How to do Proof-reading 短文改错

Warming-up GAME Divide the class into four groups, each group choose a representative. I will show you five sentences one by one, you should judge whether they are right or wrong. Touch the word ‘right’ on the blackboard as soon as possible if you think the sentence is right, while touch the word ‘wrong’ if you think it is wrong.

2. So I happily accepted the offer. 1. I need some more informations. wrong information 2. So I happily accepted the offer. right 3. The driver rolled the window down and offered he an umbrella. wrong him 4. At last we reached to the village at the foot of the hill. wrong 5. I’m sure they will laugh at me and see me as a fool. right

2012－2014年高考全国卷对短文改错的考查情况如下： 考情分析 　考点 试题 语　法　错　误 逻辑错误 搭配错误 名词 冠词 代词 形容词和副词 介词 连词 动词（时态和语态） 非谓语动词 从句 2012 1 2 2013 2014

一、Verb 动词 1.动词的时态和语态错误. 高考链接1： However, my father had to return to work on Monday so we fly back last Saturday. (2011 全国） flew Growing up is not easy. Sometimes all that is need is someone to rely on.（2008 全国） needed

2. 主、谓不一致的错误。 3.非谓语动词的错误。 高考链接: I stayed there for one and a half hours and made sure that the girl were all right. (2009 全国卷2) was I was at the Shanghai Railway Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.（2011新课标全国卷） buying

二、Nouns 名词 名词单、复数形式的用法错误。 heart 高考链接2： Don’t lose hearts, and you’ll be successful at last. (2012江西） heart In early January this year, the rate of UFO reports was steady, around three per weeks. (2011辽宁卷） week

三、Adjective/Adverb 形容词、副词 １．形容词和副词的误用 2．比较级和最高级的混用或误用. 高考链接3： When she dropped me off, I pulled out the toy slow and gave it back.（2011 浙江卷） slowly The doctor says he is recovering fast than expected.(2009陕西） faster

四、 Pronoun 代词 1. 人称代词，物主代词,反身代词的误用． 2. 代词指代的人或事物前后不一致的错误. 高考链接4： With the help of Kate, a roommate of me , I made great progress in English.(2011重庆卷） mime It was only when we did their chemistry project together that I begin to understand… (2010 辽宁卷） our

He found difficult to learn math well. 3. It 作形主、形宾或指代时有缺漏 。(make, find, think) 4. 从句引导词的误用。 高考链接: He found difficult to learn math well. ∨ it She often came across the situation which she lost her way when driving . where

五、Preposition 介词 1.主要考查固定短语，固定介词的搭配。 2.不定式后的动词短语中介词不能省 3.时间状语前有指示代词this,that或one, next,last等修饰时不用介词. 高考链接５： There was one on particular I’d really wanted. in He had only a small cold room to live. ∨ in He paid a visit to his grandfather on that afternoon.

He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷） 六、Article/Conjunction 冠词/连词 １. 冠词a, an和the的用法错误． ２．连词but，and，or, so和although等的逻辑性用法错误． 高考链接６： He was right here in the front of me. (2011陕西卷） I bought my ticket but turned around to pick up my bag from the floor. (2011新课标卷） and

Exercise 1. The driver rolled the window down and offered us a umbrella. an 2. I was learning to express me in simple English. 3. One day I wrote a little story and showed to my teacher. myself ∨ it 4. He will stay there for one and two days. or 5. The gentleman insisted at my receiving the money. on

Exercise 6. He asked angry if we had finished the work. 7. I wonder that we should do next . angrily what 8.These machines look the same, but they are of different kind. kinds 9. Not only his parents but also himself like the film. likes 10. They were eager to know everything about China and ask me lots of questions. asked

Remember the rules 动词形，名词数 还要注意形和副 非谓语，细辨别 介词短语要牢记 代词格，细领悟 句子成分多分析 冠词连词常光顾 逻辑错误须关注

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Steps of correcting a composition: 1. Go through the whole passage to get a general idea .(浏览全文，掌握大意） 2. Read the passage sentence by sentence and find the mistakes.（分句阅读，逐行找错） 3. Read the passage again, check the answers and correct the difficult ones. （检查核对，攻克难点）

Forms of correcting a composition: I can go to home now. 2. I like playing piano. 3. I am fond at English. Unnecessary word 多 Missing word 缺 ∧ the Wrong word 错 of 错误比例 1：1：8 或 2：1：7

At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his father to choose the Christmas tree. They chose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting room. Jim was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burnt in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily. . . . 2019/8/11 19

a tall it At Christmas Eve, Jim went with his On father to choose the Christmas tree. They chose a big one. It was almost as taller as the room! They put them in the corner of the sitting ____ On 介词短语常常考，习惯用法要记住 a 冠词需关注 _______ tall 还要注意形和副 _______ it 代词格，细领悟 2019/8/11 20

were room. Kate was covered it with a lot of Christmas light. The sitting room looked really beautifully at the moment. There was a fire burnt in the fire place, but the Christmas tree lights were shinning brightly. Jim and his parents singing and dancing happily. ＼ 动词形（语态） _______ lights 名词数 _____________ 还要注意形和副 beautiful ____ _________ and burning 动词形（非谓语） 连词须关注 ∨ were 动词形(时态） 2019/8/11 21

Summary： Don't forget! 五改原则 四不改原则 忠实于原文原则 （不可改变原文的原意） 1. 单词拼写不改 . 2. 一对一原则（一错一词） 3. 错误以改动最少为原则 4. 虚词以添加或者删除为原则 5. 实词以改变形式为原则 1.    单词拼写不改 . 2.    大小写不改 . 3.    词序不改 . 4.    标点符号不改 . Don't forget!

Do not make the same mistakes twice! Homework: Finish the exercise on the paper. Do not make the same mistakes twice!

2013.辽宁卷 When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father with the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle. friends one which for I the when gave later