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My hobby Swimming Which is your favorite hobby? Mountain-climbing 1 Mountain-climbing 2 Surfing the internet 3

My hobby When? Why? What? … swimming when I was 10 years old 2 Why? 3 swimming good for my health keep good shape My hobby What? 1 … 4

Some tips What exactly your hobby is? When and how you became interested  in this hobby? Why do you enjoy your hobby?

My favourite hobby is swimming. I liked it when I was 6 years old. The reason why I’m interested in it is that it is not only good for my health, but also can help me to keep good shape.

My hobby My hobby is collecting stamps（集邮）. There are many stamps in my room. I started collecting stamps when I was 12. I enjoy collecting stamps because I can learn many things from these stamps. They are colorful and beautiful. After school I usually go to the post office and there are many people there.

My hobby Different people have different hobbies. My hobby is listening to English music.Because I think listening to music is a good way to relax.I often listen to country music in my free time ,it not only makes me feel relax but also happy.And I think it can make me remember a lot of English words ，it can help me improve my English，So listening to English music became my hobby. Hobby is real important for everyone，it makes our life colorful.

My hobby Different people have different hobbies . My hobby is to listen to music. When I am in trouble, music can make me happy. When I am very tired , it can make me comfortable . Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it's good for my health. So I like listening to music.

My Free Time 课余时光是我们忙碌学习生活的调节剂。你是如何支配自己的闲暇时间的呢？看电视、做运动、听音乐、阅读书报、郊游、帮父母做家务，还是…  请你以"My Free Time"为题，描述一下自己的课余生活。  要求: 1.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数80词左右。 2.不得写出自己和学校的真实名称。 My Free Time   I have a lot of things to do in my free time. Usually I take exercise after school.I like basketball and volleyball very much.Sports help me to keep healthy and study better.I often watch TV or do some reading in the evening.Sometimes I listen to music for a while.I find it a good way to relax myself.Of course, I help my parents with the housework at the weekends. I clean the house, wash clothes and learn cooking.Sometimes I go on a field trip with my friends.We always have a good time! 

在一次英语班会上，老师请同学们以Proud of My School 请根据下面所给的提示写一篇发言稿。内容包括学校面貌，你在校的活动，以及你喜欢学校的原因。 提示词：big\small, trees, play games, family, be kind to, be\feel proud of

Proud of My School My school is very big with several tall buildings. We have a beautiful playground with lots of trees around it. There are many flowers everywhere. My busy school life always makes me happy. I have lots of fun at school. I not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes. I play games and do lots of sports, like playing basketball, football and table tennis. I love my school because it’s like a big family. The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart.

现分析该篇作文如下： 　　第一步：会意。所谓会意，就是要考生进行细心地审题。1）“Z”就是重要性。根据内容要点的提示，知道这篇文章的主题是自信。这篇文章可以以自信的重要性开始，强调某物的重要性，2 ）“B ”就是并列。用两至三个并列点来阐述文章的主题。内容提示中的“自信给人勇气尝试，使人成功” 和“梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难”阐述了自信的两个好处 give sb the courage to try new things and achieve success和keep us going on in the face of difficult 。两个并列点可以用what’s more, in addition 或besides 连接。（3）“Q” 就是强调。用一个总结句，对上述的并列点进行强调。此题中的“没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功”就是对以上的内容进行总结和强调，可以用双重否定句来表达“No one can achieve success without them .”（4）“G”就是感悟。第四步：感悟。感悟部分，主观性较强，考生可以根据自己对自信的理解写出一点即可，也可以运用平时积累的一些关于自信的英语格言。如You have to believe in yourself. That’s the secret of success.或 Confidence doesn't need any specific reason. If you're alive, you should feel 100 percent confident.

第四步：检查。文章写完以后，并不一定是完工了，考生还需要对时态，词性，以及主谓一致问题进行检查，看是否存在错误。 　第二步：定态。通过审题，知道这篇文章是以自信为主题的议论文，不涉及事情的发展顺序，因此用简单的一般现在时就可以了。 　　第三步：润体。如何才能让文章出彩，绚丽，就需要考生从三个方面出发。首先是词汇。要能够将题中的重要词汇写出来，如：重要性important、勇气courage、困难difficulty 、获得成功achieve success等。其次是短语的恰当使用，如在解释“自信就是要相信自己”的时候，“相信自己”应为believe in oneself ；“给人勇气”可以翻为give one courage ；“尝试”可以是try new things .最后是句型，在这篇文章中宾语从句的使用会使文章增色不少。如，“这首歌告诉我们……”可以翻为This song tells us that…。表语从句的使用同样可以使文章更加简洁，如，“梦想和自信使人勇于面对困难”，可以翻为：Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties 。双重否定表示肯定，用双重否定句可以增加文章的气势， “没有梦想和自信，不会获得成功”就可以用一个双重否定句来描述：No one can achieve success without them。 　　第四步：检查。文章写完以后，并不一定是完工了，考生还需要对时态，词性，以及主谓一致问题进行检查，看是否存在错误。　　

　　I Believe I can Fly 　　I Believe I Can Fly is a nice song by R.Kelly. This song tells us that confidence is very important. When a person has confidence, he believes in himself. He believes that he can and will succeed, and this gives him the courage to try new things. Dreams and confidence are what keep us going on in the face of difficulties. No one can achieve success without them. If you believe you can fly, then you can really fly someday. 　　I think I will never give up whenever I meet any difficulties .I’ll remember confidence is the promise for achieving success.

The Spring Festival Spring Festival is the most importantand popular festival in China. Before Spring Festival ,the people usually clean and decorate their houses. And they go to buy some flowers. Children like the festival very much ,because they can have delicious food and wear new clothes .They can also get some money from their parents. This money is given to children for good luck . During Spring Festival , People often get together and have a big meal. Some people eat dumplings for dinner. I love Spring Festival .

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