成都市高三英语分科会观摩课 书面表达 玉林中学英语教研组：徐淼

Types of Writing 1.Description;（叙事文） 2.Narration;(记叙文） (1)Description of a person;(2)Description of a place; (3)Description of an object;(4)Description of a scene 2.Narration;(记叙文） 3.Exposition;(说明文） Process and relations; 4.Argumentation;(议论文）

Skills of writing 1.Use proper phrases,idioms,familiar words. 2.Use basic structures: S + L + P S + VI S + VT +O S + VT +IO +DO S + VT + O + OC 3.Use some possible complex sentences such as attributive clauses and adverbial clauses.The whole passage is well and beautifully organized. ,

4. Use some transitional words between the sentences such as besides,for one thing,at least, in my personal opinion,etc. 5.Try to use different ways to show the same meaning to make the passage more beautiful and effective. 6.Try to write the passage in enough words as are required. 7.Your handwriting is beautiful,clear and the paper is tidy.

The Standards Of Grading A Writing 1.Cover the main points. 2.Use as much vocabulary as possible and grammar structures. 3.The ability of expressing languages and using some complex structures 4.Use some conjunctions between the sentences efficiently. 5.The whole passage is well organized .

今日悉尼 悉尼是澳大利亚重要的购物中心。请你根据下列表格的提示写一篇有关悉尼的短文。 位 置 澳大利亚的东南海岸 面 积 35059平方英里 位 置 澳大利亚的东南海岸 面 积 35059平方英里 人 口 300多万 娱乐场所 饭馆，剧院，夜总会，公园，海滩等。 风 景 港口，悉尼歌剧院，港口大桥。 普及运动 冲浪，游泳，澳大利亚人擅长游泳。

1）Sydney , is the main shopping and traveling center of Australia. 1。 悉尼是澳大利亚重要的购物中心，位于澳大利亚的东海岸。 1）Sydney , is the main shopping and traveling center of Australia. on the southeast /which lies , 2)Sydney , lies on the southeast. the important shopping and tourist center in Australia, 3)On the southeast coast of Australia, there is /lies a beautiful city ,the important shopping and traveling center of the country. 4)Sydney is the important shopping and tourist center of Australia, it lies on the southeast coast of Australia

miles and a Population of more than three million. has /covers 面积：35059平方英里。人口： 300多万。 1)It an area of 35,059 square miles and a Population of more than three million. has /covers a population of three million. /have 2)It covers an area of 35,059 square miles With a population of three million. 3)It is 35,059 square miles in area /large and there is a population of three million.

娱乐场所：饭馆，剧院，夜总会,公园，海滩 风景区： 港口，悉尼歌剧院，港口大桥。 1）There are many places for entertain- ment such as restaurants, theatres,night-clubs，parks and beaches, and there are also some beautiful views such as the Harbor, the Opera House and the Harbor Bridge. 2)As the most famous city in Australia, Sydney is known for its beautiful sights and all kinds of Places for entertainment,such as……

2)Surfing and swimming are common sp- 普及运动：冲浪，游泳。澳洲人擅长游泳。 1As is known to us all, Australians like surfing and swimming, and they are especially good at swimming. /It is well known that 2)Surfing and swimming are common sp- orts in Sydney. However,they are better at swimming than surfing.

结束语：悉尼是一个奇妙而值得参观的地方。 1） Sydney is a wonderful city that is worth visiting. In a word, 2)Such is Sydney,a city that attracts tourists from all over the world. 3)Sydney is a good place for us to visit.

On the southeast coast of Australia, there lies a beautiful city ---Sydney. It is one of the most important shopping and touring centers in Australia, with an area of 35,059 square miles and a population of over 3 million. As the most famous city in Australia, Sydney is known for its beautiful sights and all kinds of places for entertainments. The Sydney Opera House which stands on the coast looks like a white flower. The Harbor and the Harbor bridge are also very famous. Besides these,you can enjoy yourselves at theaters,night-clubs,parks,

and beaches. Surfing and swimming are the most popular sports in Sydney. Australians are very good at swimming. If you go to Sydney, you will find beautiful sights, good service, and friendly people there.Sydney is a wonderful city worth visiting.

Homework:Please write a composition “The City of Beijing Today ” 人口； 北京的一些著名的 所处的地理位置； 旅游圣地； 北京为2008年的奥运会所 做的一些准备；