高考英语书面表达如何拿高分 内师大外国语学院 方芳 2011年3月.

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1 高考英语书面表达如何拿高分 内师大外国语学院 方芳 2011年3月

2 一、强化基本句型 五种主要的基本句型 句型1： S + V + P （主 + 系动词 + 表语）
句型2： S + Vt + O （主 + 及物动词+ 宾语） 句型3： S + Vi+ (A) 　〔主 + 不及物动词+ （状语）〕 句型4： S + Vt+ Oi + Od （主 + 及物动词+ 间接宾语 + 直接宾语） 句型5： S + Vt+ Oi + Oc （主 + 及物动词+宾语 + 宾语补足语）

3 二、使用较高级的词汇 --find, discover; -- ask/inquire;
注重词汇的变化使用，提倡运用词组 --find, discover; -- ask/inquire; --change/alter/modify/shift/transfer; --surprise/astonish/astound/shock/ --stun/be taken aback --take one’s chance/grasp the chance; --take part in/participate

4 Because the weather was very good, our journey was comfortable.
Thanks to the weather, our journey was comfortable. 2. We all think he is a great man. We all think highly of him. 3. Suddenly, I thought out a good idea. A good idea occurred to me. A good idea suddenly struck me.

5 4. As a result, the plan was a failure.
The plan turned out to be a failure. 5. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow. At the news of his death, she went pale with sorrow. 6. She went to Austria to study music. She went to Austria with/for the purpose of studying music.

6 7. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
The more he spoke, the more excited he became. 8. In our school, there are 40 classrooms. Our school is made up of 40 classrooms. 9. You can find my house easily. You will have no difficulty finding my house.

7 三、使用较丰富的句式 在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句型，要灵活运用各种语法结构，运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉。

8 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail
When he arrives, please give me an .（使用V-ing形式） →On his arriving/ arrival, please give me an . To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句） →What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things. (That the littler girl knows so many things surprises him.／It surprises him that the littler girl knows so many things .)

9 3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句) →Weak as I am, I’ll make the effort. 4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型 ①.It was… ②.not until…) →①It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened. →②Not until he had read the news in the newspaper did he know what had happened.

10 5. I passed the physics exam because of your help
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.（使用虚拟语气） →①I could not have passed the physics exam but for your help. →②If you had not helped me, I could not have passed the physics exam.

11 6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her
6.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (用过去分词) →Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab. 7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式) →Singing and laughing, they went back to school.

12 8. I won’t believe what he says
8. I won’t believe what he says. （使用状语从句） →No matter what he says, I won’t believe. 9. He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句) →No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.

13 11. I bought a dictionary yesterday
11. I bought a dictionary yesterday. It was recommended by my English teacher. （使用定语从句） →I bought a dictionary yesterday that was recommended by my English teacher.

14 四、使用过渡性词语 写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语。

15 （一）过渡性短语： 并列递进: and, also, as well as, besides, what’s more, furthermore, moreover, etc. 转折: but, yet, however, although, nevertheless, in spite of, after all, etc. 因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc. 对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc. 总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc.

16 （二）过渡性句型： 1、表示原因 1）There are three reasons for this.
2）The reasons for this are as follows. 3）The reason for this is obvious. 4）The reason for this is not far to seek. 5）The reason for this is that... 6）We have good reason to believe that... 　　　There are three reasons for the changes that have taken place in our life. Firstly，people’s living standard has been greatly improved. Secondly，most people are well paid，and they can afford what they need or like. Last but not least，more and more people prefer to enjoy modern life.

17 2.表示好处 1）It has the following advantages. 2）It does us a lot of good. 3）It benefits us quite a lot. 4）It is beneficial to us. 5）It is of great benefit to us. 　　　Books are like friends. They can help us know the world better，and they can open our minds and widen our horizons. Therefore，reading extensively is of great benefit to us.

18 3.表示坏处 1）It has more disadvantages than advantages. 2）It does us much harm. 3）It is harmful to us. 例如： 　　　However，everything divides into two. Television can also be harmful to us. It can do harm to our health and make us lazy if we spend too much time watching television.

19 4.表示重要、必要、困难、方便、可能 1）It is important（necessary，difficult，convenient， possible）for sb.to do sth. 2）We think it necessary to do sth. 3）It plays an important role in our life. 4) It plays an important part in our life.

20 ５.表示变化 1）Some changes have taken place in the past five years. 2）A great change will certainly be produced in the world’s communications. 3）The computer has brought about many changes in education.

21 ７.表示看法 1）People have（take，adopt，assume）different attitudes towards sth. 2）People have different opinions on this problem. 3）People take different views of（on）the question. 4）Some people believe that...Others argue that... 例如： 　　　People have different attitudes towards failure. Some believe that failure leads to success. Every failure they experience translates into a greater chance of success at their renewed endeavor. However，others are easily discouraged by failures and put themselves into the category of losers.

22 ８.表示结论 1）In short，it can be said that ... 2）It may be briefly summed up as follows. 3）From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that ... 例如： 　　　From what has been mentioned above，we can come to the conclusion that examination is necessary，however， its method should be improved.

23 五、熟悉不同体裁作文的格式和要求 1. 书信开头的常用句型有：
I’m very pleased to have received your letter and to know that… I have received your letter and known that… I’m very happy to learn from your letter that… Hearing that you are coming to China… I’m very happy. I’m glad to hear from you and know that you are coming soon.

24 2. 书信结尾常用的词组有： Do you think it’s fine?/it’s OK? I hope you will like it. What do you think of the flat? I hope you will like it. Would you please write me back and tell me your idea of this flat? Please let me know if you need any other help I can offer. I’m looking forward to your arrival/coming. I’m waiting for you to come

25 六、高考英语书面表达 高分试卷 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在的城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。

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27 Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua
高考高分作文范文1（2003年） Dear Bob, Thank you for your last letter and I’m very glad to hear that you are coming to my city to learn Chinese. Now I’ve found a flat near the school for you. It is one of the buildings in the block which lies on the left of No. 11 Fangcao Street Bus Stop and it is very convenient for you to take the bus to go to school. What’s more, the next stop is Jianxin Chinese School. On top of that, the room, 25 square metres in area, consists of three parts, namely a kitchen, a bathroom and a sitting room. in the sitting room there is a bed, a sofa and a desk. Then the monthly rent is 500 yuan. At last I hope you will be satisfied with the flat. Looking forward to seeing you! Yours, Li Hua

28 假定你是李华，希望通过外籍教师Peter 找一位英语笔友。请写一封短信，描述一下你理想中笔友的条件，并说明为什么选这样的笔友。具体条件包括：
年龄； 性别； 爱好（旅游、运动、宠物等）。 Dear Peter, I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.

29 I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor.
高考高分作文范文2（2007年） Dear Peter, 　　I am writing to ask whether you are able to do me a favor. 　　I have been learning English for two years and I hope to find an English pen friend so that I can get more improvement. Can you help me to find one? 　　I’d like to have a boy, who is of my age and is fond of traveling and sports, to be my pen friend. In my opinion, people of the same age often have something to exchange. That’s why I want him to be of my age. If he likes doggy, that would be better because I can tell him something about my little doggy. I’d be very thankful if you can help me. Hope to hear from you! 　　Best regards, 　　Li Hua

30 高考高分作文范文3（2009年） I’m ready to go out to do some shopping and return the book that you borrowed several days ago. But it’s a pity that you are not at home now, and Tracy telephoned you saying that she had something to tell you. First, she had not time to meet you at Bolton Coffee, so it has been called off. Second, you don’t have to tell Susan because she has known it. Thirdly, please don’t forget to call her back soon when you come home.

31 Wish you great success!