还有一个月作文怎么办？.

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1 还有一个月作文怎么办？

2 CET4 高分作文的特征 1.内容切题 2.表达清楚 3. 文字连贯 4.句式多变 5.语言规范

3 建议： 1.背诵范文（最近10年的CET4, CET6级真题范文） 2.默写：在背诵的基础上默写真题范文（不超过10分钟表明你已经熟练掌握），再对照范文改正错误。 3.仿写（相似话题文章以便熟记范文的表达）

4 四级作文备考建议 　　1．将作文提纲观点分解为每一段的主题句，扩充内容。 　　2．只使用自己能驾驭的句式和词语。 　　3．长短句搭配使用，用短句表达观点，长句推理分析。 　　5．建议充分利用历年真题，尤其是最近六年的真题资料。 　　6． 勤于动笔，避免眼高手低。只有把平时练习当做四级考试一样认真对待，四级考试时才能像平时练习一样轻松自如。

5 作文改卷老师忠告： 1.印象很重要（书写需工整，试卷整洁，字迹清晰）改卷老师只有很短时间阅卷，不超过3分钟阅卷甚至更短时间。 2.作文最好无涂改（先想好再写，最好不用涂改液，试卷都要扫描后到电脑上阅卷，涂改液会影响扫描效果） 3.黑色签字笔扫描的效果会较好 4.尽量少用作文模板，少说废话，实在要用模板，模板式的套话也不宜超过全文的一半篇幅。

6 讨论观点类文章 对同一件事情，人们有不同的看法，即正反观点，在写作时一般使用现在时，一般为：提出观点----两种不同的观点——对不同的观点的论据（理由）逐项做对比。有的的题目会要求说出自己的观点，可在结尾加上自己的观点并作简单说明理由，最好不要重复自己前面谈到的理由。

7 (1)模版1 Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______. Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________.

8 (2)模版2 In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years. The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________. Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.

9 (3)模版3 Nwadays more and more ______are commonly and widely used in everyday life,ranging from __________to_____________. The popularity of _______will have a great influence on ______.On the one hand,_________.On the other hand,__________. To conclude,____________are just like a double-edged sword.With them we may________.However,one point should be kept in mind that we should make sensible use,always being a master instead of slaving of them.

10 问题分析或问题解决型 1 说明现状或结果，概述某种社会现象或问题及其特点 2 分析原因或起因，阐释导致该社会现象的各种可能的原因，列举2-4点较合适 3 结论或述评，对上述观点及其原因作概述，可以是对利弊的分析也可以是提出解决的方案。

11 分析原因类作文写作模版 (1)模版 _________ is currently becoming a serve problem in China, which happen to ________. So long as ________, ___________ will always unsurprisingly ________. Why does ________ become so rampant （猖獗，狂暴）？ First and foremost,__________. Secondly,_________. Last but not least, ________. As a consequence,___________.

12 模版(2) During the last decade, there has been a steady rise in the number of _________. Three reasons, in my mind, account for this social phenomenon. First and foremost,__________. Moreover,_________. In addition,___________. As a result,__________. Personally, I firmly believe that the problem derives from __________. Thus, if the government make relevant policies and take relevant measure to __________, the problem can be readily solved in __________.

13 范文：1.现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷 课是 常见的现象
利弊分析型 范文：1.现在大学校园里，迟到、早退、旷 课是 常见的现象 2.保证学生的出勤率对大学教育的重要性 3.作为一个大学生应该怎样做 Attend Your Classes Regularly Nowadays it is a very common phenomenon that some university students are late for or even absent from classes. And still there are some students who slip out of the classroom before the class is over. Class attendance has become a thorny（痛苦的）problem to both the students and teachers.

14 In fact, it is very important for the students to attend their classes regularly. First, it will ensure you to catch up with the teachers in your learning. That is very helpful to you if you want to do a good job in your study. Second, attending classes regularly is a way of showing respect to your teachers ,too. Your teachers will feel bad if the students do not attend their classes, which, in turn, will affect their teaching and be no good for the students.

15 Third, attending classes regularly will help to form a good habit of punctuality, which is of great importance for the students to do a good job in the future. Therefore, we university students should form the good habit of attending our classes regularly from now on. And some day we‘ll benefit from it.

16 范文： 1 .越来越多的人使用信用卡，.信用卡有哪些好处 2.信用卡的弊端 3.你的观点 Credit Cards Personal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as ―plastic money, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consumers will be able to ―buy now, pay later, and many see this as an advantage.

17 But people need to be careful
But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly overburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.

18 However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of people‘s lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone. 点评 关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分： 第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应急等；第二部分，信用 卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使用。

19 模板1 Nowadays, there is a widespread concern over_____. In fact, there are both advantages and disadvantages in___. Generally speaking, it is wide believed that there are several positives as follows: Firstly,____. And secondly,___. Just as a popular saying goes: “every coin has two sides”, ____ is no exception, and in another word, it still has negative aspects. To begin with,____. In addition,___ To sum up, we should try to bring the advantages into full play, and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time. In that case, we will definitely make a better use of_______

20 模板2 Nowadays many people prefer __________ (主题) because it plays a significant role in our daily life. Generally, its advantages can be seen as follows. On the one hand, ________________ (主题的优点1). On the other hand, ___________________ (主题的优点2). 　　But everything can be divided into two. The negative aspects are also apparent. One of the important disadvantages is that ___________________ (主题的缺点1). To make matters worse, __________________________ (主题的缺点2). 　　Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects far outweigh its negative aspects. Whatever effects it has, one thing is certain, ________ (主题) itself is neither good nor bad. It is the uses to which it is put that determine its value to our society.

21 使用率最高、覆盖面最广的基本句式 1.表示原因 1)There are three reasons why students are keen on campus love. 2)The reasons for this are as follows. 3). Sth is due to the fact that … 4) Sth contributes to sth 5) sth makes for sth

22 2.表示好处 1)It is beneficial to us 2)It benefits us quite a lot. 3)It is of great benefit to us. e.g. Books are like friends, which are very beneficial to us. They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons.Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

23 3.表示坏处 1)It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2)It does us much harm. 3)It is of harm to us. 4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1)It is important(necessary，difficult，convenient， possible)for sb.to do sth. 2)We conceive/ reckon it necessary to do sth. 3)It plays an important role in our life.

24 表达有人“ 认为”时的句型 Sb believe that Sb argue/hold that Sb hold firmly to the view that Sb is sustained by the belief that Sth is viewed as …

25 4. One can draw / take examples from those in any （field）, from…to…, even in …,我们在任何(领域)，包括……和……,甚至在……领域,都能从……身上找到这样的例子. 5. Take the example of sb. doing sth.以某人做某事为例。 There seems to be no pure friendship between a man and a woman. Take the example of their becoming a couple .

26 表达另一种不同观点时的转折连词 While on the contrary In contrast, However 我的观点 For my /my own part, To my knowledge, As I see it, From my standpoint, we should do sth Personally , I think sth

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