高中书面表达训练.

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1 高中书面表达训练

2 高中书面表达训练 学会正确使用时态 学会合并句子 学会写应用文 创新演练

3 考虑动作发生的时空定位；各种时态的应用； 考虑与主语的逻辑关系： 1）主谓关系－－主动语态 2）动宾关系－－被动语态
1、用所给动词的适当形式填空，完成下列短文。 [要点提示] 使用谓语动词时应注意以下几点： 与主语的单复数保持一致； 考虑动作发生的时空定位；各种时态的应用； 考虑与主语的逻辑关系： 　　1）主谓关系－－主动语态 　　2）动宾关系－－被动语态 　　3）不及物动词无被动语态

4 A lot of problems_____________________
(already cause). In future, many more problems ____________(cause), unless we ___ (take) action now. Most of the problems ___ (be) in cities. When the streets ______ (fill) with cars, no one ___ (can) travel quickly. The air ________ (pollute) by gases from cars. The problems__________ (discuss) at the World Conference on Climate Changes, first in Kyoto and then in Buenos Aires. It ______________(suggest) that air pollution _____ (cut) in future years. have already been caused will be caused take are are filled can is polluted were discussed was suggested be cut Back Help

5 理顺上下文逻辑关系: 正确使用and, but, or, so, when, while, for, whoever, besides等。
2.根据一定的上下文关系用and, but, or, besides, when, while, whoever, such… that, so把下列各句连接起来，组成一个单句、并列句或复合句（原句可作适当改动）。 Tips 要点提示： 合并句子时应注意以下几点： 理顺上下文逻辑关系: 正确使用and, but, or, so,　when, while, for, whoever, besides等。 平衡上下文信息重心；正确使用主、从句，分词，with 结构，独立主格结构； 考虑上下句的形式一致：1）时态呼应；2）指代统一。

6 Go to see the doctor at once, or your cold may get worse.
a) Go to see the doctor at once. b) Your cold may get worse. 2. a) The teacher came into the classroom . b)He took a book in his hands. 3. a) We were about to start off last night. b) The phone in the living room began to ring. Help Go to see the doctor at once, or your cold may get worse. The teacher came into the classroom , With a book in his hands. . We were about to start off last night when the phone in the living room began to ring.

7 4. a) Unfortunately, John’s car broke down on the way home.
b) John had to stop a car for a lift. 5). a) He has made great progress in his studies. b) All the teachers praise him. 6. a) Some people waste food. b) Other people haven’t enough food. Help Unfortunately, John’s car broke down on the way home, so he had to stop a car for a lift. He has made such great progress in his studies that all the teachers praise him. Some people waste food, while others haven’t enough food.

8 b) I have an important meeting to attend after lunch.
7. a) It’s too late to go to the cinema now. b) I have an important meeting to attend after lunch. 8. a) He tell the news to everyone b) He wants to knew it . Help It’s too late to go the cinema now. Besides, I have an important meeting to attend after lunch. He tell the news to whoever wants to know it . Back

9 常用应用文的基本文体是： 范文阅读与模仿 通知文体: 1）格式－－署名、日期等（口头通知除外）
书信文体 日记文体 通知文体 范文阅读与模仿 通知文体: 1）格式－－署名、日期等（口头通知除外） 2）多用简单句，写清楚有关事宜的对象、时间、地点等。

10 书面表达（94 年高考） 提示：你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会，要在学校广播中宣布此事，并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友听懂，请你用英语写一篇广播通知。要点如下：宗旨：欢迎来访的美国朋友。组织者：学生会　时间：　8月15日(星期六)晚7:30　地点：主楼屋顶花园。活动内容：音乐、跳舞、唱歌、游戏、交换小礼品（请包装好、签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词）注意：①广播稿约100词。②应包括以上要点，但不要逐字翻译，要组织成一篇通顺连贯的短文。③开头语已为你写好。May I have your attention,please? I have an announcement to make.　　生词：交换礼品——to exchange gifts　学生会——the Student Union 

11 范文阅读 阅读下面范文（选自1994年英语高考全国卷）
May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Student Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, August15, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 pm. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. Will everybody please bring along a small gift for this purpose? Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes. Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. There’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome. 范文阅读 Back

12 创新演练 2、根据下列内容，模仿范文，写一则书面通知，词数为80－100。
1）事宜：关于计算机的用途以及如何利用Internet网络进行学习的讲座 2）讲座人：浙江大学计算机系王书涵教授 3）时间：12月22日，星期六，下午2:00 4）地点：图书楼204室 5）参加对象：电脑爱好者 6）要求：参加者准备一些自己在学习过程中遇到的问题 7）组织者：校学生会 8）通知时间：12月19日

13 写作提示 1）选择准确词语，表达下列要点： 正确组织句子，完整表达上述 要点。 2) 连句成文，连接上下文，注意书 面通知的格式。
正确组织句子，完整表达上述 要点。 2) 连句成文，连接上下文，注意书 面通知的格式。 审读短文，修改文字，调整布局

14 The lecture is about the use of computer.
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15 how to learn through the Internet
The lecture is about how to learn through the Internet. 幻灯片 24Back

16 Professor Wang Shuhan from the Computer Department
of Zhejiang University The lecturer is given by Professor Wang Shuhan, from the Computer Department of Zhejiang University. Back

17 The lecture begins at 2:00 pm, Saturday, on December 22.
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18 The lecture begins at 2:00 pm, Saturday, on December 22.
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19 Room 204 of the Library Building
The lecture will be held in Room 204 of the Library Building. Back

20 Any computer-lover is welcome.
computer-lovers Any computer-lover is welcome. Back

21 Please prepare some questions in learning through the Internet.
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22 要点如下： 计算机的用途 如何利用Internet 网络进行学习 浙江大学计算机系王书涵教授 12月22日 星期六下午2:00 图书楼204室 电脑爱好 学习中遇到的问题 幻灯片 13

23 连句成文 The lecture is about the use of computer.
The lecture is about how to learn through the Internet. The lecturer is given by Professor Wang Shuhan, from the Computer Department of Zhejiang University. The lecture begins at 2:00 pm, Saturday, on the twenty-second of December. The lecture will be held in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any computer-lover is welcome. Please prepare some questions in learning through the Internet.

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25 To help students learn more about computers, we have invited Professor Wang Shuhan from the Computer Department of Zhejiang University to give us a lecture on Saturday, December 22. Professor Wang will talk about the use of computer and how to learn through the Internet. The lecture begins at 2:00 pm in Room 204 of the Library Building. Any computer-lover is welcome to attend the lecture. Please bring your questions in computer learning. Professor Wang will leave you time for questions. Don’t forget to be on time. 范文

26 Homework: 你在校学生会负责“英语角”活动，请为你们学校的英语广播站起草一则通知。要点如下：
英语角定于星期四下午四点在学校花园里举行。 五位在北京师范大学学习的美国学生，将应邀参加。 Tina，他们中的一员，将向我们介绍美国人的生活方式和美国的学校教育。 之后，大家可就两国学生的生活、语言学习等题目自由交谈。 词数100左右。 结束

27 Thanks for your coming