高考短文改错 唐丽丽 May10th,2005.

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1 高考短文改错 唐丽丽 May10th,2005

2 2004年高考Ⅳ卷改错题答案及答题模式 You can find all kinds information in just
a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a Huge library without have to walk around to find Your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all Information are good to society. For example, you can find such information like how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future. 1._________ 2._________ 3._________ 4._________ 5._________ 6._________ 7._________ 8._________ 9._________ 10.________

3 2004年高考Ⅳ卷改错题答案及答题模式 You can find all kinds ∧ information in just
a few minute on the Internet. It’s like going to a Huge library without have to walk around to find Your books. Recently even though, many people have been discussing the dangers of the Internet. They have been reports in America about people trying to steal person information for bad purposes. Finding information on the Net is easily. But not all Information are good to society. For example, you can find such information like how to kill people. The problem will become more serious in the future. 1.of 2.minutes 3.having 4.even 5. √ 6.There 7.personal 8.easy 9.is 10.as

4 答题指导 短文改错测试考生判断能力，观察能力，语言基础知识及语言综合运用的能力。它要求考生通过语境来判断语篇中的－－－ 正确 多词 缺词 错词

5 多词 1.多冠词:泛指名词前，不可数名词前，专有名词 前，固定词组中多的冠词。
a work the China an information in the public places go to the school play the football 2.多介词: on one day on that evening reach to London enter into the house 3.多副词: return back on one’s way to home 4.不带to的动词不定式作宾补时，带了to: see sb. to do sth make sb. to do sth. 5.形容词比较或最高级前的more\most: more younger most clearest

6 缺词 1.缺冠词: 2. 缺副词: 3.缺物主代词: 1)表示一段时间前缺a : a wonderful time
2)单数名词前缺a : There is a library in the town. 3)特指名词前缺the: The book on the desk is his. 4)形容词最高级前缺the: one of the longest river 2. 缺副词: In some other places you may borrow as many books as you want. 3.缺物主代词: John smiled and nodded his head. Lily does her homework carefully.

7 4.缺介词. He had no place to live in. I need a pen to write with.
1)作定语用的动词不定式后面缺少必要的介词。 The old man had no one to talk to . He had no place to live in. I need a pen to write with. 2)介词词组缺少必要的介词。 Prices have risen by 10%. 3)动词词组中缺少介词。 He couldn’t get out of the forest.

8 5.名词从句中缺少连词，代词，副词: 6.缺并列连词: 7.定语从句中缺少作主语的关系代词:
That the earth goes round the sun is known to us all. What they want is courage. When he will go has not been decided. 6.缺并列连词: He was tired ,and it was getting dark. 7.定语从句中缺少作主语的关系代词: Is he the boy who did the good deed?

9 错词 1.动词的时态和语态：动词时态的一致性。 2.非谓语动词用法：动词不定式，动名词和分词。 3.名词词形错误：
名词的单复数，名词的所有格the Childrens’。 4.形容词与副词词形错误： 注意判断句中是用形容词还是用副词。 5.介词的错误： 介词的含义有很多，可表示时间，地点，方位， 状态，方式，手段等，改错时要根据上下文检查 介词是否用对。

10 6.代词选择错误： 7.同义词，近义词的错误,常见有 如下例子： all\both either\neither
人称代词，反身代词，特别注意不定代词的用法。 如: some\any every\each no\none\one all\both either\neither 7.同义词，近义词的错误,常见有 如下例子： ill\sick also\too\either high\highly already\yet\still hard\hardly alive\living\lively aloud\loudly cost\pay\spend\take accept\receive asleep\sleepy\sleeping

11 解题步骤 1.读全文，既要注意语法和用词错误， 又要注意语篇上的错误。 2.从大句到小句，从简单句到复杂句， 逐一更正。
3.要改正动词时态，语态，名词复数, 介词搭配，非谓语动词等，还要弄清 文章的含义和内在的逻辑联系。 4.要写准，写清改错符号，以免造成 不必要的失分。

12 2004年高考Ⅰ卷 Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, it seems always difficult for me to do things well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei 1.________ 2.________ 3.________ 4.________ 5.________ 6.________ 7.________ 8.________ 9.________ 10._______

13 2004年高考Ⅰ卷 Dear Ralph, I’m a newcomer here of a small town. I would
describe myself as shy and quietly. Before my classmates, It seems always difficult for me to do things ∧ well as them. I’m sure they will laugh to me and see me as a fool. So I feel unhappy every day. Besides, I have few friends. I don’t know that they don’t like to talk with me. Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become stranger at once.I am trying to improve the situation since it doesn’t seem to work. Can you tell me about what I should do? Yours, Xiao Wei 1.from 2.quiet 3.as 4.at 5. √ 6.why 7.talk 8.strangers 9.but 10.about

14 2004年高考Ⅱ卷 On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to
do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks. But I have spent most my money, so I cannot even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes ,a concert can be very excited. You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then, a concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records ,there are no need to spend money. All right. That’s what I’m going to do. 1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10._____

15 2004年高考Ⅱ卷 On Thursday I will have to decide what I want myself to
do over a weekend. I am thinking of making a trip to London, and visit the British Museum and some parks. But I have spent most ∧ my money, so I cannot even go out of town. I may go to a film, or a concert. Yes ,a concert can be very excited. You can watch your stars while enjoying your favorite music. So then,a concert cost so much. I may just listen to music. I have some records giving to me as birthday gifts. If I listen to my own records ,there are no need to spend money. All right. That’s what I’m going to do. 1.myself 2.the 3.visiting 4.of 5. √ 6.exciting 7.But 8.costs 9.given 10.is

16 2004年高考Ⅲ卷 Dear Susan, I’m very glad to hear you are coming to visit
me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Yours, Zhang Ming 1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10._____

17 2004年高考Ⅲ卷 Dear Susan, I’m very glad to hear you are coming to visit
me the next Friday. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to meet you at the airport although I have classes in the afternoon. You won’t find ∧ difficult to get to the city center. The airport bus leaves every 30 minute and will take you rightly to the Friendship Hotel. My class will be over by then or I will pick you up there. I will take you together to a hot-pot restaurant for dinner and we’ll talk with our plan for the weekend over dinner. Having a pleasant trip and see you Friday. Yours, Zhang Ming 1. √ 2.the 3.because\as 4.it 5.minutes 6.right 7.and 8.together 9.about 10.Have

18 2005年高考分析卷 Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small town, It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. They offered me coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They were eager know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. 1.______ 2.______ 3.______ 4.______ 5.______ 6.______ 7.______ 8.______ 9.______ 10._____

19 2005年高考分析卷 Today I visited the Smiths ---my first time visit
to a American family. They live in a small town, It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. They offered me coffee and other drinks. We have a good time talking and laughing together. They were eager∧ know everything about China and asked me lots of question. In fact, they are planning to visit China in next year. 1.time 2.an 3.of 4.drive 5.their 6.√ 7.had 8.to 9.questions 10.in

20 Homework: 做2004年高考卷的改错题： 浙江卷，江苏卷，福建卷 广东卷，辽宁卷，天津卷