No.2 短文改错 根据汉语意义，选择正确的英语翻译。 Warming up

我们在我们老师的帮助下完成了任务。 A. We completed the task under the help of our teacher. B. We completed the task with the help of our teacher.

2. 突然有一阵拉力，鱼上钩了。 A. There was a sudden pull at the pole and a fish was caught. B. There was a sudden pull at the pole and fish was caught.

A. Everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket. 6 3. 车厢内的所有人都开始寻找那张车票。 A. Everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket. B. Everyone in the carriage began searching for the ticket.

Exemplifying in Skills 阅读下列句子，找出句中错误并说明其类型。每句一处错误。 每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

常见错误类型 赘述/词义重复 固定搭配错误 冠词错误 时态或语态错误 动词不定式错误 及物动词和不及物动词与介词的错误搭配 连词错误 9 常见错误类型 赘述/词义重复 固定搭配错误 冠词错误 时态或语态错误 动词不定式错误 及物动词和不及物动词与介词的错误搭配 连词错误 中英直译的错误

例1：He has been studying for the final exam all the whole month. 赘述/词义重复 ① _______________ 例1：He has been studying for the final exam all the whole month.

例2：Two and three equals to five. ②_______________ 例2：Two and three equals to five. 例3：We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sit by the lake listening music. 固定搭配错误 ∧ to

例4：As result, the plants are growing everywhere. 冠词错误 ③_______________ 例4：As result, the plants are growing everywhere. 例5：I started to play violin when I was five years old. ∧ a ∧ the

例6：Lots of studies have been shown that 时态或语态错误 ④_______________ 例6：Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a serious problem.

例7：He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. ⑤_______________ 例7：He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. 例8：It is impossible for them to make their friendship to last long. 动词不定式错误 ∧ to

例9：I do appreciate about your concern, but honestly, I’m fine. 及物动词和不及物动词与介词的错误搭配 ⑥ _______________ 例9：I do appreciate about your concern, but honestly, I’m fine.

例10：He broke his glasses, he couldn’t see anything. 连词错误 ⑦______________ 例10：He broke his glasses, he couldn’t see anything. 例11：With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. ∧ and

例12：The population of Japan is less than that of China. 17 中英直译的错误 ⑧_________________ 例12：The population of Japan is less than that of China. smaller

Instant Practice 依据方框内常见错误类型及其提示，找出和改正下列句子。

常见错误类型 ①赘述/词义重复 ②固定搭配错误 ③冠词错误 ④时态或语态错误 ⑤动词不定式错误 ⑥及物动词和不及物动词与介词的错误搭配 ⑦连词错误 ⑧中英直译的错误

1. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. ① 2. I was taking a train to London when I had noticed that the carriage was filled with people. ④ 3. Danny is experienced in operating on the computers. ② 4. Tom left he house quietly when his mother was not looking at. ⑥

5. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson last night. ③ 6. He wants to buy the model car and he can't afford it. ⑦ 7. The doctors failed save the girl’s life. ⑤ 8. The speed of that car is fast. ⑧ ∧ a but ∧ to high

Strengthening Exercises 改正下列句子中的一处错误，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

Go! Ready?

1. 错误涉及一个单词的删除 1. Suddenly the arrows were flying down at us from the sky—they were looked like rain! 2. The book I’m reading of talks about afternoon tea in Britain. 3. As soon as we arrived, so we dropped the lines into the water.

2. 错误涉及一个单词的增加 ∧ a ∧ for/because/since ∧ to 1）To build up a good body, it is must that we exercise every day. 2）I didn’t go to the concert I had more important things to deal with. 3）Edison was known spend years working on the light bulb. ∧ a ∧ for/because/since ∧ to

3. 错误涉及一个单词的修改 took either had I joined an exam last week and did well in it. 2) I don’t have a visa. I don’t think he has one, too. 3) I once have a cat. I still miss it so much. took either had

Strengthening Exercises 请修改以下文段。其中共有5处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改（注意规避中式思维定势）。

31 ∧ to ∧ earned but had

Comprehensive Exercises 请修改以下短文。其中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

Learning a foreign language has had changed. Not long ago, students would sit with a pen on hand. They would write the basic forms of a language, learn structures they would never be able to speak. In that same classroom today, pens or notebooks have been put down. The spoken sounds of foreign tongues filling the room. Today the last skill learned in writing a foreign language comes a natural and possible part of whole language learning process. Yet, in just a few years ago, the last skill learned was the first skill mastered today—speak a foreign tongue.

Go! Ready?

38 in learning away and ∧ fill as ∧ the speaking

Longshine Tips（短文改错解题口诀） ⑴名词数，动词形 ⑵谓语、非谓在一起 ⑶你一定要把它分清 ⑷时态语态主谓病 ⑸代词三格要分明 ⑹请你做题处处留心 ⑺冠词、介词虽然微小 ⑻乱用可不行 ⑼形容词的级别 ⑽请你千万要理清 ⑾副词经常修饰句子还有动形 ⑿改错常考动形名副介连代冠 ⒀短文改错确实不容易 ⒁加强练习会有惊喜 ⒂多积累词汇和固定搭配 ⒃就一定会有突破