全国高考英语应用文写作 感谢/祝福信.

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1 全国高考英语应用文写作 感谢/祝福信

2 【必备词语】 recall those beautiful days 回忆那些美好的日子 have an injection 打针
help me with my lessons 帮助我的功课 fail in the examination 考试不合格 blessings 祝福 express one’s sincere gratitude 表达真诚的谢意 a feeling of anxiety 焦虑感 take a deep breath 深深呼一口气 calm down 冷静下来

3 【必备词语】 applause 掌声 remind sb. of ... 使某人想起
express one’s thanks for 表达某人的感谢 hospitality 好客 strict discipline 严格的纪律 treat sb. 款待某人 motherly care 母亲般的关怀 return one’s kindness 回报某人的善意

4 【好句朗诵】 1. Thank you very much in advance. 先谢谢您！
2. May all your dreams come true! 祝您梦想成真！ 3. May our friendship last till the end of the universe! 祝我们的友谊天长地久！ 4. I’m writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for teaching me the English song. 我写信来表达对你教我英文歌的衷心感谢！ 5. Without your help, the performance couldn’t have been that successful. 没有您的帮助，表演不会有那么成功。 6. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us. 我们都很想念您，也很感激您为我们做的一切。

5 【好句朗诵】 7. How is everything with you lately? 您最近如何？
8. I’d like to express my thanks for your hospitality and kindness when I was in America. 我想感谢您对我在美国时的好客和友好。 9. Best wishes to you and your family. 给您和家人致以良好的祝福！ 10. In addition, what has impressed me most is ... 而且，最让我感动的是…… 11. I hope someday you will come to visit China and I can return your kindness. 我希望有一天你能够来中国，我可以回报你的友好。

6 【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误 1. I am writing to express my thank for your advice.
1. thank改为thanks 2. Thank you for doing so much to make my trip interested. 2. interested改为interesting 3. Without your help, I couldn’t pass a driving test. 3. a改为the

7 【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误 4. I would like you to know how grateful I am to you for your kindness and generous. 4. generous改为generosity 5. Please accept my heartfelt thanks for you kind letter of sympathy. 5. you改为your 6. Nothing has given me more pleasant than the letter you sent me on the occasion of my illness. 6. pleasant改为pleasure

8 【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误 7. I thank you by the deep concern you have shown about my health. 7. by改为for 8. Your friendship like a warm fire in the icy winter, which will remain a comfort and give me strength. 8. like前面加上is

9 【单句改错】 每句只有一个错误 9. With your help we were able to visit the National Park and several other places of interesting. 9. interesting改为interest 10. Your kindness and hospitality will forever be cherished in our memorize. 10. memorize改为memory

10 【真题满分佳作赏析】 【2008全国Ⅰ卷：生日祝贺/感谢照顾】
假定你是李华，从小喜爱大熊猫(panda)，一直通过有关网站(website)关注三年前在美国圣地亚哥动物园出生的大熊猫“苏琳”和她的母亲“白云”。现在苏琳即将三岁。请根据以下要点给动物园工作人员写一封信： 1. 自我介绍； 2. 祝贺苏琳生日； 3. 感谢工作人员； 4. 索取苏琳三岁生日照。

11 满分佳作（一） Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! I’m Li Hua, a student in Sichuan. I’ve been a panda lover since I was a child. ①About three years ago I was delighted to learn that Baiyun gave birth to her daughter Sulin and I’ve been watching her grow on your website. Now she’s going to be three. ②I’d like to wish her a happy birthday and to express my thanks to you for your hard work, because of which Sulin and her parents are living a happy and healthy life in the US. By the way, could I have a photo of Sulin taken on her third birthday? ③Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua

12 满分赏析 ①用到I was delighted to learn that…这个宾语从句句型；give birth to(产子)使用得当，像这种短语如果用错，会给老师留下不好的印象，可能使作文降低一个档次。 ②用到表示感谢的句型to express my thanks to sb.；后面because of which介词加which的定语从句使句子显得更加高级。 ③Thank you very much in advance是表示感谢的套语，in advance(提前)显得语气真切。

13 满分佳作（二） Dear Sir/Madam, Greetings from China! This is Li Hua, a student in China. ①I’ve been fond of pandas since my childhood. ②Since three years ago, when the panda Baiyun gave birth to a baby panda Sulin, I have been visiting your website to keep myself informed about how things are going for them. If I remember clearly, she will turn three soon. ③I want to say happy birthday to her and express my thanks to you for your hard work, with which she has been brought up and has been living happily with her parents in the US. ④By the way, I wonder if I could have a photo taken of Sulin on her third birthday. Thank you very much in advance. Yours truly, Li Hua

14 满分赏析 ①短语be fond of，表示“喜欢”，比简单的like显得更好，符合“短语优先”的原则。 ②to keep myself informed about sth.(让我对……情况有及时的了解)，用得非常地道。 ③express my thanks to sb. for sth.作为表示感谢的句型，运用准确；with which的定语从句更显语法功力。 ④I wonder if I could…这样的句型表示请求，更显语气委婉礼貌。

15 【模仿翻译】 【2007湖南卷改编：毕业祝福】 作文原题 假设你叫李华，王平是你的同窗好友，请根据下列要点，用英文给王平写一篇毕业留言。
要点： 1. 简要表述王平在你心目中的印象； 2. 用一到两个相关事例进行具体描述； 3. 对王平表示美好的祝愿。

16 作文翻译 亲爱的王平， 是时候说再见了。是时候回忆我们一起度过的美好时光了。你正是在我需要的时候给我帮助的那个人。 还记得两年前的那个晚上吗？我突然生病时，是你背着我到附近的医院。我打针时，你把我照顾很好。后来，你设法帮助我学习。没有你的帮助，我考试不会通过了。 我依然有数百个故事和你分享。我依然有数千个祝福给你。愿你所有梦想成真！愿我们的友谊直到永远！ 你的， 李华

17 Dear Wang Ping, It’s time to say goodbye. It’s time to recall those beautiful days we spend together. You are the very person who gives me a hand when necessary. Still remember that night two years ago? When I suddenly fell ill, it was you who carried me on your back to a nearby hospital. You took good care of me while I was having an injection. Later, you managed to help me with my lessons. Without your help, I would have failed in the examination. I still have hundreds of stories to share with you. I still have thousands of blessings for you. May all your dreams come true! May our friendship last till the end of the universe! Yours, Li Hua

18 【模拟真题：感谢外教帮忙】 作文原题 假如你是李华，你的外教Bill帮你排练了一首英文歌曲，在学校的圣诞派对上你的表演取得了成功，请你写一封电子邮件，向他描述一下晚会及你的情况，并向他表示感谢。

19 作文翻译 亲爱的Bill， 我写这封信来表达我对您教我英文歌的衷心感谢，也与你分享我的经历。 因为今天是圣诞节，我们学校早上举办了一个圣诞派对，在派对上老师和学生表演了很多 精彩的节目。我唱了您教我的那首英文歌。我走上舞台的那一刻，一种紧张感袭来。然而，深呼吸之后，我冷静了下来。我的歌刚唱完，掌声如雷。我的表演棒极了。 这是我第一次在公众场合进行这样好的表演。没有您的帮助，这次表演不可能这么成功。 再次感谢，圣诞快乐！ 您真挚的， 李华

20 Dear Bill, I’m writing this letter to express my sincere gratitude to you for teaching me the English song, and to share my experience with you. Since it is Christmas today, our school held a Christmas party in the morning, where there were so many amazing performances by students and teachers. I sang the song you taught me. The moment I got on the stage, a feeling of anxiety came over to me. However, taking a deep breath, I calmed down. Right after my song, applause overwhelmed me! My performance was absolutely fantastic. It is the first time for me to give such a wonderful performance in public. Without your help, the performance couldn’t have been that successful. Thanks again and merry Christmas! Sincerely, Li Hua

21 【全真考场】 【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】 假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。 写作要点： 1. 对她表达感谢之意； 2. 介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情； 3. 希望了解她的近况。 Dear Sue, …… All the best! Li Hua

22 【2010陕西卷改编：感激老师】 Dear Sue,
I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s been almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us when we were together. We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? The tree you planted yourself is growing well. Will you come back to see it? How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch. All the best! Li Hua

23 【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】 假设你是李华，暑假你随学校组织的访问团去美国参观访问了几所中学，并与纽约州长岛市Newcomers High School 的学生Tina成了好朋友。回国后，你打算给Tina写一封信，主要内容如下： 1. 表达你的感激之情，以及邀请和祝愿； 2. 赞叹该校美丽的环境和严谨的学风； 3. 谈一下你的志愿。 Dear Tina, How are you? I am now back in China. …… Yours, Li Hua

24 【模拟真题：感谢外国学生的招待】 Dear Tina,
How are you? I am now back in China. I had a wonderful time in America, which I will always treasure. First, I’d like to express my thanks for your hospitality and kindness when I was in America. It was so nice of you to show me around your school and introduce its history to me. Your school is amazing in that it has not only a beautiful campus but also strict discipline. Besides, the delicious food to which you treated me impressed me deeply. Hopefully you can come to China some day and I have the chance to repay you in the same way. Best wishes to you and your family. Yours, Li Hua

25 【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】 假设你是李华，刚结束学校安排的“加拿大之旅”返回长沙。请给你在加拿大时接待家庭的主人Johnson夫妇写一封信，主要内容包括： 1. 你已安全返回长沙； 2. 感谢他们的盛情款待和照顾; 3. 希望他们有时间来长沙游玩。 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson, I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Changsha. … Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua

26 【模拟真题：感谢接待家庭】 Dear Mr. and Mrs. Johnson,
I’m writing to tell you that I had a safe journey back to Changsha. Thanks to your hospitality, I had a wonderful time in Canada. It was my first time to go abroad and I was naturally a bit nervous when I first arrived. The first time I saw you at the airport, I knew from your warm smile that everything would be all right. With your help, I visited so many places of interest in Canada, of which I have good memories. In addition, what has impressed me most is your motherly care when I was ill, which made me feel at home. I hope someday you will come to visit Changsha and I can return your kindness. Best wishes! Yours truly, Li Hua

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