CET-6六级考试 写 作 模 板 班 主讲:金凌虹
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六级写作 能力提高 & 分数提升
提升实力 掌握技巧 60 % 40 %
提升实力 1. 背诵 为 什 么 要 背 背 什 么 ?
背醒目句型 针对性背诵 We all should know the importance of communication. 我们都应该知道沟通的重要性 We all should know the importance of communication.
针对性背诵 背醒目句型 我们都应该知道沟通的重要性 We can’t emphasize the importance of communication too much.
针对性背诵 背亮点词汇 …会造成恶劣的后果 … will cause bad result.
针对性背诵 背亮点词汇 …会造成恶劣的后果 … will give rise to undesirable consequences.
提升实力 2. 默写 你写的和原文,有太多的不同 发现标点,拼写,语法错误 练习书法
3. 仿写 提升实力 写出来的,才是自己的 文章框架不变 内容,词汇,句型替换 每种类型至少5篇(topic given) 形成固定的应对策略
应试技巧 题型分析及模板对策
第一类题 2010年12月 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行; 2. 对于这种做法人们看法不一; 3. 在我看来……
人们看法不一; 有些人认为… 也有些人认为… 正反对立观点作文
2000-2011 (12 - 7) 2010.12 2009.12 2009.6 2008.6 2007.12 2007.6 2000.6
写作框架 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行; 陈述现状 (第一段) 2. 对于这种做法人们看法不一; 正反观点 (第二段) 3. 在我看来…… 2010年12月 1. 目前高校排名相当盛行; 陈述现状 (第一段) 2. 对于这种做法人们看法不一; 正反观点 (第二段) 3. 在我看来…… 个人观点 (第三段)
2009年12月 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班; 1. 对这种做法有人表示支持, 2、有人并不赞成; 3、我认为…
2009年12月 1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班; 2. 有人表示支持,有人并不赞成; 3、我认为…
2009年6月 1. 有人说名字很重要 2. 也有人觉得名字无关紧要 3. 我认为… 1. 很多人在谈论名字是否重要 陈述现象 2. 有人觉得重要/不重要 正反观点 3. 我认为… 个人观点
2008年6月21日 1. 随着信息技术的发展,电子图书越来越多 2. 有人认为电子图书会 取代传统图书,理由是… 3. 我的看法
2007年12月 1. 如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用, 例如… 2. 数字化产品的使用对人们的工作、 学习、生活产生的影响
2007年12月 1. 如今数字化产品得到越来 越广泛的使用,例如… 2. 给人们带来好的/ 坏的影响 3. 我的看法 (好 & 坏的影响)
2007年6月 1、 有人做好事期望得到回报; 2、 有人认为应该像雷锋那样 做好事不图回报; 3、 我的观点。
2007年6月 1、人们热烈讨论做好事是否应得到回报 2、 有人认为应该/ 不应该图回报; 3、 我的观点。
2000年6月 1, 很多人认为有必要举行英语口语考试 2, 也有人持不同意见,… 3, 我的看法和打算
2000年6月 1, 人们热烈讨论有没有必要举行口试 2, 有人觉得必要;也有人持不同意见 3, 我的看法和打算
对立观点作文 写作框架和模板 3 * 9
第一段:陈述现状 (第1、2句) [1] The term “……” may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age.
[2] Does anyone hold the same attitude towards “……” [2] Does anyone hold the same attitude towards “……”? Definitely not,as to this issue, opinions vary from person to person.
[3] For those who hold the opinion that…正面观点claim that, firstly, 理由之一 第二段:阐明对立观点 (第3、4、5、6、句) [3] For those who hold the opinion that…正面观点claim that, firstly, 理由之一 [4] Secondly, 理由之二
[5] However, others maintain that…反面观点, first and foremost,理由之一 [6] Moreover, 理由之二
第三段:阐明我的观点 (第7、8、9句) [7] If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions, I, doubtless, stand by the idea that…你支持的观点 , in the first place, 理由之一
[8] in the second place , 理由之二
[9] Given the factors I have just outlined, I strongly commit to the notion that… 再次表明你的看法和观点
正反对立观点作文 – 模板句 模板句的两个功能: 对于考生: 提供写作思路,文章框架 对于阅卷人:给分提示句 ! 使用模板句的注意事项: 对于考生: 提供写作思路,文章框架 对于阅卷人:给分提示句 ! 使用模板句的注意事项: 写得再好,不加分,也不扣分 学会替换模板句,谨防撞车!
正反对立观点作文 – 模板句作文 替换模板句子 自创模板作文
第一段 模板句替换和自创
写法一:将现象转变成某个“词” 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) The term “……” may by no means sound strange to most people in this day and age. Term = new coined word /phrase 艳照门 李刚门 学历门 诈捐门
Watergate scandal 各种“门”,怎么来的?~ 1972年的总统大选中,为了取得民主党内部竞选策略的情报,闯入位于华盛顿水门大厦的民主党全国委员会办公室,在安装窃听器并偷拍有关文 件时,当场被捕,由于此事,尼克松于1974年8月8日宣布将于次日辞职,从而成为美国历史上首位辞职的总统
写法二:将现象转变成趋势 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) There is a growing tendency nowadays that … (2011.6网购) People in mounting numbers are purchasing goods on the internet.
写法三:将现象转变成发展的结果 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) With the development of the information technology, digital products have attracted the attention from all our society.
With the advancement of society and the development of economy, With the improvement of people’s living standard,
Nowadays,there is a heated discussion whether…(2011.6考证) 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法四:将现象转变成“热烈讨论中” Nowadays,there is a heated discussion whether…(2011.6考证) People should spend so much time pursuing various kinds of certificates.
第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法五:将现象转变成“令人关注” Recently,the problem of“certificate craze”has aroused wide/deep/great concern among the public.
When people are asked “… ?” , answers may vary from person to person. 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法六:最偷懒的方式-自问自答 When people are asked “… ?” , answers may vary from person to person. Will you run your own company after graduation
第一段 第2句保持不动 [2] Does anyone hold the same attitude towards “……”? Definitely not,as to this issue, opinions vary from person to person.
第二段 模板句替换和自创
Those who hold the opinion that…claim that, firstly, 理由之一… 第二段 第3句正方观点替换句 有人认为… Some people think that… 改造升级 Those who hold the opinion that…claim that, firstly, 理由之一…
Those who are in favor of the idea that… claim that,firstly, 理由之一… 第二段 第3句正方观点替换句 那些支持…观点的人认为… Those who are in favor of the idea that… claim that,firstly, 理由之一…
第二段 第5句反方观点替换句 相反,有很多人认为 On the contrary, a majority of people maintain that…,to begin with ,理由之一…
第二段 第5句反方观点替换句 另外一部分人不这么看 while the rest hold the other side of the picture, for one thing, 理由之一…
第三段 模板句替换和自创
第三段 第7句个人观点替换句 From my perspective, 个人观点 To my way of thinking, 在我看来 From my perspective, 个人观点 To my way of thinking, So far as I am concerned,
第三段 第7句个人观点替换句 如果我必须要选择一个观点的话,毫 无疑问,我支持… If I were forced to agree with one of the two opinions, I, doubtlessly, stand by the idea that…
考虑到我刚刚说过的因素,我强 烈认同…观点 第三段 第9句再次强调个人观点 考虑到我刚刚说过的因素,我强 烈认同…观点 Accordingly,given the factors I have just outlined, I strongly commit to the notion that
衡量了这些观点的利弊,我更倾向 于同意…的观点 第三段 第9句再次强调个人观点 衡量了这些观点的利弊,我更倾向 于同意…的观点 Weighing the pros and cons of these arguments, I am inclined to agree with the idea that…
观点如何陈述 ? (第3和第5句)
Sth. plays a positive role in… 观点陈述法一 …是有利的 Sth. is beneficial to … Sth. plays a positive role in…
Sth. plays a negative role in… 观点陈述法二 …是有害的 Sth. is detrimental to … Sth. plays a negative role in…
The advantages of sth. far outweigh the disadvantages. 观点陈述法三 …的优点远远大于其缺点 The advantages of sth. far outweigh the disadvantages.
The advantages of A are much greater than those of B. 观点陈述法四 A的优点远远大于B The advantages of A are much greater than those of B.
应试技巧 题型分析及模板对策
第二类题 2010年6月 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象; 2.出现这种现象的原因和后果; 3.我认为…
…现象的原因 …现象的危害、后果 我认为,我的看法 问题解决作文
2000-2011 (12 - 7) 2011.6 2010.6 2008.12 2006.12 2005.6 2004.1 2003.1
写作框架 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象; 陈述现状 (第一段) 2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;; 原因(及后果)(第二段) 2010年6月 1.近年来在学生中出现了忽视中文学习的现象; 陈述现状 (第一段) 2.出现这种现象的原因和后果;; 原因(及后果)(第二段) 3. 在我看来…… 个人观点 解决措施(第三段)
2008年12月 1. 大学生心理健康很重要 2. 为此,学校可以… 3. 我们自己应该…
2008年12月 1. 大学生心理健康问题愈发严重 2. 心里健康问题产生的原因及危害 3. 学校和我们自己应该…
2006年12月 1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要 2、现在人们越来越少阅读经典著作,原因是 3、作为大学生,你应该怎么做
2006年12月 1、阅读经典著作对人的成长至关重要,现在人 们越来越少阅读经典著作 2、这个现象产生的原因是 (* 及危害) 3、作为大学生,你应该怎么做
2005年6月 1.目前盗版的现象比较严重; 2.造成这种现象的原因及危害 ; 3.我们应该怎么做
2004年1月 1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 2.浪费的危害 3.杜绝浪费, 从我做起
1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 2.浪费(产生的原因)的危害 3.我们应该 - 杜绝浪费, 从我做起 2004年1月 1.有些大学校园浪费现象日益严重 2.浪费(产生的原因)的危害 3.我们应该 - 杜绝浪费, 从我做起
2003年1月 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实
2003年1月 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 这种现象产生的原因及危害 3. 我们应该怎么做 – 诚实
2011年6月 1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2. 其目的各不相同 3. 在我看来
2011年6月 1. 现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2. 这种现象产生的原因(及危害) 3. 我们应该怎么做
问题解决作文 写作框架和模板 3 * 9
第一段:陈述现状 (第1、2句) [1] The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon social phenomenon that…
[2] Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease: 举例补充第 [1]句,增加文章 生动性和真实性 (同时凑字)
第二段:阐明问题产生的原因、后果 (第3、4、5、6 句) [3] What exactly contributes to such phenomenon ? It’s a thought-provoking question. Firstly, 原因之一 [4] Secondly, 理由之二
[5] The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it. first and foremost,危害之一 [6] Moreover, 危害之二
第三段:阐明问题的解决策略 (第7、8、9句) [7] Confronted with such problem ,effective measures must be taken before things get worse. In the first place, 措施之一 [8] in the second place , 理由之二
[9] Only with these measures taken can we 提出美好愿景
问题解决作文 – 模板句 模板句的两个功能: 对于考生: 提供写作思路,文章框架 对于阅卷人:给分提示句 ! 使用模板句的注意事项: 对于考生: 提供写作思路,文章框架 对于阅卷人:给分提示句 ! 使用模板句的注意事项: 写得再好,不加分,也不扣分 学会替换模板句,谨防撞车!
问题解决作文 – 模板句作文 替换模板句子 自创模板作文
第一段 模板句替换和自创
第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法一:过去几年,我们见证了… [1 ]The past several years have witnessed a not uncommon social phenomenon that…
写法二:套近乎——众所周之 第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) [1] It is widely acknowledged that … has become an increasingly serious problem. waste on campus
第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法二:套近乎——众所周之 [1] Almost no one in China can have failed to notice the phenomenon that…In recent years.
第一段:陈述现状 (第1句的替换) 写法三:见诸报端,引发热议 Recently, it often hits headlines of newspapers that…,which has aroused heated discussion among the public.
第一段 第2句保持不动 [2] Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease: 举例补充第 [1]句,增加文章 生动性和真实性 (同时凑字)
第二段 模板句替换和自创
第二段 第3句现象产生的原因替换句 到底是什么导致了这个现象的产生? 这是个令 人深思的话题 What exactly contributes to such phenomenon ? It’s a thought- provoking question. Firstly,原因之一
第二段 第3句现象产生的原因替换句 这个现象为什么会出现 ? 理由很明 显,如下解释… Why such a phenomenon emerges? The reasons, which are obvious to all, can be listed as follows: Firstly,原因之一
第二段 第3句现象产生的原因替换句 很多因素可以解释这个现象,如下几 点是最重要的 A number of factors can account for such phenomenon, but the followings might be the critical ones. Firstly,原因之一
第二段 第5句危害或后果替换句 如果我们熟视无睹,这个问题必定 会带来严重的后果 The problem mentioned above is bound to generate severe consequences if we keep turning a blind eye to it. Firstly,危害之一
第二段 第5句危害或后果替换句 如果这个状况没有得到处理,将危 害极大 It is extremely harmful if the situation is left unfettered. Firstly,危害之一
第二段 第5句危害或后果替换句 如果我们听之任之,将会带来巨大的问题 It will give rise to a host of severe problems if we leave the situation as it is. Firstly, 危害之一
第三段 模板句替换和自创
第三段 第7句-号召注意-替换句 鉴于这个问题的严重性,我们必须在事态恶化 前采取有效措施 In view of the seriousness of the problem, effective measures should be taken before things get worse. In the first place, 措施之一
第三段 第7句-号召注意-替换句 鉴于这个问题的严重性,我们必须马上关注这 个问题 In light of the seriousness of the problem, Due attention has to be paid to this issue. In the first place, 措施之一
第三段 第7句-号召注意-替换句 很明显,我们必须采取有效措施来阻止这 个情况 Obviously, it is imperative that effective actions should be taken to prevent the above situation . firstly, 措施之一
第三段 第9句-美好愿景-替换句 通过这些方法,我们有理由相信这个问题,在 不久的将来,就会解决 With these measures taken, it is reasonable for us to believe that the problem will be solved in the near future.
第三段 第9句-美好愿景-替换句 只有采取这些措施,我们才能… Only with these measures taken can we… expect a comprehensive development of college students.
第三段 第9句-美好愿景-替换句 只有这样,我们才能… Only in this way can we … make the society more harmonious.
措施有哪些? (第7和第8句)
解决措施一 因此,我们应该吸取好的一面,而回避 坏的一面 We should,therefore, take advantage of the fruits and avoid the opposite facet.
解决措施一 因此,我们应该“取其精华,取其糟粕” We should,therefore,As the common saying goes,“Take the essence, discard the dregs.”
解决措施二 我们应该发扬长处,并将其坏处减少到最 低程度 What we must do is to encourage the strength and diminish the weaknesses to the least extent.
解决措施三 政府制定法律法规 It is essential that laws and regulations should be worked out and enforced to … ban/reduce smoking. Put an end to the trend/ situation.
解决措施四 个人应该提高意识 The public(we ourselves) should enhance the consciousness of the importance of … Health / education / independence
六级写作模板班 模板作文的内容填充 万能论据及话题预测
一. 客观社会角度 便利 节约浪费 效率 环境 经济 文化
1. 便 利 Convenience
便利角度万能句
It will offer us great convenience in many aspects of our life. 好处方面 It will offer us great convenience in many aspects of our life.
坏处方面 …会给我们生活的很多方面,造成巨 大的不便 Sth. will bring about tremendous inconvenience in many aspects of our daily life.
便利角度拓展句
微薄的广泛使用 Microblog 微博可以使用户更方便地表达他们的情 感和个人想法 Microblog enables its users to convey their emotions and individual thoughts more conveniently.
网络远程教育 Distant learning 更容易获得网络上的教育资源 We have easier access to education resources on the internet.
Credit card enables its owners to obtain more convenient services. 信用卡的广泛使用 Credit cards 使用户获得更多的便利服务 Credit card enables its owners to obtain more convenient services.
社交网站的广泛使用 social-networking site 这是一种获得娱乐和放松的来源 social networking site is a convenient source of entertainment and relaxation.
2. 节约和浪费 Save and waste
节约浪费角度万能句
It will help us save a great deal of time (and money). 好处方面 It will help us save a great deal of time (and money).
Sth. is nothing but a waste of our precious time. 坏处方面 Sth. is nothing but a waste of our precious time.
节约浪费角度拓展句
二手货网站盛行 这可以使那些经济条件差的人省很多钱 It enables those who have low financial condition to save a great deal of money.
城市用电紧张 electricity crisis 相当多的人毫无意识地浪费电 Quite a few people waste electricity without even realizing it .
so we would be able to concentrate more time and energy on study. 家长要求孩子寄宿学校 住校可以节省很多的来往与家与学校的时间,因此 我们可以集中时间和精力在学业上 Living on campus can save us a great deal of time on the way between home and school everyday, so we would be able to concentrate more time and energy on study.
3. 效率 Efficiency
效率角度万能句
It can enhance our work (study) efficiency greatly. 好处方面 It can enhance our work (study) efficiency greatly.
It will decrease our work (study) efficiency greatly. 坏处方面 It will decrease our work (study) efficiency greatly.
效率角度拓展句
网络 VS 图书搜索信息 With a wealth of information on the internet , searching for useful information can be time-consuming and inefficient.
4. 环境 Environment
环境角度万能句
Sth. contributes to the improvement of environment. 好处方面 Sth. contributes to the improvement of environment.
Sth. has a detrimental impact on the environment. 坏处方面 Sth. has a detrimental impact on the environment.
环境角度拓展句
大城市的生活环境愈加恶化 无可否认,大城市环境正处在一个恶 劣的状况 No one can deny the fact that the environment in big cities is in an undesirable condition.
保护环境的紧迫性 如果我们什么都不做,那么环境问题将会不 可避免地加剧 If nothing is to be done to protect the environment, the environmental problems will inevitably be aggravated .
保护环境的紧迫性 为了唤醒公众的环境保护意识,我们需要采 取很多方法。 Various measures should be adopted to arouse public awareness of environmental protection.
5. 经济、发展、就业 Economy
经济、发展角度万能句
Sth. contributes to the ( ) development of economy. 好处方面 Sth. contributes to the ( ) development of economy. Long-term Sustainable Rapid and sound Comprehensive
Sth. will hamper the ( ) development of economy. 坏处方面 Sth. will hamper the ( ) development of economy. Long-term Sustainable Rapid and sound Comprehensive
经济、发展、就业 角度拓展句
大学生在校兼职 Taking part-time jobs can relieve their family financial burden to some extent.
考公务员热 公务员,作为中国最稳定的职业之一,成为了他们更倾向的选择 Civil servant, as one of the most stable professions, has become their preferable choice.
考研、考证热 受的教育越多,就业优势越明显 The more education you have, the more likely you are to hold an advantage in the job markets.
6. 文化、教育 Culture and education
文化、教育角度万能句
It is conducive to the development and prosperity of culture. 好处方面 It is conducive to the development and prosperity of culture.
it has detrimental effects on the development of culture. 坏处方面 it has detrimental effects on the development of culture.
文化、教育角度万能句
越来越多的家长,送孩子出国 可以增加我们的知识以及很大程度上开阔我 们的视野 our knowledge will be well enriched and our horizons will be greatly expanded.
Cultural exchange is conducive to the cultural prosperity. 越来越多的家长,送孩子出国 文化交流有利于文化繁荣 Cultural exchange is conducive to the cultural prosperity.
在大公司还是小公司工作 ? 受到企业文化的熏陶,你更容易掌握工 作的标准流程 Influenced by the enterprise culture, you are more likely to master the standard working process.
The importance of family education is self-evident. 家长太忙,忽视家庭教育 家庭教育的重要性,不言而喻 The importance of family education is self-evident.
家长太忙,忽视家庭教育 家庭教育,某种程度上,会对孩子的成长 产生重大影响 Family education,to some extent,will exert a strong influence on children’s growth.
文化教育方面 亮点词汇词组
Foster intercultural communication Cultural differences 促进跨文化交流 Foster intercultural communication 文化差异 Cultural differences 文化多元化 Cultural diversity
满足日益增长的文化需求 meet the people’s growing cultural demand 文化宝藏 Cultural treasures
主流文化 Mainstream culture 文化遗产 Cultural relics 精神文明 Spiritual civilization
提高/影响 学习成绩 Improve / affect academic performance 创建良好的学习氛围 Create a positive academic atmosphere 从应试教育转向素质教育 Shift from exam-oriented education to quality-oriented education
名校 Prestigious school 学生减负 alleviate the burden on students 激发兴趣 Stimulate one’s interest 开发潜能 Tap one’s existing potential
二. 主观个人角度 独立 合作 自信 社会能力 健康 产生影响
1. 独立 Independence
独立意识角度万能句
It can help people foster the consciousness of independence. 好处方面 It can help people foster the consciousness of independence.
It is unfavorable to the formation of consciousness of independence. 坏处方面 It is unfavorable to the formation of consciousness of independence.
独立意识角度拓展句
It can Reduce their dependence/ reliance on parents. 孩子出国学习的年纪越来越小 可以减少他们对父母的依赖 It can Reduce their dependence/ reliance on parents.
和父母同住还是自己住 他们不想被父母过度保护,而期待有机会 去亲自面对社会 they don’t want to be overprotected by their parents but long for chance to face the society by themselves.
2. 合作 Cooperation
合作意识角度万能句
It can help people foster the consciousness of cooperation . 好处方面 It can help people foster the consciousness of cooperation .
It is unfavorable to the formation of consciousness of cooperation. 坏处方面 It is unfavorable to the formation of consciousness of cooperation.
合作意识角度拓展句
cooperation plays a vital role in the course of achieving a goal. 合作在追求成功的过程中扮演重要的 角色 cooperation plays a vital role in the course of achieving a goal.
一个范围更大的合作,将能达成一个 双赢的局面 A more extensive cooperation can achieve a win-win situation.
只有通过学校和家长的合作,青少年 的心里健康问题才能解决 Children’s mental problems can only be solved through cooperation between schools and parents .
3. 自信 Confidence
自信意识角度万能句
It can help people build up / boost self- confidence. 好处方面 It can help people build up / boost self- confidence.
It is unfavorable to the formation/improvement of self-confidence. 坏处方面 It is unfavorable to the formation/improvement of self-confidence.
自信角度拓展句
如何获得一份好工作 要想留下深刻的印象,你必须传达自信和对工作的 热情 To be deeply impressive, you must convey a sense of self-confidence and enthusiasm for work.
students will be more confident in the course of job-hunting 学生参加社会活动/ 兼职 学生们在求职的过程中,会更有自信 students will be more confident in the course of job-hunting
4. 社交能力 Social skills
社交能力 communication capability practical capability adaptability 沟通能力 实践能力 practical capability 适应性 adaptability
社交能力角度万能句
It can help people enhance their social skills. 好处方面 It can help people enhance their social skills.
It is not conducive to the improvement of their social skills. 坏处方面 It is not conducive to the improvement of their social skills.
社会能力角度拓展句
students can develop their practical capabilities. 大学生热衷竞选班干部,社会活动 学生们可以锻炼实践能力 students can develop their practical capabilities.
大学生热衷竞选班干部,社会活动 获得书本上得不到的经验 Students can gain much experience that they will never be able to get from the textbooks.
It can bring their abilities into full play . 大学生热衷竞选班干部,社会活动 充分发挥他们的能力 It can bring their abilities into full play .
通过各种各样的社会活动,人们会接触到新的想法 People will be exposed to new ideas through a great variety of social activities.
这会有利于人们更好地适应新的环境 It will help people do a better job in adapting themselves to the new environment.
…提供更多的机会来提升他们 的人际技能,而这会使他们在 未来的职场中更有优势
…provides them with more opportunities to develop their interpersonal skills which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets.
5. 个人健康 Health
健康角度万能句
Sth. contributes directly to our body health. 好处方面 Sth. contributes directly to our body health.
Sth. has a detrimental effect on our body health. 坏处方面 Sth. has a detrimental effect on our body health.
健康角度拓展句
学生沉迷于电子/网络游戏 ….影响有害的健康,不管是生理上,还是心理上 Being addicted to video games impairs people’s health both physically and mentally
Taking exercise can build up one's resistance to disease. 越来越多的人开始重视健康和锻炼 …可以增强人的抵抗力 Taking exercise can build up one's resistance to disease.
Taking exercise can enhance immune function. 越来越多的人开始重视健康和锻炼 …可以增强人的免疫力 Taking exercise can enhance immune function.
6. 对个人产生的影响 Influence
个人影响角度万能句
Sth. will exert a profound influence on one’s life/ growth. 好处方面 Sth. will exert a profound influence on one’s life/ growth. far-reaching
Sth. will exert a negative influence on one’s life/ growth. 坏处方面 Sth. will exert a negative influence on one’s life/ growth.
个人影响角度拓展句
网络购物等社会新现象 电子产品在我们生活的很多方面产生了深远的 影响 Digital products have exerted a profound influence on our daily life in more than one way.
… 对人的个性的发展有有利的影响 Sth. has a beneficial impact on the development of their personal character.
…can add color to our monotonous daily life. …可以给我们单调的日常生活增添了色彩 …can add color to our monotonous daily life.
Sth. can enrich our life and make our life more meaningful. …可以让我们的生活更充实、更有意义 Sth. can enrich our life and make our life more meaningful.
CET-6 大学英语六级考试 六级写作模板班 点“词”成金
1. 词汇的拼写 If they (complement, compliment)themselves on social progress,then they are deceiving themselves .
2. 冠词和单复数
After considering all five possibilities, we choose the second one.
We are now faced with financial difficulties, and the difficulties are considerable.
The strong create opportunities, the wise seize opportunities, the weak wait for opportunities, and the foolish give up opportunities.
I prepared for the cultural differences I will encounter in the United States.
Difference 差异,不同 There is no difference between difference and no difference. But different degree of difference between difference and no difference.
3. 点“词”成金 词汇的升级替换
1.人,人们
Some people believe that education is of great importance . Some believe that education is of great importance.
Other people all people no people Others All None
Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for/to kids. 1.2 individual 隆重登场 一些人认为电子书对孩子是有好处的。 Some people believe that E-book is beneficial for/to kids. Individuals claim suggest argue; hold the firm position
This issue has aroused heated discussion among people. 1.3 表达“在人们中” 这个问题在人们当中引起了热烈的讨论 This issue has aroused heated discussion among people. Among the public trigger bitter controversy
Human being Harmonious coexistence between people and nature. 1.4 “人们”与“自然” 人与自然的和谐共处 Harmonious coexistence between people and nature. Human beings 具体的人 Human being
2. 重要
2.1 表示重要的词或短语 be highly significant 重大意义 be essential to 重要的 (核心本质的) be crucial to 重要的(具有决定性) be indispensable to 重要的 (必不可少)
课外活动是学生学校生活中不可缺少的部 分 Extracurricular activities is indispensible to students in school life.
2.2 表示重要的句型
Increasingly important 2.2.1 …扮演重要的角色 … Plays a(an) … role in ... Vital Irreplaceable unique Increasingly important Crucify crucifix; critical temperature; over-sea sight seeing; widen knowledge; enrich experience;
Eunuch
模仿和重复在语言学习上扮演著重要角色 Imitation and repetition plays an important role in language learning.
A is to B what perfume is to a flower. 2.2.2 一个钻石句型 A is to B what perfume is to a flower. Expansion device instrument equipment
众所周知,实践对于学习至关重要 It is widely acknowledged that practice is to study what perfume is to a flower.
The importance of sth. is self-evident. 2.2.3 重要性不言而喻 The importance of sth. is self-evident. self-evident [self'evidənt] adj. 不证自明的, 不言而喻的
Nothing can be more important than… 2.2.4 没有…比…更重要了 Nothing can be more important than…
在孩子的成长过程中,没有什么比接受 教育更重要了。 During their growth, nothing can be more important than receiving education.
2.2.5 再怎么强调…的重要性也不为过 We can’t emphasize the importance of … too much. One can’t emphasize too much the importance of
再怎么强调保护环境的重要性都不为过 One can’t emphasize too much the importance of protecting our environment.
3. 许多
To study abroad, you might encounter many difficulties . 在海外留学,你可能会遇到很多困难 To study abroad, you might encounter many difficulties . Numerous
无数的事实证明了这个观点 many facts have proved this point Countless
A …number of… huge considerable great
相当多的人反对政府对待移民问题的态度 A considerable number of people object to the government’s attitude to immigration.
3.2 越来越多
3.2.1 more and more + n more and more parents… n. + in mounting/growing numbers
Become more and more obvious increasingly + adj. 3.3 . 表达“越来越…” more and more + adj. Become more and more obvious increasingly + adj. Become increasingly obvious
More and more fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is more and more difficult.
A growing number of fresh graduates find that obtaining a decent job is increasingly difficult.
4. 现在
Nowadays, the environmentally friendly products are becoming increasingly popular.
in contemporary society in this day and age currently in contemporary society in this day and age prevailing = prevalent = pervasive
5. 将会…
will/ would? Petrol resource tends to be used up in a few decades. 翻译:石油资源会在未来几十年被耗尽。 Petrol resource tends to be used up in a few decades. adolescents elderly, aged, senior citizens
大多数人认为,英语会变得更重要。 According to most individuals, the significance of English will increase. Tends to
6. 举例,列举
for example Take a …example, Concrete Typical vivid vive!跟instant的区别
A …case in point is… An opposite Typical vivid
A concrete case in point is our volunteering for social work.
7.导致,引起
Cause 7.1 Give rise to 7.2 Result in 7.3 bring about
7.1 Give rise to Mass unemployment may give rise to social upheaval.
7.2 Result in Stress and tiredness often result in a lack of concentration.
7.3 bring about Science has brought about many changes in our lives.
8. 重视,强调
8 . Pay attention to sth. Place great emphasis on sth. Attach much significance to sth.
We should place greater emphasis on children’s mental health. 我们应该更重视孩子们的心理健康 We should place greater emphasis on children’s mental health.
poverty-stricken为贫穷所困扰的 当局应该重视贫困地区的教育现状 The authorities should attach much significance to the education situation in poverty- stricken areas. poverty-stricken为贫穷所困扰的
9. 提高
Improve Enhance 1. enhance the consciousness of … 2. enhance our competitiveness 3. enhance our abilities.
10. 因为
because for the reason that due to owing to
10.1 for the reason that She quit her job for the reason that she is not satisfied with the salary .
The failure of the scheme was due to bad management.
I didn‘t do the work well owing to lack of experience.
11. 认为
think hold the opinion that harbor the idea that
We hold the opinion that miracles sometimes occur, but one has to work terribly hard for them.
12. 众所周知
As we all know, It is commonly believed that… It is universally acknowledged that… It is widely accepted that…
It goes without saying that work without rest will do harm to health. 无可否认,工作而不休息会对健康有害的。 It goes without saying that work without rest will do harm to health.
12. 无可否认
No one can deny the fact that… It is undeniable that… There is no denying that … It goes without saying that…
The usage of punctuation 标点注意事项 Sentence variety & Grammar 句式多变和语法
1. The usage of punctuation 标点注意事项
1.1 Comma 逗号 (列举时)英语中没有顿号、
Success is a product of courage , confidence and opportunity.
1.2 分号 Semicolon 两个或两个以上, 有联系的分句之间
Work is more than a necessity for most human beings; it is the focus of their lives, the source of their identity .
1.3 三个表示解释及说明的标点 冒号 : 破折号 —— 括弧 ( )
1.4 书名号 Angle quotes 杜绝《 》 斜体字 下划线
His speech quotes lots of materials from Selected Works of MAO TSETUNG
1.5 引号 quotation marks 基本格式 , “ .”
As the common saying goes, “ Every man alive has a duty to his country
2. Sentence variety & Grammar 句式多变和语法运用
2.1 短句写作 2.2 绚丽技术 2.3 鱼骨造句
2.1 短句写作 状语从句的精简
2.1.1 Begin a sentence with “to do…”
为了保护环境,我们应该让大家明白 污染的危害 To protect our environment, we need to make the public aware of the dangers caused by pollution.
To enrich my salary, I found three jobs. 为了增加收入,我找了三份工作 To enrich my salary, I found three jobs.
2.1.2 Begin a sentence with “doing… ”
看着老照片,他沉思许久 Looking at the old pictures,he lost in thought for a long time .
2.1.3 Begin a sentence with “a preposition + doing ”
回顾过去的错误, 我们能更好的理解现在 By reviewing mistakes of the past, people can gain a better understanding of the present.
By traveling , we can enrich our experience and expand our horizons. 通过旅游,我们可以增长见识,开阔视野 By traveling , we can enrich our experience and expand our horizons.
2.1.4 Begin a sentence with “Done… ”
Affected by the environment,the pessimistic girl became optimistic . 受到环境的影响, 这个悲观的女孩变得乐观了 Affected by the environment,the pessimistic girl became optimistic .
2.1.5 Begin a sentence with “having + done… ”
达到了我的短期目标之后, 我开始设计我的长远目标 Having reached my short-term goal,I begin to design my long- term goal.
2.1.6 Begin a sentence with “when/while + doing ”
While reading this book, I form a beautiful scene in my mind. 读这本书的时候, 我的脑子里有一副美丽的画面 While reading this book, I form a beautiful scene in my mind.
When answering the phone, you should speak clearly and specifically. The subscriber… 接电话的时候,你应该说清楚详细。 When answering the phone, you should speak clearly and specifically.
2.1.7 Begin a sentence with “when/ while + done”
When asked to answer a personal question , she just smiled as a reply. 当被问及到私人问题的时候,她用微笑作 为回复 When asked to answer a personal question , she just smiled as a reply.
When interviewed,she kept smiling to the camera. 接受采访的时候,她微笑面对镜头 When interviewed,she kept smiling to the camera.
2.1.8 Begin a sentence with “if / until / though / although / once / unless + done”
尽管对我不想读研究生的决定很失望, 父母最终还是同意了 Although disappointed at my decision not to pursue graduate studies, my parents eventually approved of my decision.
Once printed,the book will be popular. 一旦印刷,这本书就会流行 Once printed,the book will be popular. 钱使用得当,会给我们带来幸福 If used properly,money will bring us great happiness.
2.1.9 Begin a sentence with “an adjective ”
Big or small,the obstacle must be overcome 不管困难是大是小,都会被解决 Big or small,the obstacle must be overcome
Short of work experience ,he failed to get the job. 因为缺少工作经验,他没有得到这份工作 Short of work experience ,he failed to get the job.
2.1.10 Begin a sentence with “ a conjunction + an adjective ”
如果找不到工作,我宁可呆在家里 If unable to find a good job, I prefer to stay at home.
If uncertain about what to do next,you should turn to your superior. 如果不确定接下来做什么,那就问你的上司 If uncertain about what to do next,you should turn to your superior.
2.2 绚丽技术 2.2.1 排比句(平行结构) 2.2.2 双重否定 2.2.3 插入语
2.2.1 排比句(平行结构) Parallelism
If there is anyone out there who still doubts that America is a place where all things are possible, who still wonders if the dream of our founders is alive in our time, who still questions the power of our democracy, tonight is your answer.
Yesterday is History, Tomorrow is a Mystery, and Today is a Gift: That's why we call it —the Present.
如果想成长,我们应该学习过去,体验当下,并期 待未来的成功 To grow up,We should learn from the past , experience the present , and hope for success in the future.
人生的三大支柱:观察、经历、学习 Seeing much, suffering much , and studying much are the three pillars of life.
提高成绩的三大法宝:课堂上高效地做笔记、订 立学习计划、为考试做仔细的准备 The keys to improving grades are to take effective notes in class, to plan study time, and to prepare carefully for exams.
有三种方式可以赚钱:你可以继承财产,你可以 嫁入豪门,你也可以窃取财物 There are three ways to make money: You can inherit it. You can marry it . You can steal it.
A teacher is like a candle who burns herself to light the future of her students; a teacher is like the sun who warms the hearts of her students; a teacher is like the mother who gives all live to her students.
2.2.2 双重否定
It is not impossible to master English within a short period of time if you use a good study method.
听录音 跟着读 大声模仿 脱口背诵
It is not unusual for people to change careers. 某人做……不足为奇. It is not unusual for sb. to do... It is not unusual for people to change careers.
…很常见 一个伟大的学者对日常事务一无所知,这种情 况很常见 It is not uncommon for a great scholar to be ignorant of everyday affairs.
他能够独自做这件事 He was able to do the job by himself. He was not unable to do the job by himself.
All of us have made mistakes. None of us have never made mistakes. 我们所有人都犯过错误。 All of us have made mistakes. None of us have never made mistakes.
短语插入语 in short, to some extent as a matter of fact, To some degree by the way, in conclusion, to some extent To some degree of course,
It is a proper,if not the best,method to solve the problem. 从句插入语 It is a proper,if not the best,method to solve the problem.
The question,how to make our life more meaningful,deserves thinking over.
2.3 鱼骨造句
没有…比…更… Nothing is more + adj. + than n.
Nothing is more precious than … 没有什么比…更珍贵了 Nothing is more precious than … 没有什么比时间/教育/ 和平更珍贵了 Time / education / peace / independence Mental health / freedom / love / understanding
Nothing is more exciting than … Nothing is more important than … 没有什么比…更令人兴奋了 Nothing is more exciting than … 没有什么比…更重要了 Nothing is more important than … Nothing is more important than honesty. Nothing is more important than to be honest .
We can’t emphasize the importance of… too much. 再怎么强调…的重要性…也不为过 We can’t emphasize the importance of… too much.
We can’t emphasize the importance of too much. diligence practice learning English
An advantage of sth. is that 从句 … …的优点/ 好处之一是… An advantage of sth. is that 从句 …
住校的一个好处是,你可以学会独立. An advantage of living on campus is that you can learn to be independent.
…的原因是… The reason why + 句子 + is that + 从句
环境恶化的原因是人们没有充分重视环 境保护的重要性. The reason why the environment is worsening is that the public are not fully aware of the importance of environmental protection.
There is no reason why+ 从句 没有理由… There is no reason why+ 从句
没理由说,经济意识是不能通过教育手段产生 并得到高度加强。 There is no reason why economic awareness cannot be produced and highly developed by education.
我们绝对不能… On no account can we do sth.
On no account can we undervalue the power of education. 我们绝对不能浪费生命 On no account can we waste our lives. 我们绝对不能低估教育的作用 On no account can we undervalue the power of education.
It is conceivable that… conceive [kən'si:v] 可想而知… It is conceivable that… conceive [kən'si:v] v.设想, 想出, 怀孕
可想而知,一场新的经济危机可能再次席 卷全球 It is conceivable that there will be a new economic crisis throughout the world
Spare no efforts to do sth. 不遗余力/竭尽全力地做… Spare no efforts to do sth.
要想在国际市场上有竞争能力,必须在产 品质量上狠下功夫。 To be competitive on the world market, we must spare no efforts to improve the quality of our products.
Sth. Leaves much to be desired. …令人很不满意 Sth. Leaves much to be desired.
The traffic condition leaves much to be desired. 交通状况令人不满意 The traffic condition leaves much to be desired.
教育质量 有待提高. The quality of education leaves much to be desired.
…对…造成巨大的威胁 …pose a great threat to…
各种各样的电子游戏对孩子的健康成长造成 巨大的威胁 A great variety of video games pose a great threat to the healthy and sound growth of children.
不要问…问一问 Ask not…,ask …
不要问你的国家能为你做什么,问一问你能 为国家做什么 Ask not what your country can do for you, ask what you can do for your country.
January 20, 1961
Ask not how much you have got from your parents ,ask how much you have done for them.
只要… As long as…
As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible. 只要我们一起努力,我们就能把不可能变为可能. As long as we work together, we can make the impossible possible.
We can use online chatting without its bad effects as long as we keep ourselves under good control.
A majority of people take it for granted that … 很多人认为……理所当然. A majority of people take it for granted that …
很多人以为你父母养你一辈子是天经地 义的事. A majority of people take it for granted that your parents should support you all your life.
I would rather do…than do... 我宁愿……也不……. I would like to do... rather than do... I would rather do…than do...
I would rather stay at home than go shopping on such humid day. 在这样潮湿的天气里,我宁愿呆在家里,也 不愿去购物. I would rather stay at home than go shopping on such humid day.
现在是……的时候了 It is high time … Sb. did sth. that sb. Should do sth.
It is high time that we (should)put an end to the controversy . 现在的确该停止这场争论了 It is high time that we (should)put an end to the controversy .
.……对…意义重大. sth. means a great deal to sb.
Your encouragement means a great deal to me. 你的鼓励对我来说意义重大. Your encouragement means a great deal to me.
This award means a great deal to me. 这个奖对我来说意义重 大。 This award means a great deal to me.
…条件是……. On the condition that...
你可以达成你的目标,只要你够努力 You can achieve your goals, on the condition that you are diligent enough.
最近研究表明……. Recent studies show that...
最近研究表明,越来越多的学生在年纪尚小的时候 就出国留学了. Recent studies show that a growing number of students go abroad at an early age.
有迹象表明/显示… There are signs that... .
有迹象表明现在的家长开始重视孩子的 心理健康问题 There are signs that parents nowadays begin to attach great importance to children’s mental health.
There are some signs that the economy is on the upturn. 有些迹象表明经济正在好转。 There are some signs that the economy is on the upturn.
Something must be done to... …必须采取措施……. Something must be done to...
必须采取措施来改革我们现行的考试制度. Something must be done to change our existing /current examination system.
……是无意义的. There's no point in...
试图将无用的知识灌输给幼儿是毫无意义的。 There is no point in trying to force useless information down the throats of young children.
We have no choice but to… 除了…我们别无选择 We have no choice but to…
We have no choice but to develop our education, or we'll fall behind. 我们别无选择,只有发展教育,否则就会 落后 We have no choice but to develop our education, or we'll fall behind.
谈到……,/涉及到……. When it comes to...
When it comes to making friends, you cannot be too careful. 一谈到交朋友,你再怎么小心也不为过。 When it comes to making friends, you cannot be too careful.
CET-6大学英语六级考试 模板作文范文赏析 北京新东方 金凌虹
一、对立观点作文范文赏析 2009年12月 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班; 1.对这种做法有人表示支持, 2、有人并不赞成; 3、我认为…
文章第一段:陈述现状 + 引出正反 [1]There is a growing tendency nowadays that parents send their children to attend various kinds of arts courses, such as dancing, calligraphy and musical instruments training, etc. [2]Does anyone hold the same attitude towards this phenomenon? The answer is no. As to this issue, opinions vary from person to person.
文章第二段:正反观点论述 正方观点 [3]Some claim that it is beneficial for children. firstly, most parents are convinced that the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to tap their artistic potential . [4], their kids can make better use of leisure time to master more skills and be prepared for the future fierce competition .
文章第二段:正反观点论述 反方观点 [5]There are some people who hold contrary opinions. On the one hand,some kids spend a large amount of time in the class, they even can’t set aside time to stay together with their parents and share their feelings. [6]On the other hand,it will impose heavier burden on them,which is detrimental to their growth both physically and mentally.
文章第三段:阐述个人观点 [7] To my way of thinking, the merits of attending art classes outweigh its demerits. For one thing, since children spend most of their time watching TV、playing video games after class. Instead, they can make better use of time through attending art classes. [8]For another, children can be more versatile, which will also provide them with more opportunities in the future. [9]Given the factors I have just outlined, I strongly recommend parents to send their children to attend art classes.
二、问题解决(现象)作文范文赏析 2011年6月 The Certificate Craze 1.现在许多人热衷于各类证书考试 2.其目的各不相同 3.我的看法
文章第一段:陈述现状 + 举例 [1] Almost no one in China has failed to notice the phenomenon that a growing number of people are enthusiastic about pursuing various kinds of certificates. [2]Taking a look around, one can find numerous examples with ease. A common case in point is that students spend a great deal of time and energy attending various kinds of certificate- oriented training courses to ensure a better score.
文章第二段:目的 – 原因 [3]The purpose of acquiring certificates varies from individuals to individuals. For students, as the job market competition is becoming increasingly fierce, not only can a certain certificate prove their capabilities, but also will put them in a favorable position in the employment market .[4]When it comes to white-collared workers, more job-related certificates often guarantee greater opportunities for salary raise and promotion. What’s more, it is also an ideal way to enhance their job techniques and sharpen their competitiveness.
文章第三段:个人看法 + 措施 [7]From my perspective, the merits of pursuing certificates are self-evident. [8] However, we should also bear in mind that it is the practical skills, such as management, cooperation, communication, rather than certificates that guarantee one’s accomplishment in career. [9]Accordingly, we might as well attach great importance to both certificates and the improvement of one’s comprehensive abilities.