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3 How could we write a better summary?
Our problem: How could we write a better summary?

4 Could we write a better summary in a rush?

5 What’s the topic of the passage?
Paragraph1: These days our society develops rapidly and forces people to rush. It appears that people have got used to being in a hurry. However, it’s better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done.

6 What do you think will be talked about in the following paragraphs?
Try to draw the mind map of your prediction.

7 the writing style Narration(记叙文) Exposition（说明文） Argumentation（议论文）

8 What to write viewpoint reasons conclusion
However, it’s better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done. viewpoint The main reason that convinces us to oppose doing work in a hurry is the possibility of doing wrongs in a rush. Slowing down the pace of life helps people enjoy their life better. Finally, slower life pace provides better healthy conditions for us. reasons Therefore, take your time and live your life at a slower pace. conclusion What to write

9 How to rewrite (a sample of the viewpoint)
Change sentence patterns However, it’s better for people to take their time and live their life at a slower pace than to hurry to get things done. People had better take their time than finish things in a hurry. To live a life in no rush is better than to do everything hurriedly. Omit needless words Use synonyms Use infinitive

10 Negative impacts Positive impacts Para 4th Reason3
Finally, slower life pace provides better healthy conditions for us. As is known to all, taking actions in a hurry bothers people and raises their stress. People think if they are not in a hurry, they will become a loser and that annoys them. Being in a hurry can hurt people both physically and mentally. According to some studies, people who have a slower pace suffer fewer diseases, tend to be happier and live much longer than those whose life is tense, even if the former finish jobs more slowly than the latter. bothers raises their stress. Negative impacts loser annoys fewer diseases Positive impacts be happier live much longer

11 Try to rewrite it with supporting details.
Finally, slower life pace provides better healthy conditions for us. physically; mentally; Additionally, slowing down helps people live a healthy life physically and mentally. As is known to all & According to studies→ facts In addition, based on some facts, it has been proved that slowing down helps people live a healthy life physically and mentally. positive; negative cover essential supporting details

12 To cover all main points
Tips : To cover all main points Cover all topic points Cover essential supporting details To be concise Omit needless words Omit repeating words/phrases To use own words Change sentence patterns Use synonyms Use infinitive Write your summary and show us.

13 What problems have been solved?

14 May you enjoy a slow life
Assignment Write a rethinking on how to write a better summary. May you enjoy a slow life in the near future~

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