike, equivalent, identical, similar (same) 43 slim, tiny, minute, minor, insignificant (small) 44 obvious, transparent, known to all, well-believed, widely-held (clear) 45 vacant, blank, idle, bare, hollow (empty) 46 inspire, stimulate, impulse, motivate (encourage) 47 disaster, misfortune, tragedy grief, sorrow (bad luck)

54 作文经典替换词 48 sole, unique, single, lonely (only)
49 illustrate, demonstrate, indicate, reveal, illuminate (show) 50 flaw, error, fault, weakness, defect (mistake) 51 obligation, responsibility, liability, charge (duty) 52 accumulate, assemble, crowd (join) 53 present, up-to-date, contemporary, nowadays (now) 54 desirable, advisable, priceless, feasible (valuable)

55 作文经典替换词 垃圾词汇1：help 典型例句：I'll help you. 替代语：accommodate
E.g:  I'll endeavor to accommodate you. 垃圾词汇2：helpful 典型例句：Sth is helpful (to sb) 替代语：conducive E.g: Sth is conducive to sb

56 作文经典替换词 垃圾词汇3：show 典型例句：as it shows in the picture 替代语：betray
垃圾词汇4：think 典型例句：I think 替代语：deem

57 作文经典替换词 垃圾词汇5：ugly 典型例句：xxx is ugly 替代语：hideous 垃圾词汇6：by the way
替代语：incidentally,....

58 作文经典替换词 垃圾词汇7：because 典型例句：xxx because xxx 替代语：in that/in as much as
垃圾词汇8：consider 典型例句：We must consider xxx 替代语：allow for E.g: We must allow for xxx

59 作文经典替换词 垃圾词汇9：much 典型例句：There has been a much increase in the world population 替代语：There has been a drastic increase in the ----- 垃圾词汇10：about 典型例句：It is about 250 times of that 替代语：It is approximately --- 垃圾词汇11：buy 替代语：purchase

60 2013四六级热点话题 “雾霾天气” hazy weather
In the past few days, most areas of central and eastern China continued to experience dense fog which dragged the air quality down to "severe pollution" grade. Neither the timely release of pollution data by the relevant departments nor the proposal for the public to "avoid outdoor activities" provides a permanent cure. To truly realize the improvement of urban air quality, specific initiatives and intense intervention of relevant policies are needed. The public should also take action to reduce the haze. But it is easier said than done. Take driving for example, one important factor that affects urban air quality is automobile exhaust pollution. Experiments show that a car driving at the speed of 20 kilometers per hour discharges twice the total amount of carbon monoxide and hydrocarbons than a car running at 40 kilometers per hour, with increased fuel consumption, too. However, why are people still reluctant to give up driving a car?

61 2013四六级热点话题 “剩宴” leftover banquet; “盛宴”的英文表达是 extravagant banquet。
中国式“剩宴”浪费触目惊心，每年浪费粮食约800万吨，够2亿人吃1年。水稻专家袁隆平建议立法惩治粮食浪费。餐桌上杯盘狼藉，满桌剩饭剩菜，很多人已经对中国式“剩宴”司空见惯。

62 2013四六级热点话题 “光盘行动” Operation Empty Plate “clean your plate” campaign
针对日前曝光的中国“舌尖上的浪费”问题，民间发起了吃光盘中餐的“光盘行动”，得到了网友和多家餐厅的积极响应。

63 2013四六级热点话题 “中国式过马路” Chinese style of crossing road
中国式过马路，是网友对部分中国人集体闯红灯现象的一种调侃，即“凑够一撮人就可以走了，和红绿灯无关” 。出现这种现象是大家受法不责众的“从众”心理。

64 2013四六级热点话题 民生类： 食品中毒，偷工减料，有害添加物，黑作坊---责任，职业道德
 车祸，酒驾以及新的严格处罚规定---遵守法规制度，家庭与社会责任，珍爱生命：  科技与生活，智能手机，微博，聊天工具---辩证分析事物  山寨文化---责任，质量，创新  意外灾难与八方救援---人性，爱心，基础设施建设  交通堵塞，私家车增多---科学管理与规划，低碳环保  行贿受贿，豆腐渣工程，城市意外事故，责任推卸---责任，职业道德，人性化，事后思考总结 

65 2013四六级热点话题 教育类： 学生负担重，乱收费，管理混乱---科学管理，以人为本，责任 校车问题，教师虐待低龄学生---责任，职业道德
 学生负担重，乱收费，管理混乱---科学管理，以人为本，责任  校车问题，教师虐待低龄学生---责任，职业道德  大学生就业---心态与能力  大学生逃课，作弊，买答案---投机心理，勤奋努力，老实做人，踏实做事  环保类：  低碳，节约资源，绿色健康的生活习惯---可持续发展

66 Good Luck!