海南省中考英语备考第一轮复习之话题写作 My School Life 海口景山学校 谭碧华 课型：Writing.

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1 海南省中考英语备考第一轮复习之话题写作 My School Life 海口景山学校 谭碧华 课型：Writing

2 Activity 1: Write down the words about school life as many as possible.
names of subjects Chinese … subjects like interesting... feelings about subjects dislike boring... Your schoollife after-school activities playing basketball ... feelings about school life colorful ...

3 Activity 1: Key vocabulary about school life.
Chinese/ English/ math/ history/ P.E. / music /art / biology/ politics/ geography/ physics / chemistry … names of subjects A mind map(思维导图) like this can help organize (组织) information about a topic.so it is a good tool for review. (这种类型的思维导图可以帮忙收集话题信息，也是复习的好帮手。) 2. Vocabulary in this mind map can be used when you write about your school life. (当我们写有校园生活话题的作文时，可以使用思维导图里的单词或词组。) subjects like interesting/ easy/ useful/ relaxing... feelings about subjects dislike boring/ difficult/ hard /... Your school life playing basketball/ swimming/ running/ walking /dancing / drawing pictures/ reading books/ playing the piano ... after-school activities feelings about school life colorful/ happy/ unhappy/ busy/ meaningful / pleasant/ enjoyable/ busy but pleasant ...

4 Some other words or phrases for “likes”:
Activity2. Look at the charts and talk about them.(看图说话） Name Subject feeling Zhou Yan English likes Zhou Yan _____ English. Zhou Yan likes history, too. history Zhou Yan likes English and history. Zhou Yan likes ____ English____ history. both and Zhou Yan likes _______ English _____ history. not only but also Some other words or phrases for “likes”: love/ enjoy/ be fond of/ be interested in/ prefer...

5 Look at the charts and talk about them.(看图说话，看谁说的句子最多。）
Name Subject feeling Li Ming and Tony Chinese Groups 1 and 2: Math Name Subject feeling Reason Wei Hua physics interesting chemistry difficult Groups 3 and 4:

6 Some other words or phrases for “dislikes”:
Look at the charts and talk about them. Name Subject feeling Li Ming and Tony Chinese Li Ming and Tony don't like Chinese. Li Ming and Tony don't like math, either. Math Li Ming and Tony don't like Chinese or math. neither nor Li Ming and Tony like ______ Chinese ____ math. Some other words or phrases for “dislikes”: hate/ dislike/ ...

7 Look at the charts and talk about them.
Wei Hua likes physics best because she thinks it's interesting, but she doesn't like chemistry because she thinks it's difficult. Name Subject feeling Reason Wei Hua physics interesting chemistry difficult

8 “likes” or “dislikes”, we can use
Zhou Yan likes/ loves/ enjoys/ is fond of/ is interested in/ prefers English. Li Ming and Tony dislikes /doesn't like/ hates Chinese. Wei Hua likes physics best because she thinks it's interesting, but she doesn't like chemistry because she thinks it's difficult. like/ love/ enjoy/ be fond of/ be interested in/ prefer... ... dislike/ don't like/ hate When we express “likes” or “dislikes”, we can use like... because... don't like ... because... ...

9 Key vocabulary and sentences for the topic:
Chinese/ English/ math/ history/ P.E. / music /art / biology/ politics/ geography/ physics / chemistry … names of subjects subjects like I like ... because it is interesting/ easy/ useful/ relaxing... feelings about subjects dislike I don't like ... because it is boring/ difficult/ hard /... My school day playing basketball/ swimming/ running/ walking /dancing / drawing pictures/ reading books/ playing the piano ... after-school activities feelings about school life colorful/ happy/ unhappy/ busy/ meaningful / pleasant/ enjoyable/ busy but pleasant ...

10 Activity 3: Enjoy the passage and and underline the key words, then find out the key sentences , finally circle the connectives . Hi, I'm Hu Bin, a student of Class 1, Grade 7. At school, both my teachers and classmates are very kind to me. We get along well with each other . Classes begin at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I not only study Chinese, English, math, politics, art, history, geography, biology, but also study some other subjects. Among them, I like English best because I think it's very interesting. What's more , I think it will be very useful for my future development. At the same time, I also like P.E. and music. But I don't like math at all because I think it's too difficult for me to understand. What do you think? After school, I often play basketball with my classmates .It's such a relaxing activity that most of my friends enjoy it. There's no doubt that it helps to improve my health as well. Besides that, I either draw pictures with my friends in the park or go to the school library every Tuesday and Thursday. That is a lot of fun. I think my school life is very interesting . Do you think so? What about yours? could you tell me something about it?

11 Mind map for paragraph 1:
Hi, I'm Hu Bin, a student of Class 1, Grade 7. At school, both my teachers and classmates are very kind to me. We get along well with each other . a student of Class..., Grade... Hu Bin A brief introduction ( of Hu Bing and his relationship with teachers and classmates ) kind get along well with teachers and classmates both… and…

12 Activity 3: Enjoy the passage and and underline the key words, find out the key sentences , and circle the connectives. Hi, I'm Hu Bin, a student of Class 1, Grade 7. At school, both my teachers and classmates are very kind to me. We get along well with each other . Classes begin at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I not only study Chinese, English, math, politics, art, history, geography, biology, but also study some other subjects. Among them, I like English best because I think it's very interesting. What's more , I think it will be very useful for my future development. At the same time, I also like P.E. and music. But I don't like math at all because I think it's too difficult for me to understand. What do you think? After school, I often play basketball with my classmates .It's such a relaxing activity that most of my friends enjoy it. There's no doubt that it helps to improve my health as well. Besides that, I either draw pictures with my friends in the park or go to the school library every Tuesday and Thursday. That is a lot of fun. I think my school life is very interesting . Do you think so? What about yours? could you tell me something about it?

13 Mind map for paragraph 2:
classes begin at... Classes and subjects Chinese,English,Math... not only…but also… subjects English，interesting，useful， P.E. ，music， math，difficult… because, what’ more, at the same time, but Classes begin at 8:00. I have four classes in the morning and two in the afternoon. I not only study Chinese,English, math, politics, art, history, geography, biology, but also study some other subjects. Among them, I like English best because I think it's very interesting, What's more , I think it will be very very useful for my future development. At the same time, I also like P.E. and music. But I don't like math at all because I think it's too difficult for me to understand. What do you think?

14 Mind map for paragraph 3:
After school, I often play basketball with my classmates. It's such a relaxing activity that most of my friends enjoy it. There's no doubt that it helps to improve my health as well. Besides that, I either draw pictures with my friends in the park or go to the school library every Tuesday and Thursday. That is a lot of fun. relaxing, enjoy, help to improve health such…that… playing basketball After-school activities drawing picures besides, either…or… going to school library Mind map for paragraph 3:

15 Mind map for paragraph 4:
Feelings about school life my shcool life. interesting, like it and I think my school life is interesting , and I like it very much.Do you think so? What about yours? Could you tell me somethig about it?

16 A brief introduction ( of Hu Bing, his teachers, classmates )
Class..., Grade... Both … and… are kind to… …get along well with… teachers and students classes I study not only Chinese, ... but also… Classes and subjects. Hu Bin's school life I like... best because I think it's ... I don't like... because..。 subjects playing basketball It's such a relaxing activity that ... After-school activities drawing picures Besides that , I either ... or... going to library Feelings about school life I think it's... interesting, and I like it

17 内容完整,衔接自然，语法正确，句式多样，词汇丰富。如有极个别非关键的单词错误（如大小写、拼写、名词单复数错误等）,视数量扣分。
作文评价标准 档次 分值 要求 第一档 13-15 内容完整,衔接自然，语法正确，句式多样，词汇丰富。如有极个别非关键的单词错误（如大小写、拼写、名词单复数错误等）,视数量扣分。 第二档 10-12 内容基本完整（遗漏1个要点），语法正确，但句式单一，有少量的语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档 7-9 内容基本完整（遗漏2个要点），基本能传递信息，有一定的可读性，但逻辑性不强，语句欠通顺，有较多语言错误。

18 Activity 4: Write a passage about your school life .
初中生活就要结束，请你以 My________ （wonderful/ sad/...) school life 为题写一篇作文介绍你的校园生活，请从你所学科目、你对科目的喜好以及课后活动等方面谈谈你对学校生活的感受。 要求：1.内容完整，且有适当的拓展，意思连贯，语法正确。 2.注意句子的多样性。 3.恰当使用连接词。 4.字数70左右。（文章开头已经给出， 不计入总词数） My __________ school life How time flies! I have been in this school for about three years. At school...

19 Activity 4: Check your compositions in groups.
Correct the mistakes . Underline sentences which are exellent , give reseonable marks and give the reason. Then choose one to share with the whole class. （组内批阅作文：改正作文内所出现的错误。请将写得好的句子用横线标出来，给出合的分数，并说出理由, 最后在小组中选出一篇有代表性的作文与班级同学分享） 作文评价标准 档次 分值 要求 第一档 13-15 内容完整,衔接自然，语法正确，句式多样，词汇丰富。如有极个别非关键的单词错误（如大小写、拼写、名词单复数错误等）,视数量扣分。 第二档 10-12 内容基本完整（遗漏1个要点），语法正确，但句式单一，有少量的语言错误，但不影响整体理解。 第三档 7-9 内容基本完整（遗漏2个要点），基本能传递信息，有一定的可读性，但逻辑性不强，语句欠通顺，有较多语言错误。

20 My wonderful school life
One possible version: My wonderful school life How time flies, I have been in this school for about three years. At school, I have twelve classes every day from Monday to Friday. The classes begin at half past seven. And there are so many interesting subjects which I want to learn carefully, such as Chinese, chemistry, English, politics, history and so on. My favorite subject is English. I think it’s really useful. But I don’t like physics at all because I think it’s so hard that I can hardly understand. Between two classes, we always play games or chat with others. After school, we have a lot of activities. For example, some students play basketball on the playground. Some students read books in the library. Some have a rest to be relaxed. I have made many friends since I came here, and we often help and learn a lot from each other. And my teachers are all kind to me though sometimes they may be strict with me. They not only teach me how to learn, but also teach me how to be a man. Besides, my teachers often encourage me to have a good habit. From the bottom of my heart, I feel very thankful to them. I think my school life is not only wonderful but also colorful. I will never forget it.

21 Summary We reviewed: Words and sentences about “school life”. .
We learned : Using the words and sentences reviewed today to write a composition.

22 Correct your composition, and try to make it perfect .
Homework Correct your composition, and try to make it perfect .

23 Goodbye, thanks!

24 Learning goals To review: The words and sentences about “school life”.
To learn : Using the words and patterns reviewed to write a composition.