Try to write He Mengling Daqu Middle School.

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1 Try to write He Mengling Daqu Middle School

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3 What problems do my students have? Can you give us some advice?
Qiu Yiran: I am not good at English listening. Zheng Siting: I am worried about my grades and don’t sleep well. Wang Peng: I am a little fat, and I worry about the PE test in May. Chai Luping: I have a lot of homework and always stay up late every night. 1. Why don’t you do…. / why not do… 2. What/How about doing… 3. (I think) you should /could… . give advice 4. (In my opinion/view), you’d better do… 5.It’s very important/helpful… for you to … . 6. It’s a good idea /way to … …

4 Practice ★ It’s very important/helpful… for you to … . 吃蔬菜和水果对你来说很重要。 It’s very important for you to eat vegetables and fruit. 我认为每天锻炼对你来说很有帮助。 In my opinion, It’s very helpful for you to do exercise every day. ★It’s a good idea to … 听英文广播是一个不错的主意。 It’s a good idea to listen to the English radio. 我认为向老师寻求帮助是一个不错的办法。 I think it’s a good way to ask the teacher for help.

5 use different sentence patterns
Practice （中考链接） use different sentence patterns 三年的初中生活让我收获满满。校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点。 （2017宁波中考作文） Advice for students Advice for parents keep healthy join clubs develop your study skills … encourage…more not compare…with… allow…to make decisions 注意（1）短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名（3）词数：80-100（4）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 短文首句：How time flies! Now_____（you/your children) are students of Grade 9._________________________________________________ you I think you should keep healthy. It’s a good idea to join clubs. In my opinion, you’d better develop your study skills. It’s important for you to learn to relax yourself.

6 8-9 Put them together Mark _____ Use linking words
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. ________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________ I think you should keep healthy. It’s a good idea to join clubs. In my opinion, you’d better develop your study skills. It’s important for you to learn to relax yourself. 31 words 6

7 Have a try Mark _____ Use linking words 11-12
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. ________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ First/ Firstly/First of all,… I think you should keep healthy. It’s a good idea to join clubs. Second/Secondly/Also,… Third/Thirdly/Besides,… In my opinion, you’d better develop the study skills. Finally/Lastly/What’s more,… It’s important for you to learn to relax yourself. 7

8 Practice 1.Use different sentence patterns
2.Use linking words（first, second…) Practice 三年的初中生活让我收获满满。校英语报邀请你写一篇短文，给即将升入九年级的学弟学妹或他们的父母提一些建议。请你结合自己的学习经历选择其中一个对象，阐述你的观点。 （2017宁波中考作文） Advice for students Advice for parents keep healthy join clubs develop your study skills … encourage…more not compare…with… allow…to make decisions 注意（1）短文必须包括你所选择一方的所有要点，并适当发挥（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名（3）词数：80-100（4）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。 短文首句： How time flies! Now__________（you/your children) are students of Grade9.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ your children four sentences

9 Let's try it together! Why? First, I think you should keep healthy.
How? Health is the first. A good body is helpful for your study. what? because First, I think you should keep healthy, _______ health is the first ____ a good body is ______ helpful for your study. and also You can do exercise every day, such as running or walking. You can eat more vegetables and fruit every day. not only but also To keep healthy, you can _________ do exercise ________ eat more vegetables and fruit every day. You should have enough sleep. so that To keep healthy, you should have enough sleep ________ you will be full of energy.

10 13-14 Put them together! Mark ______ WOW!
How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. First, I think you should keep healthy. Health is the first. You can not only do exercise but also eat more vegetables and fruit every day. Besides, it’s a good idea to join clubs. What’s more, you’d better develop your study skills. Finally, it’s important for you to learn to relax yourself. 55 words

11 …develop your study skills… …learn to relax yourself …
Have a try Why? Each group chooses one of the point to make the sentence better. How? …keep healthy… …join clubs… …develop your study skills… …learn to relax yourself … what? 2 or 3 sentences about 25 words. First, I think you should keep healthy. Because health is the first. You can not only do exercise but also eat more vegetables and fruit every day. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

12 Example How time flies! Now you are students of Grade 9. I’d like to tell you something that will make your school life more comfortable and wonderful. First, I think you should keep healthy. So don’t forget to exercise every day. Besides, it’s a good idea to join clubs so that you can learn better and make more friends. What’s more, you’d better develop your study skills and you will make great progress. Finally, it’s important for you to learn to relax yourself, such as listening to music, hanging out with friends, and watching movies. I wish you success and good luck! 91 words

13 Summary: Try to use different sentence patterns Try to use the linking words Try to make the sentences better

14 Practice makes perfect!
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15 Homework: Do the exercises as usual Try to make your passage better
(write 2 or 3 sentences for each point) Advice for parents …encourage…more …not compare…with… …allow…to make decisions …

16 WISH YOU SUCCESS ! GOOD LUCK !