高考作文训练 （漫画类）

2010 年江苏省高考考试说明： 示例１ 示例２ 文字材料类 漫画类

2010 年江苏省高考考试说明： 漫画类

2011 年江苏省高考书面表达（ 2013 考试说 明） 解读： 2011 年的书面表达是一篇 漫画类作文, 是考纲中多次 出现, 但是首次露面的题型。

2013 江苏省高考书面表达 漫画类

漫 画 作 文 ( 议论类 )

Learning aims: 1. To deal with difficulties in writing about cartoons 2. To learn the basic structures of cartoon writing 3. To learn some useful expressions of cartoon writing

Have a try:

1. 读图 How to write a good essay?

1. 读图 How to write a good essay? 2. 解意

1. 读图 How to write a good essay? 2. 解意 3. 谋篇

1. 读图 What should we pay attention to?

The underwear is a funny way to show how desperate parents get to prevent children from seeing things they should not! 夸张 1. 读图 monitor underwear

1. 读图 题目 ( 眼睛 ) 画面 ( 细节 ) 文字 ( 观点 ) 夸张 ( 寓意 ) What should we pay attention to?

注意 : 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息 ( clues ) ， 切记要认真阅读！！！ 2. 解意

联系生活，明晰主旨 2. 解意 imagination

辨明褒贬，找准角度 support or criticize ？ 2. 解意

describe the picture interpret the picture (purposes / reasons) give your opinions about the phenomenon 3. 谋篇 parts 3

Part 1 Describe the picture *The picture is talking about/shows… *The picture shows a common phenomenon. *The picture describes an interesting phenomenon. *In the picture, there are…/…is (are) doing… *The picture above is about … *…Let’s look at the picture above/first.

Part 2 Interpret the picture *It seems very ridiculous that… However, this kind of story is performed everywhere. *The picture shows that… It is the exact reflection of… *The picture indicates that we…Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that… *This is a satirical ( 讽刺的 ) cartoon which vividly describes a kind of common phenomenon among…

Part 3 Give your opinions *I think/believe that As far as I’m concerned, In my opinion, From my point of view, *should It is better/advisable to… I consider it necessary… *Only in this way can….

Polish up the essay

Something to add ： 三要素 —— 体裁、人称、时态 体裁：议论文 人称：第三人称 时态：一般现在时 三写 —— 拼写，书写，大小写

Polish up the essay Rewrite your essay, using the useful expressions you’ve learned. And you can refer to the helpful tips given to you if necessary.

For most of the parents, it’s no easy job to keep their children away from the PC monitor. Let’s look at the picture above. Two people are standing in front of a computer, whose monitor is wearing underwear. The woman is staring at the computer, thinking ， while the man is telling her that there are three ways to make the Internet safer for her children---hardware, software and underwear. My version:

It may be ridiculous to cover the PC monitor with someone’s underwear, but it shows vividly how desperate parents get when faced with the problem. Concerned about their children’s security, some of them just cut off the access to the Internet at home ——“the hardware solution”; some choose to use a certain software program to prevent their kids from getting on line ——“the software solution”; others may make some rules to limit the time their children spend on the Internet — —“the underwear solution”!

From my point of view, this phenomenon calls for the attention of the whole society. On one hand, the government should make laws to inspect the Internet and ban unhealthy websites. On the other hand, it is better for parents to give their children a proper guide instead of just prevention. Teenagers need to be taught how to distinguish good from bad. Only in this way can the Internet be made safer for the children.

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