日常应用类作文 by 昂立外语中考项目部. 考点分析 如何将所学运用到实际生活中，成为 大家一直思考的一个问题。日常应用类作文 包括日常所用书信格式，日记类等。 此类作文就要求考生能够掌握基本的应 用类作文格式，并能用比较流畅的语言在规 范的格式下，规定的字数下阐明自己的行文 意图。

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1 日常应用类作文 by 昂立外语中考项目部

2 考点分析 如何将所学运用到实际生活中，成为 大家一直思考的一个问题。日常应用类作文 包括日常所用书信格式，日记类等。 此类作文就要求考生能够掌握基本的应 用类作文格式，并能用比较流畅的语言在规 范的格式下，规定的字数下阐明自己的行文 意图。

3 日常应用类作文怎么出题？ 书信类真题再现

4 2012 年上海中考英语 Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation ( 根据所给情景写一封不少于 60 词的信 ) Suppose you are Joe. Your friend Betty is upset about a coming exam for she cares too much about the result. What do you think? Try to offer her some advice. ( 假设你是 Joe ，你的好朋友 Betty 因为过于在意考 试结果而感到焦虑。请给他写一封信，谈谈你的 看法，并给她一些建议。 ) ( 注意：信中不得出现具体人名，校名等个人信息， 否则不予评分。 )

5 2013 年奉贤区一模卷 Write a letter in at least 60 words according to the given situation ( 根据所给情景写一封不少于 60 词的信 ) Suppose you are Sara, you want to enter your ideal school –Flower Senior High School. Please write a letter to recommend yourself. You can introduce your hobbies, personalities, studies, advantages and so on. ( 假设你是 Sara, 你想进入你心仪的花儿高级中学, 请 为自己写封自荐信。你可以介绍你的兴趣爱好、个 性特长、学业情况、优点等等。注意： 1. 开头、结 尾已给出，不计入总词数 2. 短文中不得出现考生的 姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分 )

6 2012 静安区一模卷 Write a letter of at least 60 words about the topic “A suggestion to my_____ teacher”. ( 以 “ 给 ______( 学科 ) 老师的一条建议 ” 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词 的信，标点符号不占格 ) 注意：文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名 及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。 )The following points as a reference. Whom are you going to give the suggestion to? How do you like this subject or your teacher? And your reason(s)? What is your suggestion? And tell your teacher your reason(s)?(Would you show two reasons?) What result(s) will you expect to get from your suggestion ？

7 2013 年宝山区一模卷 April 23 is World Reading Day. Write a short passage of at least 60 words to call on your classmates to get into good habits of reading and read more good books. (4 月 23 日是 “ 世界读书日 ”, 请你写一篇短文，呼吁全班同 学以实际行动迎接 “ 世界读书日 ” 的到来，为创建 “ 书香校 园 ” ，多读书、读好书，养成课外读书的好习惯。字数不 少于 60 个，标点符号不占格。要求内容切题，意思连贯.) ( 注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信 息，否则不予评分. ) Use the following points as a guide. （短文须包含下 列要点） : 1. What do the students who are not interested in study usually do in their spare time? 2.What are the advantages of reading? 3.What are your suggestions?

8 书信类 -- 小试牛刀 李华想学 _____, 可是他妈妈反对他的兴趣认为作为中学生 应该多花时间在读书上. 而 _____ 它会分散学习精力, 于是两 人吵了一架. 请你以李华的身份写一份信给妈妈, 大约 100 字左右. 内容包 括 : 为吵架的事向妈妈道歉 陈列喜欢 _____ 的理由 对于未来的一些计划以回报妈妈

9 破题 1. 考点分析： 如今教学一贯倡导以学生为主体，而让学生能够说自己所说 也是中考作文的一个最终目标，拥有自己的想法并能用英 语表达阐述给他人。 2. 体裁： 书信写作类（理由陈述类） 3. 题裁（话题）： 兴趣爱好

10 书信格式 开头顶行写 : Dear ***, 每段之间要空行 正文结束之后空行写： Yours/Yours love/Best regards/Sincerely/Best wishes 然后换一行在同样位置签名就可以啦 ~

11 草稿（提纲） 一. 书信类文章开头部分（陈述现状）： 开门见山：表明写作目的。 时态：现在时 语态：适合使用主动语态

12 草稿（提纲） 二. 书信类文章中间部分（理由列举）：

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15 Brainstorming 原因有哪些呢？

16 A is a good way to do B relax yourself release one’s stress A gives sb joy/bring joy to sb A gives me so much joy that I can’t live without it. A makes my life colorful and meaningful

17 enrich my life improve my interpersonal skills enlarge my social circles strengthen my body and mind acquire a new skill help me acquire confidence cultivate my interests broaden my horizon

18 草稿（提纲） 三. 书信类文章结尾部分 （总结，强调，希冀）：

19 对于未来的一些计划以回报妈妈 用功读书 (study hard) 合理分配练琴时间 (spare reasonable time for the guitar) 课余弹曲子帮助妈妈放松（ help mum release the pressure ） 保证不会影响课业（ Keep the balance between my hobby and my academic life ）

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21 如何表达原因？ 因为 ( 后面跟句子 ) ： because ， as ， since ， for 请分别用着四个词造句 I want to learn the guitar because …. As/since playing the guitar makes me look cool ， I can gain confidence in front of my friends. Learning the guitar takes less time and money ， for it is not as hard to learn or expensive as other musical instrument like the piano.

22 表达原因五模板 The reason why I like doing A is. that…. eg. The reason why I want to learn the guitar is that …..

23 表达原因五模板 These are all reasons why I like doing A. eg. ….these are all the reasons why I want to learn the guitar.

24 表达原因五模板 There are 3 reasons why I like A. First, … Second. … Finally… eg. There are 3 reasons why I like to learn the guitar. First, … Second,… Finally, ….

25 表达原因五模板 I like A, which is why …… eg. I like music, which is why I want to learn to play a musical instrument.

26 表达原因五模板 I like A for the simple reason that…. I like playing the guitar for the simple reason that I like music. I like travelling for the simple reason that I enjoy the beautiful nature. 慎用

27 如何表达目的 in order to /so as to … in order that/so that… I learn to play the guitar so as to look cool in front of my friends, which will help me gain more confidence.

28 如何表达结果 so…that… /such…that… too…to… /enough…to… Practicing the guitar will take so much of my spare time that I will spend a lot less time on computer games.

29 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) A help me acquire B 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 Learning guitar can help me acquire a sense of music.

30 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) One of the benefits I can gain from doing A is B 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 One of the benefits I can gain from learning guitar is a sense of music.

31 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) What I can get from doing A is B 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 What I can get from learning guitar is a sense of guitar.

32 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) A is beneficial to me because B… 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 Learning guitar is beneficial to me because it can help to acquire a sense of music.

33 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) A contributes to B 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 Learning guitar contributes to a better sense of music.

34 如何表达有助于六大招 ( 除了因为 ) An advantage of A is that + 句子 学习吉他有助于培养音乐感觉。 An advantage of learning guitar is that I can acquire a sense of music.

35 如何表达计划 I’m going to do…. I intend/plan/want to do …. I promise I will… I know you always want me to ….

36 写作 请按照刚才教的提纲布局、好词好句，写 一个有亮点句的开头 几个原因 一个提升型的结尾 ~

37 开头 13 分版本 I make a mistake and I want to say sorry. 分析：语法有错误，且没有说清道歉的理由。

38 开头 16 分版本 I’m sorry for what I did last night. I shouldn’t have talked back to you. 分析 : 有从句，有虚拟，内容基本说清了。

39 开头满分版本 I am feeling deeply sorry for last night’s argument with you about whether to play the guitar in my spare time. 分析：用现在进行时表示歉意，一句话把内容都 说清了。

40 描述原因 13 分版本 I really like to play the guitar because I like it very much and it make me happy. 分析没有内容，结构简单，还有语法错误。

41 描述原因 15 分版本 I really like to play guitar because of the following reasons. First ， I love music. …Second ， it relaxes me…. Finally ， it’s not as hard to learn as the piano… 内容比较充分，结构清晰，用词不是非常出彩， 可得基本分。

42 描述原因满分版本 One of the reasons why I want to learn the guitar is that music gives me so much joy that I could feel happier while playing. 从句结构好，内容充分有真情实感。

43 描述原因满分版本 Another reason is that guitar is not as hard to learn as any other musical instrument. Therefore, I guess it won’t take me too much time. 使用 not as … as 结构，漂亮简单。

44 描述原因满分版本 The last reason is that it can make me look cool, which will increase my confidence. which 非限制性定语从句。

45 结尾 13 分版本 I will study hard and please let me learn it. 分析：用 will 感觉决心不强，内容过于简单，说服 里不强。

46 结尾 16 分版本 I promise that practicing the guitar won’t affect my academic work. On the contrary/Instead, I’ll make a better use of time and be more efficient. So ， let me learn it. 分析：使用从句，动名词做主语来引出主题， 内 容充分，结尾升华。

47 结尾满分版本 I swear to God that practicing the piano won’t affect my study life ， which on the contrary, is just like putting a red cherry on the cake. Mum, you can see how much I love guitar. So, please ， please ， let me learn it ！ 分析：使用比较更加突出自己想学吉他的心志的 词语，更有说服力。 。

48 检查 As a member of drawing club, drawing never failed to fascinate me. Twice a week we get together to practice drawing skills as well as share our works.

49 改错与优化 As a member of drawing club, drawing never failed to fascinate me. Twice a week we get together to practice drawing skills as well as share our works. As a member of drawing club, drawing never fails to fascinate me. We have a gathering twice a week to practice as well as share our works in order to improve our drawing skills.

50 检查 Whenever there is an art exhibition, we will go to see it.It can not only bring me so much joy but also broaden my views.

51 改错与优化 Whenever there is an art exhibition, we will go to see it.It can not only bring me so much joy but also broaden my views. Whenever there is an art exhibition, we will go to see it.It can not only bring me so much joy but broaden my horizon as well.

52 检查 Our club also organizes some small exhibitions enable us to exhibit our own works either at school or in the community. That makes me so proud that I enjoy drawing better.

53 改错与优化 Our club also organizes some small exhibitions enable us to exhibit our own works either at school or in the community. That makes me so proud that I enjoy drawing better. Our club also organizes some small exhibitions enabling us to have our own works exhibited either at school or in the community, which makes me so proud when seeing people appreciating my paintings.

54 检查 It is drawing that gives me a sense of art and I believe that it will be my lifelong hobby.

55 改错与优化 It is drawing that gives me a sense of art and I believe that it will be my lifelong hobby. In short, it is drawing that helps me cultivate my sense of art and it will be my lifelong hobby undoubtedly.

56 书信类作文实战演练 作文题 : 学校社团招新，你想写封自荐信参加其中一个俱 乐部。 提示：可以申请任意兴趣爱好小组 Use the following as a reference ： Which group do you want to be a member of ? Why do you want to join it? How do you feel as such a member?

57 日常应用类作文怎么出题？ 日记类

58 日记类真题再现

59 日记类样题 Write a diary at least 60 words about the topic "On my Way(to)...". （以 “ 在我去 …… 的路上 ” 为题写一篇不少于 60 个词的日记，标点符号不 占格） （注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予 评分。） Use the following points as a reference. ( 以下问题仅供参考 ) What did you want to do on that day? What happened on the way? What is your impression? ( 注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评 分。 )

60 日记类 考点分析： 用来叙述一天中发生的有意义事件的文体 日记类作文写作内容： 时态：多为一般过去时 先后顺序的词语（ at first, then, later on, afterwards, finally, at last 等） 切记不可流水账！ 记事（更多） 记人

61 日记格式 左上角写当天的日期 注：年份之前有一个逗号，而且月份通常可用缩写词（如： Jan., Feb., Mar. 等）。如果需要写星期，可将其写在日期的前面或后面。如： Monday, May15th, 2008 或 May15th, 2008, Monday 右上角写当天的天气情况 (cloudy/ clear/ windy/ rainy/ fine/ snowy…) 月、日，年 日、月，年

62 日记类范文 Mar.3rd, Friday Cloudy This morning, I got up very early and left home at 7 o’clock as usual. But on my way to school, something unusual happened. As I was about to cross the street, a car which was at a very high speed passed by and knocked down a little girl in front of me. The girl began to cry loudly at once because her feet were badly hurt and she couldn’t walk properly. I ran to her, trying to help her. Just then, a policeman came. He stopped a taxi and we together sent the little girl to a nearby hospital. Although I was late for school, I felt very proud of myself because I’ve done what I should do.

63 日记类范文 Mar.3rd, Friday Cloudy This morning, I got up very early and left home at 7 o’clock as usual. But on my way to school, something unusual happened. As I was about to cross the street, a car which was at a very high speed passed by and knocked down a little girl in front of me. The girl began to cry loudly at once because her feet were badly hurt and she couldn’t walk properly. I ran to her, trying to help her. Just then, a policeman came. He stopped a taxi and we together sent the little girl to a nearby hospital. Although I was late for school, I felt very proud of myself because I’ve done what I should do.

64 检查 It is said that the Yi people in Yunnan are very hospitality, at the first night in Yunnan the passionate Yis taught us a lot of local songs which sounded like nature and danced with us around the fire that made us feel like in the paradise.

65 改错与优化 It is said that the Yi people in Yunnan are very hospitality, at the first night in Yunnan the passionate Yis taught us a lot of local songs which sounded like nature and danced with us around the fire that made us feel like in the paradise. Not only did the enthusiastic Yis teach us lots of local songs that sounded as they came from the nature itself, but also invited us to dance with them around the fire, which made us feel Yunnan was more a paradise than just a tourist attraction on the earth.

66 检查 The Yis clothes also attracted us a lot so that we asked the locals to lend us some traditional raiment. It was my first time to wear such heavy clothes that decorated by different ornaments. We took photos and had a nice time by wearing that. After having a little break, we went to see the magnificent river that called The Lantsand River.

67 改错与优化 The Yis clothes also attracted us a lot so that we asked the locals to lend us some traditional raiment. It was my first time to wear such heavy clothes that decorated by different ornaments. We took photos and had a nice time by wearing that. After having a little break, we went to see the magnificent river that called The Lantsand River. What’s more, fascinated by their clothes, we asked the locals to let us try some traditional raiment on.It was my first time to wear such heavy clothes decorated by different ornaments. We took photos and did enjoy ourselves by wearing that. After having a little break, we went to see the magnificent river called The Lantsand River.

68 检查 The famous fisherman took us to sail the bamboo raft to catching fish. By the way, with the wonderful songs and the full-bodied personality, we felt the passion between people that could melt every distance and every heart. Actually I was so loath to part with them, but I had to.

69 改错与优化 The famous fisherman took us to sail the bamboo raft to catching fish. By the way, with the wonderful songs and the full-bodied personality, we felt the passion between people that could melt every distance and every heart. Actually I was so loath to part with them, but I had to. The famous fisherman took us to sail the bamboo raft to catch fish. By the way, with the wonderful songs and the full-bodied personality, we felt the passion between people that had the power to melt every distance and every heart. Undoubtedly I was so loath to part with them, but I had to.

70 检查 It was the best memory in my mind that enriched my life and giving me too many feelings. Only by living with the Yis can I experience the beauty among every one.

71 改错与优化 It was the best memory in my mind that enriched my life and giving me too many feelings. Only by living with the Yis can I experience the beauty among every one. It was the best memory in my mind that enriched my life and helped broaden my horizon. When living with the Yis, I could feel the beauty among every one. Thanks all!

72 日记类作文实战演练 今天你旅游回来，感慨颇多，通过日记形式你想记录下这一天难忘的 回忆，字数 80 字左右。 难忘的事，人，地点 etc. 那是个什么样的地方？ 发生些什么事？ 意义是什么？