Last week our class had a parents' meeting. At the meeting, all the parents talked about whether doing a lot of homework was useful or not. Many parents thought that doing much homework was useful. Because students could review what they have learned, and doing much homework could also develop students' minds and stop students playing computer games. If students didn't do homework, they wouldn't get good grades. However, a few parents thought differently. They said that doing homework took a lot of time. So their children couldn't have a good rest. It would be bad for studying. And they couldn't do the things they like. In my opinion, if we do much homework every day, we will lose interest in studying little by little. What's more, we need free time to relax ourselves.(99words)
Doing much homework can review what students have learned, also can develop students' minds and stop students playing computer games, but a few parents thought that doing much homework was not useful. They thought doing much homework can take a lot of time, cannot have a good rest and cannot do the things students like. I think students should doing much homework. （ 63 words)
most parents:review what students have learned,develop students' minds.stop students playing computer games a few parents: take a lot of time they cannot have a good rest.cannot do the things students like
1 、 作文的卷面； 漂亮的书写是写作得分的亮点 建议 : 同学们一起练书法吧！ 2 、文中所采用的语言材料的层次； A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜 B. 句型结构运用灵活多变 ; 影响给分的四大因素：
存在问题 1. 拼写错误多, 词组的误用。 2. 句型用错, 结构混乱。 如 : too many homework ( 太多作业）, to ( 也 ), frist ( 第一 ), resently though ( 想） everyday ( 每天） ， reseive （收到）, successed( 成功 ), in my idea( 按照我的观点） in the other hand( 另一方面 ), As we known, to much homework have much things to do. Most students think students should doing lot of homework. It's bad for children having a good rest.
3. 不顾词语和句子的搭配关系, 胡编乱造。 They thought much homework made students cannot have a good rest and cannot do the things students like. It seems that our teachers give us much homework so that we can't finish it on time.
4. 用中文思维, 逐字逐句译成英语, 不顾两种语言 的句法结构差异。也就是中英文思维 切换不到位 I think students have too much homework is not useful. It makes students can't do the things they like. 5. 前后时态不一致。 most parents thought it can review what students have learned. 6. 书写太差或涂改太多, 影响卷面的整洁.
Come and see me whenever you are convenient. There are 5 people sit in the classroom. I sometimes forgot my English book at home. I very like studying English. Read books in the morning is better. it is convenient to you sitting left very much Reading
写作的基本原则 1. 短语优先原则 --- 词汇选择，固定搭配。 2. 多变句式原则 --- 句型多样，与众不同 3. 条理性原则 -- 层次分明（一般分成三段比 较好，最好体现总分总 4. 无低级错误原则 I is, She are. 5. 书写工整漂亮原则
一、 词汇选择 — （短语优先） 用词组代替单词的拼凑。 1. I don't like English, because it's kind of difficult for me. I like apples rather than bananas..
2. 多亏了你的帮忙，我通过了考试。 Thanks to your help, I have passed the test. With the help of you,..... I’ll thank you if you invite me 3. 如果你能邀请我，我非常感谢您。 = Thank you for inviting me. = Thank you for your invitation.
1 ）过去这里是清澈的河流，而现在很脏 It was a clean river in the past, but now is dirty. There used to be a clean river, but now it is so dirty. You gave me a pleasant surprise. What a pleasant surprise you gave me! 2 ）你给我了一个惊喜。
3.We must do something to stop pollution. Something must be done to stop pollution. It is necessary for us to do things to stop pollution 4.You can find my house easily. You have no trouble/difficulty in finding my house. You can find my house without any difficulty.
5. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. 6. The old photo made me think of my happy childhood. Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable. The old photo reminded me of my happy childhood.
. 7. He is surprised that the little girl knows so many things. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.
在写建议时, 1. Here is my advice on how to..... 2. You are supposed to... 3. You 'd better(not) do sth. 4. You should do sth. 1. It is reported that..... 2. It is said that... 3. It is known that.... 4. It seems that... 在写报道时：
1. 多运用熟悉的句型 so that so.....that.. too....to if 引导 的条件句 I think /find it + 形容词 +to do sth. There be 句型 It takes/took +time +to do sth. I think /believe that
逻辑角度合适的过渡性词汇 ⑴ 排序关系 ⑵ 并列关系 ⑶ 举例关系 ⑷ 转折关系 ⑸ 因果关系 ⑹ 归纳总结 ⑺ 递进关系 first; firstly; second; secondly; last but not least and; too; as well as; along with; together with for example; for instance; like; such as; as for but; however; while; though; on the contrary because; since; thanks to; as a result (of); therefore in a word; what’s more; besides; what’s worse;