2 Learning procedures Comments on your homework ( 作业评讲） Tips on how to make your sentences better ( 技巧指导） 3 Practice makes perfect ( 巩固复习） 1

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第一节：基础写作 以下是一本图书的基本信息及相关报道 基本信息： ⑴书名： Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother ⑵作者： Amy Chua ，美籍华人，耶鲁大学教授 ⑶出版时间： 2010 年 ⑷内容：作者用中国传统方式教育两个女儿的故事 ⑸效应：引发中美教育方式孰优孰劣的讨论 相关报道： ⑴中文版： 2011 年初开始在中国销售 ⑵意外反应：多数中国妈妈不赞同作者的做法 ⑶最新消息： 17 岁的大女儿已被哈佛和耶鲁录取 耶鲁： Yale 哈佛： Harvard

写作中常见的错误 1. 只有从句，没有主句 ① Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother which was published in 2010, written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor of Yale University → Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother, which was published in 2010, was written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor of Yale University

2. 以逗号代替句号, 把两个简单句当成一个句子 ① Most mothers in China don’t approve of the author, it is reported that her 17-year-old elder daughter has been admitted into Harvard and Yale. → Most mothers in China don’t approve of the author though her 17-year-old elder daughter was lately reported to has been admitted into Harvard and Yale. 3. 过多地使用并列句组合信息 ① Amy Chua is a Chinese American and is a professor of the Yale University and she wrote a book called Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother → Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor of the Yale University wrote a book called Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother.

4. 主从句叠置 → It tells how the mother taught her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way, which led to a heated discussion. It tells how the mother taught her two daughters in the traditional Chinese way led to a heated discussion. There is a book whose writer is a Chinese American called Amy Chua who is working as a professor in Yale named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother coming out in → The book named Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University came out in 刻意使用从句，表达不自然

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Battle Hymn of the Tiger Mother written by Amy Chua, a Chinese American and professor at Yale University, was published in The author introduced her experience that she educated her two daughters in Chinese traditional ways, which led to a heated argument about which kind of education will be better between China and America. The book which was published in Chinese started to sell at the beginning of what makes people surprised is that most mothers in China don’t agree to the author’s way of education. In addition, the latest report says that Amy Chua’s seventeen-year-old elder daughter has been admitted by Harvard and Yale.

Tips on how to make your sentences better （技巧指导） Basic Writing

1. 巧妙运用短语，写出规范的简单句： 1) 借助名词短语做同位语 李立，男， 19 岁， 1986 年生；籍贯：广东。 Li Li, a boy of 19, was born in Guangdong in 有了 Tom 的帮助，我们很快就找到了他们的村子。 With the help of Tom, we soon found their village. 2) 借助介词短语做状语 3) 借助非谓语动词短语做定语或状语 他的叔叔去世了，留给他很多钱。 His uncle died, leaving him a lot of money.

2. 巧用连接词，写出规范的并列句： 你必须快点, 否则你会错过这班飞机。 Not only can students improve their writing ability in this way, but also they can increase their self-confidence. 学生不仅可以以这种方式提高他们的写作能力, 而且 他们可以增加他们的自信。 You must hurry or you’ll miss the plane. 3. 巧用倒装句，写出规范的复合句：

4. 用好从句和引导词，写出规范的复合句： 1) 名词性从句 王力迟到使得他的老师很生气。 What made Wang Li’s teacher very angry was that he came to school late. That Wang Li came late to school made his teacher very angry.

2) 定语从句 正在和我们老师讲话的那个人是小明的爸爸。 The man who is talking with our teacher is Xiao Ming’s father. 3) 状语从句 这部电影是如此的精彩，以至于所有的人都感 动的流泪了。 The film was so wonderful that everyone was moved to tears. It was such a wonderful film that everyone was moved to tears.

5. 利用强调句，使句子更高级： 直到她摘下眼镜他父亲才认出她来。 It was not until she took off her glasses that her father recognized her.

Practice makes perfect （巩固练习） Basic Writing

我们一到村子就受到村民的热烈欢迎。 Translate the sentences into different ways: 1 ） As soon as we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 2 ） On arriving at the village ， we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 3 ） The moment we arrived at the village, we were warmly welcomed by the villagers. 状语从句 介词

昨天下午他才来这里。 Translate the sentences in different ways: 1 ） He came here yesterday afternoon. 2 ） He didn’t come here until yesterday afternoon. 3 ） It was yesterday afternoon that he arrived here. 4 ） It was not until yesterday afternoon that he came here. 5 ） Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here. 强调句 倒装句

这小孩懂得多，我们深感惊讶。 Translate the sentences in different ways: 1 ） Much to our surprise, the little boy knows so many things. 2 ） The little boy knows so many things that we feel surprised. 3 ） What surprises us is that the boy knows so many things. 4 ） The little boy knows so many things, which surprises us. 插入语状语从句 主语从句定语从句

Strike while the iron is hot. （巩固复习） Basic Writing

你很荣幸地成为 2008 北京奥运会的一名志愿者， 负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。 [ 写作内容 ] 请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍： 背景：射击最初只是谋生方式， 19 世纪末才发展 成为一项体育运动。 1896 ：第一次成为奥运项目 1904 ：中断 1928 ：中断 1932 ：重回奥运会 1968 ：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛 现状：稳步发展， 1896 奥运会只有 3 项射击项目 一一一现今有 17 项。

1 、射击最初只是生存工具， 19 世纪末才发展成为一项 体育运动。 2 、 1896 年射击第一次成为奥运项目。 3 、 1904 和 1928 年射击被中断， 1932 年射击重回 奥运会。 年第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛。 5 、现在射击稳步发展， 1896 奥运会只有 3 项射击 项目，现今有 17 项。 （定语从句 / 同位语 / 过去分词 / 强调句） （让步状语从句 / 现在分词） （强调句） （介词 with ）

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项目自评他评 1. 书写工整吗？有没有乱涂乱划 ? 2. 句子开头注意大小写了吗 ? 3. 有没有注意标点符号 ? 4 有单词拼写错误吗 ? 几个 ? 5. 有时态错误吗 ? 误用了哪种时态 ? 6. 注意主谓一致了吗 ? 7. 有没有语态的错误 ? 8. 有没有使用关联词 ? 使用得当吗 ? 9. 有没有词性的错误 ? 哪一种 ? 10. 简单句表达正确吗 ? 11. 是否注意使用了复杂的句子结构 ? 12. 表达方式是否多样化 ? 注意长短句搭配了吗 ? 13. 有没有用好词好句 ? 用了哪些 ? 基础写作评价表

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Shooting ， simply a means of making a living ， developed into a kind of sport at the end of the 19th century. It first appeared in the 1896 Olympic Games. Canceled in 1904 and 1928 ， the sport returned to the Olympics in 1932.It was not until 1968 that women were first allowed to compete in the Olympic shooting. Now ， with its steady development ， shooting includes 17 events ， while only 3 in 1896.

Homework Exchange your composition with your partner and correct it. Basic Writing