How to correct a composition

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1 How to correct a composition
高考英语短文改错应考策略

2 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
　　 [2012·陕西] 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

3 真题再现 [答案]

4 短文改错应注意的问题 四不改: 　①标点符号不改。 　②大小写不改。 　③词序错误不改。 　④在纲外生词不改。

5 一、动词形 When he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door. got
主要包括两类错误：动词的时态和语态错误，以及主、谓不一致的错误。 2007四川卷： When he gets home, he saw the animal waiting at the door. 2007天津卷： Not only the students but also the teacher like the film. got likes or，either…or…，neither…nor…，not （only）…but （also）…，there be句型

6 二 、名词数 指名词单、复数形式的用法错误。 2007陕西卷： Personally, I found most lesson rather uninteresting. 2008浙江卷：A nearby company was looking for students with good handwriting to write addresses on envelope .The pay was 10 cents per envelope. lessons envelopes

7 高考链接 fish（鱼），deer，means， Chinese，Japanese等
1.A group of sheeps are eating grass and leaves at the foot of the hill. 2.The book will give you all the informations you need. sheep information furniture, fun, homework, paper, news, progress, trouble, work（工作），等

8 三、还要注意形和副 注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。
2007浙江卷：I got to the finishing line first. I won the race. I felt very proudly of myself. 2006福建卷：We can hear birds singing happy all around. proud happily

9 四、非谓语，辨仔细 这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在分词、过去分词，动名词和不定式错误。
2007浙江卷： I could not to run very fast and fell behind. 2007宁夏卷：Li Meng came see me every day. to

10 五、 代词格，须领悟 （ 2007全国I） I was only about six when he held his hand out to me. I took it in me and we walked. mine 2008全国II： I should be able to tell visitors about our history and culture and show them their great achievements. 2007陕西： Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed! our myself

11 六、习惯用法要记牢 主要考查习惯搭配方面的基础知识，其错误表现形式主要有三种：多词、少词和搭配错误。 ∨ a on so
catch a sight of lose my heart in hurry in Sunday afternoon such many people ∨ a on so

12 used to 2007陕西卷： They __________ (过去常常）write on the blackboard and ask us difficult questions. 2007浙江卷：I was so encouraged that I ran faster and faster till I ___________ (赶上）all the other runners. 2006天津卷：Because the help you gave me that summer, my life changed. caught up with ∧ of

13 七、逻辑错误多体会 we their 与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误，如称谓上的张冠李戴。
2006四川卷：That night，we sat down to have what they thought would be a pleasant, uninterrupted meal. NMET 2005: Some students may also save up for our college or future use. we their

14 八、冠词、连词不要忘 2007全国II：I meant to write long letter and a
常考的错误形式有：连词but， and， or和so的用法错误，以及冠词的用法错误等。 2007全国II：I meant to write long letter and tell you all the things I’m doing at the school… 2007四川卷： An Australian farmer found the kangaroo caught in the fence around his farm. a a

15 2007浙江卷：Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot.
2006辽宁卷：She always made sure that our homework was finished on time, but she marked strictly on our actual performance. 2007四川卷： He thought the poor animal was injured, but the kind farmer took off his jacket and put on the animal. when and and / so

16 短文改错口诀： 动词形，名词数， 还要注意形和副； 非谓语，辨仔细， 代词格，须领悟； 习惯用法要记牢, 逻辑错误多体会; 冠词连词不要忘。

17 chose tall it At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._____
2009高考英语短文改错 At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his 1._____ father to choose a Christmas tree. They choose 2._____ a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! 3._____ They put them in the corner of the sitting 4._____ ____ On 习惯用法要记牢 _________ chose 动词形 _______ tall 还要注意形和副 _______ it 代词格，须领悟

18 动词形 名词数 还要注意形和副 冠词连词不要忘 动词形
room. Kate was covered it with a lot of 5._____ Christmas light. The sitting room looked 6. ____ really beautifully at the moment. There was 7. ________ a fire burning in the fire place, but the Christmas 8. ____ tree lights were shinning bright. Jim and his 9. ____ parents singing and dancing happily. 10. ____ was ＼ 动词形 _______ lights 名词数 _____________ beautiful 还要注意形和副 ____ and 冠词连词不要忘 brightly 还要注意形和副 ∧ were 动词形

19 homework 陕西10年高考英语短文改错

20 10年陕西卷短文改错 My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other
day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T- shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I thought it was funny! .

21 10年陕西卷短文改错 My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other
day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T- shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I thought it was funny! were ∧ it the her hard ∧ to which embarrassed but/yet/while/and

22 10年陕西卷短文改错 动词 My sister saw a lovely cup when we are shopping the other day. She liked it at once. Then she bent down and picked up to look at a price on it. As she did this, lots of tea splashed on his T-shirt! I had to try hardly not to laugh at her shocked face! My sister wanted get out of the shop as fast as she could when a shop assistant came over to us. It was turned out to be her own cup, that she’d left on the shelf by mistake. The assistant was clearly as embarrassing as my sister, for I thought it was funny! 代词 ∧ 冠词 代词 副词 动词 ∧ 动词 代词 动词 连词