第二部分 高频话题写作指导 八年级（上） Units 8-10.

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1 第二部分 高频话题写作指导 八年级（上） Units 8-10

2 制定计划 写作导图 从广西近五年“制定计划”相关话题的书面表达来看，其主要涉及的命题角度为：制定学习、班级、学校、团队、假期、晚会、社会实践等的活动计划，如：2014年南宁征集毕业典礼活动计划；2014年柳州去幸福村做志愿者的活动计划；2014年北海讨论班级户外活动的事项； 2012年Li Tao去暑期度假的

3 活动安排；2012年记录参加的一次社会实践活动；2010年南宁写邮件通知郊游的活动安排；2010年北海草拟夏令营活动的通知。由此可见，该话题是广西各地市考查频次较高的话题，应引起考生的重视。以（2014年南宁）为例：

4 写作范文详见：

5 Sending best wishes (headmaster) Showing thanks (teachers)
be happy to show… when ,where Beginning Sending best wishes (headmaster) Plan for the gradu-ation cere-mony Three activities Showing thanks (teachers) … Ending hope, choose

6 亮点句型速成 常用句型：He wants to relax and learn something in the countryside. 推荐句型： ①He wants to not only relax but also learn something in the countryside.

7 ②He prefers to stay in the countryside for that he can relax and learn something there.
③He wishes to go to the countryside in order that/so that he can relax and learn something there.

8 开头句： 1. The summer vacation is coming, and I prepare to visit my grandparents in the countryside. 2. My classmates decided/made a decision to help the people in the old home.

9 中间句： 1. He wants to not only relax but also learn something in the countryside. 2. I am looking forward to seeing you this summer vacation. 3. To work out a plan, one has to start with some research. 4. I haven’t made up my mind whether to

10 go skating or not. 5. I have arranged a one-day trip to Chongqing for you. 6. It’ll take about two hours to get there by bus. 7. At about eleven o’clock, we’ll leave the Summer Palace for Old Beijing.

11 结尾句： 1. Let’s make a plan for the coming vacation together. 2. Make a good plan for your summer holiday and do something meaningful. 详见“28天话题词汇分类速记表”话题（九）计划与安排

12 典例剖析 初中毕业之际，校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业典礼活动计划。假定你是李华，请根据要点写一封信，提出你的建议。 写作要点：
时间、地点 7月1日，学校报告厅 三项活动 1. 校长讲话送祝福 2. 学生发言谈感恩 3. ……

13 【审题指导】 细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息： 1. 本文是向同学们征集毕业典礼活动的倡议信，因此文章为应用文，需注意书信的基本格式；所采用的时态应以一般将来时为主。最好是先开门见山说出你此时的感受，再对计划内容进行说明，说出实施计划方案，即你自己的见解。 2. 计划内容给出了两项，我们要补充一项：学生给母校赠礼物、学生的节目表演、茶话会等，以使文章内容更加丰满。

14 ②We will have it in our school hall on July 1st.
【范文点评】 ①I’m very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony. 　　 ②We will have it in our school hall on July 1st. ①首句用to引导的动词不定式表达自己写这篇文章的目的； ②用介词in和on明确指出活动安排的时间和地点，简洁明了，让读者一目了然；

15 ③At the beginning of the meeting, our headmaster will give us a speech, sending best wishes to everyone there. It may last for ten minutes. Then three students chosen from us will have a ③文中At the beginning of, Then, Finally三个过渡词的连续使用，使毕业典礼的安排条理清晰，也会让读者清楚地看到文章的发展脉络，对作文留下好的印象；

16 talk about showing their thanks to their teachers.
It may last for fifteen minutes. Finally, we will have a big party. Both the teachers and the students can sing, dance or act in the party. We will have great fun. 同时，give sb. a speech, send best wishes to sb., last for等短语的使用，展示了作者较强的语言驾驭能力和英文写作功底。

17 This is what we will do. I hope you will choose my plan.
Yours， Li Hua