英语专业4级2012年作文试卷评析 华东理工大学 杨慧敏副教授
英语专业四级考试在线课堂 主讲人杨慧敏副教授简介 英语专业四级阅卷作文组组长 华东理工大学外国语学院英语系系主任
英语专业四级考试在线课堂 Lecture Outline I. Analysis of the Writing Rubric and the Marking Standard Writing Rubric Marking Standard II. Sample Analysis from the Point of View of Analytical Scoring Organizational Analysis Sample Analysis
英语专业四级考试在线课堂 II. Sample Analysis from the Point of View of Analytical Scoring A. Organizational analysis: complete organization e.g. 1 Para 1…In addition to the traditional ways to celebrate the national festival, modern elements have been added to it with the development of society. Para 2 From the very beginning, the festival was celebrated in honor of a patriotic poet Qu Yuan who was exiled for political reasons. Para 3 Traditionally, Chinese people hold a boat race on that day. …However, with the fast changing society and quick-paced modern life, the ways to celebrate the holiday have varied. Para 4 All in all, people maintain the traditional festival and also celebrate in both traditional and modern ways. In the future, variation in celebrating the DBF will come about and make the festival more meaningful.
英语专业四级考试在线课堂 II. Sample Analysis from the Point of View of Analytical Scoring A. Organizational analysis: introduction e.g. 2 Among the many national festivals in China, some came from length or myth, for example, Spring Festival; some are celebrated for memorizing special days or our forefathers. We celebrate the DBF for a famous poet about 2000 years ago. His name was Qu Yuan.