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Ladies and gentlemen, Here we are at the foot of Mount Tai. Mount Tai is one of the most beautiful sceneries in China. It is at an altitude of/The altitude of it is 1900meters. It also has many wonders. We will stay on the mount for eight hours. The time is 8:30 now. We will leave here at 4;30. The car waits us in the entrance. Please remember the numbers of the bus and be back on time. Please bring valuable things with yourselves. Shut all the windows when you get down the bus. Wish you have a good time. Thank you.

2 Version: Ladies and gentlemen, Here we are at the foot of Mount Tai. Mount Tai is one of the most famous scenic spots in our country with an altitude of 1900 meters. It also has many wonders. We will spend eight hours here. It’s 8:30 now. We will leave here at 4:30. The bus will be waiting for us at the entrance Please remember our bus number and be back on time. Please take your valuable things with you and shut all the windows before you get off the bus. Have a good time. Thank you.

3 一：熟练掌握5个基本句型结构。 1：主语+系动词+表语（形容词/名词/介词。。。） 常用的系动词be, remain, stay, stand, keep, turn become, grow, come, fall, go, look, feel, appear seem, sound, taste, smell等 2：主语+谓语（不及物）+状语 Great changes have taken place in our school He ran quickly towards the ball 3:主语+谓语（及物动词）+宾语(名词，代词，从句 to do ,doing…)

4 We like sports very much
I hope to pass the college entrance examinations. I found that I lost my way 这类动词有： enjoy, finish,admit, suggest, practice ,risk ,escape consider, imagine等 +doing 2) try, regret ,remember, forget, mean to do /doing 3) want, hope, agree, manage, pretend, decide等+to do 4:主语+谓语（及物）+双宾语 1) He gave us a talk on the computer 2) He offered me some good books 这类动词有：show, teach, lend, promise, bring, pass, hand+sb.sth /(sth to sb) 另外：make/buy sb sth =make/buy sth for sb explain sth to sb =explain to sb sth

5 5:主语+谓语（及物）+宾语+宾补 Who had the windows broken Please keep the classroom clean I asked him to meet me at the airport 这类词除了感官动词，还有order, get ,force, cause, fell等。 二：there be句型 There is a flowerbed behind the teaching building. There stands/lies sth…. There used/seems/happens to be ……. 三：it 的常见句型 It was 7:15 on the morning of Feb 8 ,2000. It’s about half an hour’s walk from my house to school. It’s foggy/raining heavily It’s necessary for us to learn English well.

6 5) It’s my duty to clean the blackboard.
6) I think it very important to learn English well. 如果想把作文描写生动，语言活泼，那么强调句，虚拟 句，感叹句，非谓语动词，倒装句with 结构以及各种典 型的从句的运用可使自己的作文锦上添花，但要正确为 先。

7 过渡词的使用 1表时间顺序：first/firstly/in the first place second/secondly/then third/thirdly finally/at last/lastly 2表空间顺序：here/there/on/next to/in front of 3表并列关系：and/as well as/therefore/so/besides/on one hand…on the other hand 4表转折关系：however/but/though/yet/otherwise 5表因果关系：because(of)/as a result/thanks to 6表递进：in addition/what’s more/ what’s worse/worse still/to make matters worse 7总结性：in a word/in short/on the whole/generally speak -ing 8其他一些常用短语：in fact/as a matter of fact, in one’s opinion, personally/as far as I’m concerned, instead at present, nowadays, for example, up to the present….

8 习作要求： 假如你叫李维。你们学校门前有许多小商贩摆摊，严重 影响了学校的教学环境。请你根据该情况给市长写封信。 请市长关心一下，并能让有关部门按规定禁止小商贩在校 门前摆摊。 词数：100字左右。

9 November Dear Sir : We strongly ask the small market in front of our school to remove.It has badly affected the teaching surroundings of our school. First,it has brought out a great deal of noise,which make us be unable to listen attentively in the class. Second, some students buy foods in the market and foods are unhealthy,which does harm to the students’health. Third,the market has blocked the school gate.it is hard for us to go out of or go into the school. Fourth,we don’t feel safely since many sellers go into and out of our school freely and who don’t obey anyone. Last of all,having affected by the market,some students gave up schooling and engaged themselves in business. We look forward to your reply.

10 习作要求： 英语学生会将会举办英语演讲比赛，请用英语起草一份 通知(notice)张贴出去。通知包括以下内容： 演讲时间：下周六下午3：00 地点：201室 题目：自定，演讲时间不得超过10分钟。 报名办法：找班长报名（sign up) 评判及奖励：邀请5位教师任评委(judge),获前10名的参赛 者(contestant)获奖 举办单位：学生会 写通知日期：2002年5月18日。

11 Notice May 18, 2002 In order to raise the students’ability to speak English, the Students’Union of the English Department will hold an English contest in Room 201 on Saturday at 3 p.m next week. Those who are willing to take part in it sign up with the monitors now. Every contestant can speak about the subject within ten minutes. Five teachers will be judges. The ten first winners will be given awards as an encouge -ment. Welcome all the students to be present at the contest.

12 习作要求 根据下面表格，用英语写一篇短文，简述从青岛至广州 乘飞机和乘火车旅行的利弊。 交通工具 飞机 火车 价格 元 元 旅行时间 小时 小时 优点 省时,舒适,便于休息 便宜可观光 缺点 昂贵 耗时，拥挤

13 Train Travel and Air Travel
Air travel has two advantages over train travel. First, it can save much time. We can fly from Qingdao to Guang zhou just in two hours, but by train, we have to spend 48 hours or more. Secondly, air travel is comfortable, because The plane flies very smoothly that we can rest well during the trip, while the train is crowded sometimes and passen- gers have to sit a long time, it makes them tired. However, train travel also has his own advantages. For example, traveling by train spends only 250 yuan while to travel by air will take us 900 yuan. Besides this, outside the train’s window, we can see the views of many big cities, for example Jinan, Zhengzhou, Wuhan, Changsha, and so on. In short, either of the two ways of travelling has its own advantages and disadvantages.